FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64) - Page 31

In all the FFs so far, you never got chance to give this strong text ... The writer in you has come straight today... with these lines... Really great lines...

Mish - love the flow in your stories.

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

superb one mish👏

Originally posted by: DikshaBaluja

Good evening Mish...Thanks for the wonderful update...firsty talking about Chapter 10...It was very nice...Nidhi's reaction was quite natural...if you know you're being loved and you are yourself confident about your feelings..you would definitely like to reciprocate those feelings to one you love...and thinking so..Nidhi just rushed towards Ashu and hugged him...and then whatever happened was also quite realistic...Ashu's reasons were quite valid.despite the fact that he loves her from the college days..It will take time for him to forget about the norms of the society and accept that when love is there..age doesnt matter... and...When the heart and the mind connect, when two people make each other happy, everything else pales, becomes unimportant...but it was really really very nice and caring of Ashu that he asked Nidhi to forget about the morning talk and then hugged her to give her the most needed support...Its very painful to know that your only support..your lifeline (in this case its Nidhi's mom )...will not be there for you..!!...Liked that Ashu and Nidhi both thought that atleast their friendship should survive and everything should be back to normal...when you said that Ashu and Nidhi will be together at Ashu's place..I thought there would be some closeness..like Nidhi sleeping on Ashu's shoulder...Im a bit too dreamy..what to do...but when I read today's chapter..I was more than happy that its really realistic, wonderful, heart-touching and true to life...I admire Ashu's thinking that the way a lover can support..a friend, mentor or boss cant...wonder when Ashu will implement this thinking...when will he reciprocate Nidhi's love for him...when will he love her back...The realism in todays' update..rather I'd say the practical aspect of life really touched me..I was quite overwhelmed...Aisa hota hai " koi dil ke bahut karib hota ha lekin phir bhi thoda door hota hai"...Life is such...you have to be content with what you have...At times..there are such phases of life..when only you are there for yourself...anyone else cant help you out...and maybe Nidhi is going through same phase...jo bhi hai, jaisa bhi hai...you just have to face it all alone...Really liked Ashu and Nandini's conversation...I think it was earlier a general discussion but then Nandini said it for Nidhi's sake...ofcourse.she would want her daughter to be loved back...and then it was like Nidhi saying " Hume tumse mohobat hai..jatana bhi nhi aata "...Poor Nidhi..she's so helpless.wonder when Ashu will start loving her back...liked their conversation on movies, films etc...was quite lively..and finally Nidhi gave a genuine smile..what else could have Ashu asked for..I hope Ashu's emotions for Nidhi will let him forget about the norms of the society...and then Nidhi will get the support she needs...I think this song will be perfect on this situation of Ashu and Nidhi...Hum aapke hain kaun...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QyJoeduGpJI...awesome update..keep up the good job...eagerly waiting for next update...!!

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hey Sharmishtha
Nice update...
I m feeling really bad for nidhi...plz koi ashu ko samzao...nidhi deserve to be happy...
Hope for some miracle...

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

Another Fantastic One.I liked the way Ashu holded Nidhi's hand and asked"Why she is crying".I feel he has started to think positively about this relation.Am i right?