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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

lovly OS...it was so cute and just made my day... :))
really like the way you ended the scene with so much dignity...n love
Nidhi and Ashu looked(in my imagination) so adorable

do write more

luv ya
ana

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ApoorvaFan

@ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mudraswathi
Very good one AF...Got lunch break just now...immediately sneaked see what is happening in the KTLK and at IF...this OS is very beautiful...Hope the KTLK team would recreate this sort of magical world for us which they have promised at the initial stages...

My main interest stayed with various shades of love (beautifully expressed in words by Lizzzie some time ago) ...love and affection between friends, subtle love by the Ashutosh, the loving character Nidhi.. Affection by Baba...and last but not the least, Love expressed by Mallika (which led her to end her life even)...

I expect many more such OS from you...

Thank you Mudra... You have inspired me ... I will always remember that your words have given me the push to write these kinds of OS...

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ApoorvaFan

@ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: cool_SK
lovly OS...it was so cute and just made my day... :))
really like the way you ended the scene with so much dignity...n love
Nidhi and Ashu looked(in my imagination) so adorable

do write more

luv ya
ana

Thank you Ana. Getting appreciation from you means alot... You are such a wonderful writer...

Will surely try to write more ...

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I am eating up all my words...I am not bothered by the BD business...etc etc...
I was simply awed by MB and KK together today...But did I see MB's ill health in his face?
Even KK looked tiresome...

I want to see her in that floating white gown again...

Edited by mudraswathi - 13 years ago

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deepa

@jayanti_dj

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awsum OS...

loved it...it seemed such a perfect ending to a perfect but incomplete conversation...

u completed it so beautifully...thanks AF.

wish they show this in d show...especially the way d show is goin now,yeh scene to banta hai..

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ApoorvaFan

@ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: mudraswathi
I am eating up all my words...I am not bothered by the BD business...etc etc...
I was simply awed by MB and KK together today...But did I see MB's ill health in his face?
Even KK looked tiresome...

I want to see her in that floating white gown again...

We all are dreamland today... I also felt MB's face was not having the glow it had in the previous episode at the V-day bash... He is strained...

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

AF gorgeousss writing... 👏

Perfect scenario.. narration.. and awesome caps..😳

ur such a creative writer.. looking forward to reading more such OS from u..

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ApoorvaFan

@ApoorvaFan

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: deepa_jd
awsum OS...
loved it...it seemed such a perfect ending to a perfect but incomplete conversation...

u completed it so beautifully...thanks AF.

wish they show this in d show...especially the way d show is goin now,yeh scene to banta hai..

Deepa, Thank You...

I am waiting for this scene and I am sure this will surely come one day or other... Without Ashu completing these words... The chai is incomplete...

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ApoorvaFan

@ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
AF gorgeousss writing... 👏
Perfect scenario.. narration.. and awesome caps..😳

ur such a creative writer.. looking forward to reading more such OS from u..

Thank you Tanu... You all are encouraging me so I will be troubling you guys with more write ups...

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