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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3 The day passes and After a month Ashu called Nidhi, Ashutosh : Hello,Nidhi.Kaisee ho? Nidhi : hello,main theek hoo,tum kaise ho AShutosh? padhai kaise chal rahi hai? And everything adjustable? do you like that place? Ashutosh : Nidhi,woh sab chhodo,maine sirf tumhari aawaz sunaneke liye phone kiya hai.I am missing you badly.Zindagi jaise dhadkan se judi hoti hai waise main tumse judna chahata hoo.Bus yeh do saal khatam aur main fir se tumhare pas. Mera intejaar karna aur mera bharosa karna. Nidhi : Ashutosh,tumhare jane ke baad muze ehsaas hua hai ki main bhi tumhe bahoot miss karti hoo,bahoot jayada.Ma aur baba ke jane ke baad meri zindagi ruk jaati,agar tum muze nahi sambhalte toh.Bus tum jaldi se wapis aa jao,main besabri se tumhara intejaar kar rahi hoo.Bus yeh do saal kut jaye. Ashutosh : Nidhi, maine humare liye bahoot se sapne sajaye hai,bus us sapno ki raah dekhana,tum sapne dekhna main woh pura karoonga.Aur haan! rangnath kaisa hai? Nidhi : woh bhi Manali gaya hua hai,aage ki padhai ke liye,vacation me aata jaata rahega,uska phone aaya tha. Ashutosh : waise woh tumhe phone kyon karega?anji ko hi karega na? paji.chalo Nidhi,main rakhata hoo.meri raah dekhna,missing you.Love you.bye. Nidhi : bye.ab hum net ke jariye milenge,video conference se. bye. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ After 1 and half year Ashutosh trying to call nidhi,but her phone switched off. He tried to call Dr Vadhera.but he refused to give an answer. He called Anji. Ashutosh," hey little sister,kaise hai meri behena? Anji," main theek hoo,bhaiya." First time Ashutosh found her voice shaking and with weaping.' Ashutosh: Anji,kya hua tum ro kyon rahi ho? sab theek hai na? Rangnath ne to pareshan nahi kiya? aawoonga toh khabar loonga uski." Anji," Nahi bhaiya,woh to kabhi pareshan nahi karte.Par bhaiya muze aapse jaroori baat karni hai." She was trying to say anything but Kapil solanki took a phone from her," Ashutosh, Do Mahine ke baad Anji ki shadi hai dr Rangnath ke saath,tum chhooti leke aa jana,theek hai," No Excuse.It is final. Ashutosh ko woh baat chhubh gi,use kuchh bura hone ka andesha tha,lekin fir bhi woh sochta tha ki sab theek hoga.Nidhi ka phone kyon nahi lag raha hai? Anji kya baat karna chahti hai? baba ne shaadi kyon jaldi fix ki Anji ki? woh to Rangnath ko bilkul pasand nahi karte the? fir achanak? Ashutosh ko woh do mahine bahoot bahri lage,woh har baar Nidhi ke bareme sochta," muze Nidhi ne phone kyon nahi kiya? kya hua hoga? kuchh bura toh nahi hua uske saath?Anji dari dari kyon lagti thi? phone pe bhi aajkal baat nahi karti achhe se? baba hardam beechme aa jate hai,ma bhi pareshan lagti hai.Video chatting off karke rakha hai,yeh ho kya raha hai? After eagerly waitng for two months he arrived at Lucknow Airport.He found that city very unknown.The streets with puzzled,everything was so empty,without emotions. He found that city dead without Nidhi,his only Nidhi. He first went to Dr Vadhera. He was in his cabin. Ashutosah," may i come in sir? Vadhera," ya,come in Ashutosh.How are you? how you came here? and why now my boy? why now? evrything finished. Ashutosh shocked to here these question attacks.He wanted to ask but Dr Vadhera," please,don't ask me anything.I couldn't answer.Please spare me.Ask better to your father.He can explain you better,go main go to him,and ask him. He litterally started shaking with something wrong signed,his sixth sense was telling that his nidhi is out from his life.She left him alone.Or something happened to her.He rushed to the Solanki house. The house was witnesses the grand wedding,the whole house was shining with lighting. One grand wedding will taking place there. He went straight to Anji's room.He saw his little sister.And shocked to see her.She was looking like dead body.Without expression.He lost her smilling and laughing sister. Usne apni na\nhi chehkti chidiya kho di thi.Anji bilkul bejaan lag rahi thi.Shyama Aunty ne Ashutosh ko dekha aur muiskurane ki koshish ki,par naakaam.Kuchh kehena chahti thi,lekin Kapil Solanki beechme aa gaye," Chalo,baarat aane ka samay ho gaya hai,Anji ko jaldi le aao,Jaldi bidai karni hai uski.Ashutosh,tu bhi jaldi taiyaar ho jao. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ashutosh wanted answers,a lot of answers.So he went to his father," baba,yeh sab kya hai? Anji ki shadi,itni jaldi me? aur Nidhi kahaa hai baba?where is she? Kapil Solanki," Stop Ashutosh,us badchalan ka naam nahi lena mere saamne.Woh humare ghar ke khandaan ke kabil nahi hai.Tumhare kabil nahi hai.Woh beach. Shyama Aunty shouted," chup ho jaiye aap-,ek bholi bhali ladki pe iljaam lagate sharam nahi aati hai aapko? us jaisee ladki ko aap na jane kya kya kahe jaa rahe hai? tb kya hua jab apnee beti ke liye uske pair pakde the aapne? uske madad ki bheek maangi thi aapne?Beta,Nidhi toh devi hai. Main batati hoo,Nidhi kahaa hai?aur us haal me kyon hai? -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Next chap will be my last update,you will get answers of your all questions.Comments please whether you liked or not.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks vidisha updated 2 and 3 rd too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mithalee

