Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Superb chap yarr

Thanks a lot

really happy to see a strong and lovable Ashu specially in front of Mallika I m glad u liked it
Some of the scene which are really irritating to me in real ktlk you had brought forward in a positive concept
That was one of my aims when i started this ff. yippee i succeeded.

Superb👏 waiting for the next update 👏👏

Thank you so much - will try
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Hi

just now got free frm xam. Will read and reply. Waise how many part series have u planned?

Hi how were your exms dear?
Ok, aaj ka din aaram karlo, kal nahi chhodungi... next update saare reviews ke baad hi milega...
so u will be responsible for delaying my next chapter - ab aur koi bahana nahi chalega. Next chap jo bhi maangega, usko aapke paas bhej doongi aapka sar khaane.
@bold - Donno, maybe 12-13 or less. uske baad college khul jaayegi. phir toh wont even login till may. Waise hi this ff has turned out longer than what i had planned
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aarundhati

👏Luved the chap...wonderful...found the SR detailing very very cute in the earlier chap...this chap was great too...wow...Nids pregnant...?great going yaar...Ashu will be on cloud nine after knowing abt. it...that was wonderful...plz...plz...plz...give the next update fast...!😊😊😊

Thank you so much i am glad u liked it
@green - is it that obvious?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley


Hi how were your exms dear?
Ok, aaj ka din aaram karlo, kal nahi chhodungi... next update saare reviews ke baad hi milega...
so u will be responsible for delaying my next chapter - ab aur koi bahana nahi chalega. Next chap jo bhi maangega, usko aapke paas bhej doongi aapka sar khaane.
@bold - Donno, maybe 12-13 or less. uske baad college khul jaayegi. phirtoh wont even login till may.Waise hi this ff has turned out longer than whati had planned


ya ya kal pakka. Actually didnt sleep since 2 days. Review ke liye each and every part ko dissect karna padega na isliye. Ok me off to sleep now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pl. try na dear... pl. please
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Another nice update, loved the confrontation of ashni with mallika, the way ashu clearly spoke out his feelings, how he should not keep mallika in false hopes, asking for his picture as a gift to Nidhi as he is only hers even in thoughts. The way ashu sternly told Nidhi not to wear the watch, everything is fabulous. From chap 7 your twist would start, wondering what it is and eagerly awaiting. Nidhi at the gynaec office? I have a feeling you have something more in store than the obvious. Its not preg I guess. I hope there is no trouble brewing leading to Nidhi becoming a mother. Do update soon.

Thanks a lot dear...
@bold, i m glad u liked the smalll details
@green, sochte rahiye...the major twist in ch-8 probably - The AshNi-Mal confro got much much longer than expected, so the twist pushed to chapter 8, most probably
@orange - come on what else could i have planned?
Sure, wil try asap,
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Shirly that was one fab update. Ktlk revisited in a better way or best way.

Ashu is really a better husband here.He has now learned to maintain perfect balance btn friendship and mge.
Thanks a lot Dr. Vidya. @bold, oh thank you so so much.
very effectively took care of the gift part ...very tactful.
I m so glad...i had to think very hard for that scene - somehow, wanted mallika to be forced to relinquish even all thoughts of Ashu to Nidhi. so that snap giving was figurative rather than literal, i mean, m sure mallu must be having a lot of pics of him with her.
i liked the part where Ashni want Arman to settle down with his long lost love. in the serial Arman has been forgotten. in true friendship you must care for each other. now it is Ashu's turn to help Arman in getting his love back.
Yes, i too want that...wanted them to do something for rohan too but unfortunately dont have the time for that as have to finish this ff soon, before my college begins.
👏 you deserve it.

Thank you so very much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Hi shirley
I had thot dat i'll give ur review today itself, but too tired to do it right now, will give it 2mrw for sure. Pakka.

Hi Deepali, okay dear W8ing,
just remember my warning that i gave in response to r earlier comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok tell me u want review of this one first or starting frm chap 1 ?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Hey sweety...😛

Hey Fatima, I m not calling u sweetie becoz woh toh aap ke fiance ka haq hai...lolzzz
Just saw that u r recently engaged... heartiest congrats.
Btw, i just could not stop laughing on seeing the emoticons on the comment, I donno anything abt emotis, can't use them, but really enjoy seeing them
Thanku for making us relive the fantastic journey of our ktlk in such a superb way....
Am loving this alot n enjoing every bit of it...
thanks a million. I m glad u r enjoying it,
Mallika's self thought was so well written👏...somehow i do feel sorry for her at times...waiting for 12 long years isnt easy...but then nobody had asked her to wait...😉
i am glad u could emphatise with her - its just that she can't actually help herself.
Mallika-Rohan comparison was a nice take...i really want nidhi to reveal ashu the truth about rohan...lets c how u proceed with this...😛
lets see,
Loved Ashu being apprehensive regarding their visit to mallika's place...His concern for nidhi is too sweet...😳
thanks - yes almost losing her once has made him extra sensitive to her
The whole scene at mallika's place was written very very nicely...
It should have been there in the show...
@italics - i wish it had been shown.
Ashu keeping a balance between love n friendship...Making everything crystal clear about the status of two women in his life was AWESOME....
I m glad i could portray ashu that way.
Mallika with her taunts n cheap moves...irritating...😡😡😡
Yes, but as i said earlier, she simply can't help it.
Ashu wholeheartedly supporting nidhi was so adorable...😳
thank u dear
"kya baat hai, mujhe fitness aur youth ka certificate diya jaa raha hai. I guess, I really impressed you last night!" ...☺️
blush blush
"main agar kisi ke khayalo me bhi reh sakta hoon toh sirf aur sirf Nidhi ke."..
I m glad - u r probably the only one who pointed this out, I was anxiously waiting forr this (sorry if anyone has pointed it out and i missed it)
Am glad that u are skipping all those parts that have been dealt in detail in the show like the weeding n jungle moon...😃
Yes, y repeat all that
So the chai scene is part of this story too😉...but it ended how it should have ended...loved nidhi saying...Lekin main kya karoon Ashutosh, mere husband mujhe raat ko itna thaka dete hain ki🤣...then ashu bringing coffee for her for just so sweet...😳😳
Frankly the way ashu makes her eat food at night in the show was funny - i mean, he was behaving like a parent, who had get his kid to eat food somehow
Will be waiting to read how arman-tamana story progresses...am glad ashni got the hint about their relationship...👏
It will be difficult to unite them.
Then the cruel cliffhanger...Preliminary reports mai kya hai?????😲😲😲
Jaldi say next update day do plzzz...
@orange -- sure, do khokhe bhijwa do aur apna update le jao😉😉😉
Hats off to u sweety for writing so so well...
Ashni are tooo good...am loving then more n more...
U are AWESOME...

Thank you so much dear, i m truly humbled

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