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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Haai... That was superb...! Par why do I feel, Nidhi overreacted... One thing that is called modesty, was missing in her behaviour due to her burning fury...

Ailaa... Ashuji ne saare flowers ka bouquet banwa liya, ke unki madam ko kaunse pasand aaye...

Isshh! Ashuji strangely wants Nidhi to old their children too.. How cute...

So next is manaaoing session... How cute... Par madam maanengi ke nahi, thats a million dollar question...

Chalo, next must b BTOOMH, uske baad ye... Hai na? Jaldi update karna...

Love ya...



Nidhi may have over-reacted but then everyone do when they are just an inch away from there aim...
she was disappointed and sorrowful
haha...bouquet...u will see😆😆
madam abhi gussay main hai...shant tau hum kar lain gay😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: oaz30

Haaai perfect start to my day



shari dear...ye koi comment nahin tha :(
compliment k liye thanku k is ka update made ur day😃...but mera comment😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

written beautifully... i really missed this update..

so Nidhi is still angry.. it was nice to read Ashu's teenage sort of nervous ness.. Gosh.. he was checking himself in his car mirror and dbting his decision to buy Nidhi flowers.. 😆... and i luved the way he waited impatiently for Nidhi to appear.. awww..!
Nidhi was totally stumped wen she saw Ashu with flowers in the end.. 😆
wud luv to read her shocked reactions to Ashu's such unexpected gesture.. 😆😆😆..
Bring it soon! will b waiiiting!



thanku so much manisha
ashu is very different from what he is in the show...n so is nidhi...
haha...she was stumped but she is going to hold her mind... :P

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Ashu cannot be annoyed at Ranga for not opening the door fast...this is his house not hospital...😆

Getting flowers for Nidhi???😳 I was thinking how will he give to Nidhi? He cannot take them to Ranga's house and give to Nidhi...😛
Thinking Nidhi with their kids already???😛
Nidhi left the pakodas in her fury? Ashu got them??
Finally he managed to give the flowers? I wish Ranga sees...he gets the shock of his life...🤣
When are you giving us the next update?



haha...but if he can't be quick in home, how can he be quick in hospital😆😆 thats what ashu thinks😉
haha...he is a smart chap...he know his goals...
pakodas tau kissi ko nahi milay :P ranji khudi khayein gay...haha😆😆😉
Ranga khud bed pe lait jaye ga ashu ko romance karta dekh...i am gonna save his life😉😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Loved Ashu's pov..he was all captivated in her charm, his thoughts, desperateness..was so very cute yaar, but Nidhi and her anger, oops burning anger..shuru hone se pehle hi he has so much to face..me pretty excited to see how he is gonna manofy her..yep Nidhi is being too childish, ab Ashu can't have his completely..poor her..waiting what will b Nidhi's reaction, how her anger will covert into like and then love..and the most Ashu's take on everything of his love


Ashu-Ranga scenes were fun to read



thanku so much bhanuvika...
everything gonna happen in parts...n i m sure u guys will love that...
i do have all the story planned in my mind, with few scenes excatly how i want to write...likin doosre scenes sochnay main time lagta hai...😆😆
tau late ho jati hoon...but update comin😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

hey! Ayush seems to be sooo sweet and cudly...just as sweet as massi.

Ashu is daring a lot by offering flowers to angry Nidhi...hope they are not thrown in dust been.
nice ,enjoyed reading it dear.



ayush is a chubby kid, unlike his mom..haha
yup...maasi's chamcha he is
nah, dust bin main nahi jayein gay

hope u will like further too😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aryanpp

Interesting chapter,... but waiting tooo long for the next chapter... is nail biting...? please give early updates...



i m trying dear but with two ff's...its a lil hard for me...
or agar ff's na likhon tau phr koi OS ka idea mind main aa jata hai...hehe
will try my best to give quick updates
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanku so much shreya😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

I am very pleased that you finally updated and as always it was awesome and beautifuly written...

Gosh! Here we get to see new teenage Ashu who was impatiently waiting for one glimpse of his source of attraction...love the way u write how Ashu buy flowers for her, checked himself before going in, his inner emotions when he heard her sweet voice amazing...

Nidhi is burning with anger just seeing him whoa take it easy girl...

Ashu's last gesture of apologising would melt anyone easily so keep it up man...
Love the chapter...



thanku so much pooja
glad to know that this fic means somehow to u guys
i m glad u liked those scenes...i was trying to get into his skin...haha
ashu's gesture gonna melt her or not...you just have to see😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saibanu

Beautiful Chapter Ana ❤️


Ashu is so restless to see her , Gosh!! I can clearly picture him pacing up and down with that bunch of flowers ..Cho cute 😳

He want to do everything to please her, to get her attention ...I am loving this AShu ❤️

"I wanted to see her taking care of my children further on"...yes This surely a killer thought 😉

Loved sweet Maasi here, surely Nidhi is gonna be wonderful mother 😉

"Umm...HI" my head turn 90 degree to look at the person I was least expecting to see now, standing there with a smile and holding a huge bouquet in his hands with a huge card attached on it, saying SORRY...

I know Nidhi ka saara gussa pigal gaya hoga ...I am so waiting for next chapter , Plesae dont make us wait for long Ana ...I am loving this SS so so much

Wonderfully , beautifully written 👏




haha..thanku so much sai
so glad that u can visualize that scene...😳😳
this ashu is not what we see in the serial...he is a totally different man...
aww...thanku for likin the last scene...
i m trying my best to not let u guys wait alot...but somehow i get late...
will try😊

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