hey completely different hain jaldi jaldi continue... 😊

just updated 2 and and 3rd chap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Hi Alka
Nice to see a ff in a totally different concept
I like very much that you have chosen Anji as the sister of Ashu it's very sweet .I can dream how Ashu will love her sister so sweet Alka Brilliant idea 👏
Please update the next
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Thanks Ariyadasa,just updated 2 and and 3rd chap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg alka update asap was reading and thinking ki ak saath end mein commeny karungi ab plz jaldi se last part chahiye..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the 4th part pl update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Last part : So here is the climax of the story: Shyama anty," suno Ashutosh,Nidhi ne kuchh galat nahikiya tha.Usne apni Anji ki zindagi aur uske bache ki jaan bachai. Ashutosh," kyaa? Anji ka bachaa? rangnath se? Shyama : Nahi Ashutosh, tumhare baba ke dushman ka beta tha Jagan.Tere papa ne us ke ghar par income ki red karwai,aur police Jagan ke papa ko pakad ke le gai.Uska gussa tha use. Anji driver ke saath ghar pe aa rahi thi,sham ke waqt usne Highway par gunde bhej ke driver ki pitai karwai,use adhmua kar diya aur Wohi jungle me Anji ka rape kiya.Aur fir besharmi se ghar chhodne bhi aaya Anji ko. Tere baba ne badnaamee ke dar se aur apnee zoothi shaan ke liye kuchh nahi kiya.Maine Anji ko sambhala,lekin beta do mahine ke baad hume pata chalaki Anji pet se hai.Hum kya karte? Hum Nidhi ke pas gaye to janata hai usne kya kahaa," Ashutosh ki behen meri bhi kuchh lagti hai.Iska Abortion toh risky hai,lekin agar yeh is bache ko janam dena chahe to main us bache ko apnaoongi.Paloongi aur bada karoongi.Ashutosh se pyar karti hoo,itna toh uske ghar ki aur parivaar ki ijaat ke liye kar hi sakti hoo.Anji,tum fikar mat karna.Ab hum dono Lucknow ke bahar ghar me rahenge,jab tak tum bacha deliver nahi karti ho,main tumhe apne ghar me har treatment doongi.Anty,anji ki fikar na kare,woh meri jimmedaari hai. Pure nau mahine Nidhi ne Anji aur uske pet ke bache ki dekhbhaaal ki aur fir Ek din Anji ne ek pari jaisee beti ko janam diya.Tere baba ne Anji ke bache ko marneki use Anath ashram bhejneki bahoot mumkin koshish ki,Nidhi ko jaan se maarneki dhamki bhi di lekin woh nahi dari.Lekin us bachi ke liye usne Lucknow chhodneka faisla kiya. Ashutosh surprised to hear all this.Maa,ab Nidhi kahaa hai pata hai aapko?" Shyama," haan! Dr Vadhera ne use Kanpur ke hospital me naukari dilwai hai,unhe sab pata hai nidhi ke bareme.Yeh raha Nidhi ka address. Ashutosh turned towards the door,and he saw Rangnath standing at the door. He listened everything.Ashutosh," Suno,Rangnath? " Rangnath," kuchhnahi sunana muze.Anji kahaa hai? where is Anji? and he ran to Anji's room. