This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144

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Ana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: hilarious44
OH yes.😉..
U have competition here...🤣

Good luck for next time...😆😆😆

😭😭😭
u are scaring me fatema...😉
me poor soul😒

😆...

Waisay i dont have much chance to beat you coz i am at hospital when Anu posts her chapters...

So dont be scared...🤣

thats a sigh of relief😉😆😆😆
no no...you all are welcome to comment first yaar...
its just that i check updates the first thing in morning...so thats why caught hold of them early...😊

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: oaz30
Awww u feel for ashu here. The great doc is about to eat humble pie. And nids is not gone make things easy. Khushi u have to love the kiddo what elders could not do she did it. Hheehe rangu does deserve a reward tooo good.but you know what I would love u depicting ashu"s etat d"ame , his inner thoughts as he reflect on what he has heard.

Thank you Shari.😃

I will be doing that at the start of the next chap, when he is driving home.😳

I know I am being particularly cruel to Ashutosh.

Lets see maybe I feel different next week when I write the update. may I can let up a

little😉

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: vidyasabde
I loved the progress of the story. smooth flow of the story as always Anuji.

AHSH- KHUSHI bonding was great to read. I also liked Ranji caring for Nidhi and khushi. their concern for all three of them was touching.

ASH NIDHI KO AP KAB MILWAOGE.? waiting for next part pl.

Thank You Vidhya😃

Thank you for liking MY Khushi. Somehow girls are always more attached to their Dads.

And these two will have a beautiful beautiful relationship, in the chaps to come.

Also will be putting in a BIG BIG BIG twist soon.

Don't know in the next or maybe the one after that, chap.

there is milna and then there is MILNA. 😉 depends on what u mean.😳

either way. abhi time hai.

update sometime next week.😃

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: oaz30
As much as I want these two to be together I want ashu to have to work through her defences give her back that feeling of certainity b4 her fuLly acknowleging him. Sorry for typing mistakes am on phone

Yes Shari

I agree, I want him to win her back again too. But only by getting past and eliminating the pain.

otherwise kya fayada.

They love each other, but as I have said many times

Love is not always enough.

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: turags
😡 Ashu ko baat pata chal gaya?? itni jaldi??😡 i wanted him to have a few more nightmares...😆

Rangu baba toh bada smart nikla yaar...and i think i am in love with this Khushi...cute kid...❤️

and i am loving the way Ashu is falling in love with Khushi...this is much much much much better than the one we are forced to watch in the TV...i could see the kid asleep on his chest and her drool wetting his shirt...you have really managed to tap into Ashu's fatherhood bang on...👏

great chap...⭐️

Hey Turags😃

Don't be upset. Pataa chalne se kuch nahin hota. Ashutosh will be finding that out the hard way.

Ans some nightmares, for him, are just beginning.😉

Abhi toh suffer karna baaki hai.😆

I love Rangas character, so gave him an Anji a nice big part in this FF. I am glad you like that part.

I wish we could see something ike this on the show also,

instead we have a child that is not even that cute to start with, and is made to seem even more unlikable due to the twisted wrtitngs of a mad man.🤢

Thanx for the compliments.

really appreciate it.😳

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hilarious44

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: cool_SK

thats a sigh of relief😉😆😆😆
no no...you all are welcome to comment first yaar...
its just that i check updates the first thing in morning...so thats why caught hold of them early...😊

😆😆😆...

Ya i can understand that...i logged in about 15 times Since morning to check for the update while at work😆😆😆...caught it just when it was posted...n then my net connection😡...was so irritated...

Hehehehe...we are two crazy fans haan...😉😆

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: Ena292
Ur khushi was so cute here. Nd she is ashu's replika!! Wow!
Ashu ko sab pata chal hi gaya at least... Ap thoda aur nehi likh sakte thein! Abto bus ashu ka ek hi kam-- nidhi ko manao! Bcs iss bar wo milenge this time forever! 😉

I am glad that u have connected the title with my story. Yes this time when they

do get together, it will be forever.😳

Nidhi ko manana itna aasaan nahin hoga. Doctor sahib will have

to work very hard.😆

Sweety If I wrote any longer chaps, Mera saara ka saara tel nikal jayega.😆

But thnx for liking the story. it makes my work worth it.😳

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: myera
I luv this tiny khushi hehe
itz amazing truly amazing..!

Thanx Myera.😃

Thats why I am writing such a huge part for this child. I wanted to

show her as everything we wanted the Khushi in the show to be, but is not.

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Ana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: hilarious44

😆😆😆...

Ya i can understand that...i logged in about 15 times Since morning to check for the update while at work😆😆😆...caught it just when it was posted...n then my net connection😡...was so irritated...

Hehehehe...we are two crazy fans haan...😉😆

we surly are...I am getting so crazy to read ashni fics...
n if we get a hold of a superb writer...what else needed

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: bc123456
What a beauty of an update just got time to read it , usually through the phone don't have time to open my pappy hence my typing goes a lil haywire , but I freak out on your writing your flow , emotions and command over the language is wonderful, loved this Ff with ashu coming back won't be easy but khushi is on his side, what a lovely child unlike the one we see on ktlk, please update sooner, we all wait anxiously great going

Thank you Doc.😃

For these awesome compiments.

these provide the much needed encouragement

for me to keep going, and keep on trying

to make everyone happy with each subsequent chap.😃

I am glad you are liking my Khushi.

I love her too. This is the way Little kids should be.

Yes they can be manipulative, but only in an innocent way

not like the writer is giving us on the show.🤢