Future Track-OS Part-5 page 19(updated) - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: karajekar


superb update rabz 😊


pls continue soon ,i think romance is on a way 😳



sonali

Thanks Sonali...Glad u liked it...Yup Romance coming soon..😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh it was such a wonderful update👏👏...loved it...plzzz continue soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Very well written rabzy...your way of writing keep me attached unless its finished... keep it up ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nidhirohan

please cont divya...hope cvs had cont that track like this only then it will be far more better then what we r seeing rightnow!!!!love ur each and every word...please write more dear dont stop...keep cont it and🤗🤗

Thanks NidhiRohan for liking it so much...Awww..🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Oh it was such a wonderful update👏👏...loved it...plzzz continue soon😳

Thanks Hilarious...Aww m so touched...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rjlibra92


Very well written rabzy...your way of writing keep me attached unless its finished... keep it up ...

Thanks Dear...I m overwhelmed...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

when you will be continuing

will be waiting





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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: karajekar


when you will be continuing

will be waiting





sonali

Awww Dear tomorrow or Day after tomorrow for sure..🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

"Arre nahi apne ghar mein..Baba aur HK ko kahin bahar bhej dunga kisi bahane se'"

"Aapke mood bahut khatarnaak lag rahein hai'."'Nidhi usse door jaate huye bolti hai'
Ashu usse apni or khinch leta hai..uske baalon ko pakad ke bolta hai'.."haan wo to hai'..Ab ghar chalo ..jaldi.."

"intzaar kijiye itni bechaini theek nahi'"

Ashu usse naqli gussa dikhata hai'

"main darr gayi aapse..Ha ha"

"Nidhi ab chalo bhi...apne ghar please "..Ashu achanak se emotional ho jata hai...
Nidhi uska haath pakad leti hai.."chaliye Baba DB ka aashirbaad le kar chalte hain.."

CB aur DB bechaini se dono ka intzaar kar rahe they...Nidhi ka hansta chehra dekh ke dono ki saans mein saans aati hai...

DB-"daaktar ab sab theek hai na...main abhi jaa kar bajrang bali ki puja karti hoon phir se"

Nidhi-DB abhi mujhe mere ghar jana hai..aap puja karti rehna...

DB-arre beta aaj Vijay dashmi hai..Dusshera tum log hamare saath manao na...

Nidhi-DB mujhe mere ghar abhi jana hai...wahin manaungi Dusshera apne Ram ke sath...
wo Dr Ashutosh ko pyaar se dekhti hai..

DB-ajeeb ladki hai ye Nidhi..

CB-Buaa aap usse jane dijiye na...Jao Tum dono hamesha khush raho..

Nidhi-Ashu Alvida lete hain aur car mein beth ke ghar ke liye nikalne wale hote hain...Tabhi CS daud ke aata hai...

CS-Raaste mein jagah jagah Raavan dahan ho raha tha jiski wajah se bahut jaam hai...

.Ashu-Nidhi Pareshaan ho jaate hai..Raasta khulne ki bahut der tak koi umeed nahi thi...

Nidhi-Chaliye paidal jaate hai ghar..car yahi chor ke..

Ashu-kya bol rahi ho...Paidl jaogi itni door...

N-haan nahi chal sakte kya aap...main to ja sakti hoon aap dekh lijiye...
wo Ashu ko upar se niche tak dekh ke giggle karti hai...Ashu ko taav aa jata hai..

A-haan chalo main kyu nahi chal sakta...

N-to phir chaliye..

AN paidal hi MM ke liye nikal padte hai...Raavan dahan shaam ko honi thi..par jagah jagah logon ka hujum abhi se ikattha tha...politicians bhasan de rahey they...

AN ko inn sab ki koi fikr nahi thi...aaj ka din unke liye jyada shubh tha sirf isliye ki wo dono saath they..Dono ek dusre ka haath pakad ke chal rahey they...