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rangnath entered in Anji's room and locked the door.Rangnath," Anji,Tumne muze yeh sab pehele kyon nahi bataya? kya muzpar bharosa nahi tha tumhe? Pyaar karte the na hum ekdusrese?fir?Jo kuchh bhi hua usme tumhari to koi galati bhi nahi thai.Main ek doctor hoo.Majboori aur Aaiyashi me faraq samazta hoo.Ek mauka deke to dekhti. Anji: Sorry, Rangnath.Main dar gai thi.Lekin ab tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga muze manjoor hoga.Tell me. Rangnath: itna sab hone ke baad faisala janaa hai tumhe.Jaldi hall me chalo.Shadi ka mandap humara intejaar kar raha hai,lekin usse pehele ek kaam karna baaki hai. Anji," kya? Rangnath," us farishte ko bulana toh baki hai. Anji," aap ko kya lagta hai,bhaiya itna sab kuchh jananeke baad Nidhi ko lene nahi gaye honge? woh toh pahuch bhi gaye honge. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Nidhi 6 mahine ke bache ko lekar apne aangan me khel rahi thi.Ashutosh wahaa pahuch gaya.Nidhi ko dekha aur usne aawaaj di," Kab tak yehi rahogi? saajan ke ghar nahi jana kya? Nidhi : Ashutosh,Tum? kya keh rahe ho? and she runs towards him and Ashutosh gave her tight hug and said," aisee ek beti muze bhi chahiye.Meri beti bilkul apnee maa jaisee hogi.Komal,khubsurat aur bilkul meri Angel Nidhi jaisee. Nidhi : main angel nahi hoo,main to apne Ashutosh ki nidhi hooo. Ashutosh," to chalo,apne Ashutosh ke saath,uske ghar.Us ghar ko apna ghar banane.Jahaa tumhare liye palake bichhaye tumharee sasuma,nanad aur honewale nandoi wait kar rahe hai.Aur sabse jyada wait kar raha hai tumhara saiya. Kuchh to hai jaroor dil mera kitna majboor,yeh dil tere bina kuchh samaze na.Ab us mandap me do shadiya hogi. Ashutosh pushed her toward him and said," I love you,Nidhi.More than my life. Comments please,whether you liked or not
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Again a new concept. U r too good alkaji. Both the chapters were really good. Looking forward to the nxt update.

thanks deepali posted last chap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Superb Alka
What a brilliant chap 👏
I like the way you describe the Bond between Ashu and Nidhi
The way you build up the Story line of the concept in each para was superb 👍🏼
Dying to see the next chap🥱

thanks ariya posted 3rd and last chap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepali1772

Jaldi Jaldi continue please...

deepaliupdated 3rd and last part

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