DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
great...DB is already in full steam...

The moving in part was an interesting idea

Thank you for updating😳

Thanx Vidishaa😳

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Binat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Do we really have to wait till after Diwali for the next chapter?😭😭

This was simply brilliant. Love the emotional convos between CV and Nidhi. So glad that Ashu's family is accepting nidhi with open arms. I did wonder if the 2 families would move in together. So glad they did. Please make CV live for a while. It will be wonderful to see the interaction between Ashu and CV and also let CV see the support Ashu gives Nidhi.

Thank you for writing this for us. We appreciate it. 👏

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Binat
Do we really have to wait till after Diwali for the next chapter?😭😭

This was simply brilliant. Love the emotional convos between CV and Nidhi. So glad that Ashu's family is accepting nidhi with open arms. I did wonder if the 2 families would move in together. So glad they did. Please make CV live for a while. It will be wonderful to see the interaction between Ashu and CV and also let CV see the support Ashu gives Nidhi.

Thank you for writing this for us. We appreciate it. 👏

Thanx for the awesome write up Binat. I am glad that you liked it.

Actually I have been so harassed for time that I was not sure how this would come out.

I would love to make Her father live longer, but how? If he doesn't want treatment there is only so much that medicine can do, in a case such as his. But let me see what I can do.😃

And Thanks for liking the moving in together part. That was a highlight for me too. The next chap will see Nidhi's growing admiration for her husband. The way Ashutosh will help take care of her father will be a turning point for her, towards him. And CV had to be a part of the family other wise the whole purpose of the contract would be negated.

If you notice that in this FF, I have Nidhi as the original owner of THE HOUSE. And Ashutosh and his Baba are moving in with her.😆

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Binat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Libra

Thanx for the awesome write up Binat. I am glad that you liked it.
Actually I have been so harassed for time that I was not sure how this would come out.
I would love to make Her father live longer, but how? If he doesn't want treatment there is only so much that medicine can do, in a case such as his. But let me see what I can do.😃
And Thanks for liking the moving in together part. That was a highlight for me too. The next chap will see Nidhi's growing admiration for her husband. The way Ashutosh will help take care of her father will be a turning point for her, towards him. And CV had to be a part of the family other wise the whole purpose of the contract would be negated.
If you notice that in this FF, I have Nidhi as the original owner of THE HOUSE. And Ashutosh and his Baba are moving in with her.😆

Yes - I noticed that Ashu and family have moved into nidhi's home. When I had imagined this happening I had thought they would move Into Ashu's. like this twist.

Maybe Ashu can get CV to try some aggressive treatment? There are many trials for pancreatic cancer. Maybe you can try that angle? Just to give him a longer life. Anyways don't listen to me do what you have planned.

With another storm headed our ways - it would be cool if you gave us another surprise 😉

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Suvika.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

loved the update Anu...

Nidhi wants the baby by normal means...not AIH huh!!! cool...will look fwd to the consummation scene then...achche se likhna ok? no putting a song and skipping the typing of the scene...

Just then Ashutosh interrupted her, as he came forward and put an arm around her shoulder to pull her closer to his side, and extended the other hand towards her father.

--Actually Sir, I am a little more than just her Dean and Superior at the hospital. I am also the man who is in love with your daughter, and with your permission would consider it an honor if she would marry me.

and he says he doesn't know how to act like a man in love.. this is one cool approach...i am already loving this guy..he even made sure her career is not disrupted..seriously WOW!!...and judging from his other reactions in this chap...yeh banda toh gaya!! he won't have any problem getting his baby the normal way..

arre waah...yahaan CV agreed to the wedding so fast huh!! cool!!

now waiting for Anji's TALK with Ashu...

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rajanigandha26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

It's going to be more n more
interesting. Hum toh fida ho gaye.
Loving this contract. Love u for this mesmerizing concept.
❤️ ❤️

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: turags
loved the update Anu...

Nidhi wants the baby by normal means...not AIH huh!!! cool...will look fwd to the consummation scene then...achche se likhna ok? no putting a song and skipping the typing of the scene...

Just then Ashutosh interrupted her, as he came forward and put an arm around her shoulder to pull her closer to his side, and extended the other hand towards her father.
--Actually Sir, I am a little more than just her Dean and Superior at the hospital. I am also the man who is in love with your daughter, and with your permission would consider it an honor if she would marry me.

and he says he doesn't know how to act like a man in love.. this is one cool approach...i am already loving this guy..he even made sure her career is not disrupted..seriously WOW!!...and judging from his other reactions in this chap...yeh banda toh gaya!! he won't have any problem getting his baby the normal way..

arre waah...yahaan CV agreed to the wedding so fast huh!! cool!!

now waiting for Anji's TALK with Ashu...

Thanx Suji😃

Yaar, I am not even thin king of the consummation scene yet. Abhi toh they have to get to know one another first. Besides I am getting tired of coming up with those scenes. Maybe I can do a metaphor or something. Like two flowers coming together, or two birds flying away together, or something like in the oldmoves.

And, yes Ashutosh says he does not, but since he ad been in love before, he knows exactly how to act. Although is it really an act? I wonder?😉

Baby toh normal way hi hoga Ji. I wouln't and couldn't have it otherwise.😃

CV is dying toh wedding toh unke samne hona, toh banta hain na Boss?😊

Yes the Anji and Ashutosh talk. well I am going to have to come up with something new there. Dekho I will see kya kar sakti hoon.

Thanks for the wonderful review.😃

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26
It's going to be more n more
interesting. Hum toh fida ho gaye.
Loving this contract. Love u for this mesmerizing concept.
❤️ ❤️

Thanks Rajani😃

Yaar main toh sirf likh rahi hoon, Idea toh Doc Malvika ka tha. She deserves the credit.😃

But thanks for liking this update. I am glad that no one is missing the romance so far. Because abhi toh romance buildup hone ka background bana rahi hoon.

Appreciate your lovely compliment though.😳