Nidhi ko Ashu kabhi apni aur..kabhi dusri taraf khinch raha tha..taki bheed se Nidhi ko dhakka na lagey...

chalta rahe insan to manzil to aa hi jaati hai...AN ghar pahunch gaye...Nidhi ghar ko bahar se dekhte rahi..

Ashu ki saansein phul rahi thi..thak kar wo chaknachur ho gaya tha...

Ashu ne darwaze par dastak di..HK ne darwaza khola...

Nidhi ko dekh ke HK bahut jyada prasann huye...Bade daktar sahab dekhiye Nidhi beti aayi hai..

BB jaldi se aate hai.."Hiraman meri beti aayi hai itne dino ke baad ..kya shubh ghadi hai ye...aaj vijaydashmi ka din..."

A-Baba pehle humeh ghar mein o aane dijiye..

Nidhi aage badh ke tab tak BB aur HK ka pair chuti hai...

BB-arre beta aao na..aao dono andar ..kya huaa Ashu itna pasine pasine kyu ho...?

A-Baba pura rasta block hai paidal aaye hai dono...

BB-ohh main aur Hiraman to local raavan dahan jo hone wala hai..usme jaa rahein hai...tum log araam karo...Hiraman inke liye kuchh khane ka bana do...

Nidhi-nahi baba aap jaiye main bana lungi..Main nahi thaki hoon...
wo phir Ashu ki taraf dekhti hai..teekhi nazron se aur giggle karti hai..

Ashu ko phir taav aa jata hai...

A-Baba main bhi bilkul nahi thaka hoon..aap aur HK jaiye main sab dekh lunga..
Nidhi ko ghurte huye bolta hai..

BB-theek hai to phir hum dono nikalte hai...

Nidhi aur Ashu fresh ho kar apne room mein hai...Ashu Bahut thaka huya hai aur so jana chahta hai...Wo bed par baitha hai...

Nidhi...Aa kar uske paas uska chasmah utarti hai..."aap kitne thake huye hain...Ghar kyu aana chahte they jaldi..jaah.."..phir zor se hansti hai...aur apne taraf ke bed par jaa ke baith jaati hai..

Ashu uske taraf khisak ke jaata hai.."Nidhi mera chasmah do aur main bilkul nahi thaka hoon..samjhi"

"jhuthe hain aap"

"Achchaaa.."..Ashu usse back hugg karta hai...

N-"Thake to hain aap...Jaiye so jaiye.."..uski taraf palat ke dekhti hai..."waise bhi aap thakenge..lajimi hai"...Ashu ko dekhti hai der tak..ajeeb nazron se..Ashu samajhta hai...

A-ji nahi Nidhi ji main bilkul nahi thaka..aur mera thakna lajimi nahi hai..samjhinnn...

N-achcha achcha ap bol dijiye aur main maan loon kyu hain na...

A-ji nahi..aapko evidence deta hoon...

Ashu stares at Nidhi lips...Nidhi react karti hai jaise usse koi farak nahi para...

Ashu apne ek arm ko Nidhi ke around rakh ke usse apni aur khinchta hai..Nidhi uske lappy mein gitri hai...Dheere dheere apna chehra ..Nidhi ke chehre ke paas le jata hai...

Nidhi ki aankhein bandh ho jaati hai..Ashu Ka chehra Nidhi ke chehre ke bilkul paas hai..Nidhi can feel Ashus breath on her face...Nidhi ki saansein tez tez chalne lagti hai...Wo Ashu ke shirt ko kas ke pakad leti hai...Heartbeat ki raftaar bahut fast thi ...

Ashu Brushes his lips with Nidhis lips aur chehra hata leta hai...Nidhi ki ankhein jhatke se khul jaati hai...Wo gusse se Ashu ko dekhti hai...

Ashu ab usse Shararat bhari nazron se dekhta hai...Nidhi Ashu ke lappy se uthne wali rehti hai ki...Ashu usse uthne nahi deta...Wo usse bahon mein bhar leta hai..Dono ek dusre mein kho jaate hai...

Dono ke beech ek reshe ki bhi duri nahi hoti...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u rabzy...bhalo hoyeche re...

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