Our KTLK - Kashmakash Chap 17 (pg 136) Updated

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ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Thanks for the PM...awesome update!!!

I loved to read familiar scenes thru a new perspective(like how Ashu's baba is sick n not ashu..n Nidhi taking over the kitchen)

👏👏 super job!!

cant wait for more!

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aru29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

SUPER DUPER chapter sujatha ji...really really loved the interactions between ashu and nidhi...u are doing a superb awesome wonderfully brilliant job with this FF

THANKS for such a beautiful chapter

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ssktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

very sweet update. Nidhi is already started sensing her feelings for Ashu. Now can't wait to see Ashu's reactions, waise aag to udhar bhi lag chuki hai, bas garmi pahunche ki der hai 😉

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: ruchshah
Thanks for the PM...awesome update!!!
you are welcome!! 😊
I loved to read familiar scenes thru a new perspective(like how Ashu's baba is sick n not ashu..n Nidhi taking over the kitchen)
👏👏 super job!!

cant wait for more!

started chap 5 already...will try to post it over the weekend!!

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fanktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

For churning out another beauty!!

I love the hospital backdrop and how you use it to the fullest... total paisa vasool!! 👍🏼👍🏼

Nidhi is back... and with a bang... loved to see her bubbly and carefree self again.

Ashu is already smitten by Nidhi the way he kept looking for her at the wedding...

- Nidhi responsible young intern full of life

- Professional willing to leave her friend's wedding to attend the patient.

- Sense of humour -- at least you didn't call Priyanka during pheras...

- Even colleagues noticing Ashu is making an exception and attending this function.

- Ashu the sensitive and concerned ... he is such a sweetheart for informing CV and DB.

- Nidhi also liking old songs... after all our generation listens to oldies and also to rock and pop... The same disco going crowd also goes to attend carnatic music concerts... so 👍🏼👍🏼

Ashu doesn't even realize but he is thrilled that Nidhi is in his house cooking... no wonder he is whistling in delight!! 😆😆

And our man actually agrees to sing with her... WOW... Love is definitely in the air!!

And obviously HK and BB have already sensed what Ashu hasn't wonder how you will use it to take it forward... (They can arm twist Ashu...) The timeline to show gradual friendship and increase in comfort level... like Nidhi assumes that Ashu will take her to the hospital... (Not all bosses offer lifts)

Ashu covering her with a blanket, removing her shoes...shows that the comfort level actually exists...

and when Nidhi enters the kitchen... Ashu doesn't even bat an eyelid... he is not obviously not surprised

Song Selection... Yeh ratein... one of my all time favourites ..

Glad our Rasam is a winner and most people have loved it...

(Remember the lunch I mentioned to you last week... rasam was a sold out!! )

Edited by fanktlk - 13 years ago

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: aru29
SUPER DUPER chapter sujatha ji...really really loved the interactions between ashu and nidhi...u are doing a superb awesome wonderfully brilliant job with this FF

THANKS for such a beautiful chapter

you are welcome aru..

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: ssktlk
very sweet update. Nidhi is already started sensing her feelings for Ashu. Now can't wait to see Ashu's reactions, waise aag to udhar bhi lag chuki hai, bas garmi pahunche ki der hai 😉

thank you Sanya...waise aap ka chap kidhar hainji??

AShu ko garmi bhi pahunch gayi...no doubt about that...but his POV will be put in front of you after a few more chapters..

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Loved it :) BTW the songs are my fav's too :)

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: fanktlk
For churning out another beauty!!

i thought you would be busy with Ganesh pooja and was willing to wait for another couple of days before hounding you for the review..😉 so thank you for taking the time and giving such a detailed comment.

I love the hospital backdrop and how you use it to the fullest... total paisa vasool!! 👍🏼👍🏼

😆

- Nidhi also liking old songs... after all our generation listens to oldies and also to rock and pop... The same disco going crowd also goes to attend carnatic music concerts... so 👍🏼👍🏼

i am personally crazy about old songs and some of my younger cousins are worse..so..😃

Ashu doesn't even realize but he is thrilled that Nidhi is in his house cooking... no wonder he is whistling in delight!! 😆😆

And our man actually agrees to sing with her... WOW... Love is definitely in the air!!

And obviously HK and BB have already sensed what Ashu hasn't wonder how you will use it to take it forward... (They can arm twist Ashu...)

no arm twisting...at least not much..but BB will be the first to sense Ashu's feelings...

The timeline to show gradual friendship and increase in comfort level... like Nidhi assumes that Ashu will take her to the hospital... (Not all bosses offer lifts)
Ashu covering her with a blanket, removing her shoes...shows that the comfort level actually exists...

and when Nidhi enters the kitchen... Ashu doesn't even bat an eyelid... he is not obviously not surprised

he is not "surprised" more like "bemused"...😉

Song Selection... Yeh ratein... one of my all time favourites ..

mine too...but to select that particular song, i listened to about 30 oldies...🤓

Glad our Rasam is a winner and most people have loved it...
(Remember the lunch I mentioned to you last week... rasam was a sold out!! )

👍🏼

you are welcome