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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: KBfanNo1
Pls cont soon

yeah will update.. bt wont b writing over the weekend.. so will need to wait till Monday.. wen i will give it some final touches..😳

a little more patience please.. promise it wud b worth it!😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Jst went down the memory lane..

re-read all the previous chapters.. reached thr convention romance part I chapter..

and i mst say i m luv with all my characters all over again! Please pardon my gloating.. i cant help it!😆

Besides my all time Fav Ashu-Nidhi chemistry which peeked after

Chapter 7: Fainting!, the nxt fav is till now.. Ashu-Col. Verma.. luved their conversations..👏 no dbt the ladies here r falling hard for my Ashu!!😆 its not jst romance tht he excels!😳

nxt fav obviously is Angie-Nidhi... very very heartwarming and true f'ship..

nxt comes Ashu-Armaan.. thr f'ship is again very deep... tho i wud luv to again explore tht soon... luved Armu's entry in Chapter 32 : Hum-Tum..

thn Nidhi-baba r'ship.. although i try to underestimate thr bond.. bt wen i look back i realize thy share a realy nice father-daughter r'ship.. Col. verma always in contest with Ashu for her!😆

aaah.. i luved all the gifts tht had given to each other.. Ashu gifting Nidhi a steth on her first very day at KAH!👏 Nidhi gifting him a pair of golden gloves with best neurosurgeon written over it.. to bring him out of his despair state.. 👏

The little prince tht Nidhi had given to her baba and the little steth keychain tht baba had gifter her!so cute!

and the past of Ashu-Mallu is for me is really interesting .. mallu isnt a dark character in my story.. she had jst been a bitter wounded woman and the way Nidhi has helped her overcome the worst phase of her life.. i heart Nidhi.. she is a darling.. and as Nidhi has promised Ashu..i will make Mallu reappear in her new avataar.. ! last v heard of her was tht Ashu had rebuffed her severely.. in

Chapter 39: The nite with u… now lets c wat happens of her..😳

and reading their last seperation.. Anjani.. i know y u luv their seperation.. it brings out the depth and intensity of their luv...😳

**sigh** guess time to go back complete the rest of the chapter.. before i begin on the nxt chapter again!😳

enjoy the weekend... after i finish my chapter i will c if i can come up with an interesting teaser.. without revealing much!😆

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

Oh! i forgot to mention Nidhi-Armu f'ship thts jst building up! And thn thrs Angie-Ashu chemistry too!

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

well,, one thing tht i want to know thts bothering me since few chapters now..

wat cud b ideal length of a chapter.. i mean i have restricted myself for the last two chapters well..

bt i want to know.. wether u r all okay with long chapters.. i know certain chapters had been jst tooo long.. bt is it really worth it.. reading tht is to say? so tht v both can save our precious time.. u reading and me writing..

put ur thots very frankly friends!

p.s: a writer anyways has to b fewer with words and larger with essence..😆 and i know i need more words to express!😆😆😆

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#905

I wouldn't mind lengthy chapters than u have already written...becoz I just love it dear...so me too like u...I mean u need more words to express and I more words to feel and enjoy ur writing a bit more...so don't even think about curtailing them at least from my pov...rest up to u..how u feel comfortable, just do it

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#906

M so sorry manisha di... I had read both of ur chaps... But cudnt comment on it... main hamesha aapka update aise time par padh paati thi, jab main yaa toh brush kar rahi hoti thi( u know, brush in one hand n moby in the other...😆) ya fir breakfast banate samay ya fir preparing my tea... n uske baad mujhe kahi na kahi bhaagna padta tha, n cudnt reply... sowwie...😭... But, I really loved ur updates... The swim suit thing, I thot, ab ye kya hoga? n u really relly surprised me there... confidentially toh kuch bhi kar sakte hain... 😆... N this new, one, again a hit...! really u r awesome manisha di... really! I mean it...😊

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#907

No probs wid the length...

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#908

Please do not reduce the length of chapters...WE LOVE LONG CHAPTERS...

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ZedZee

@ZedZee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#909

achiever wen are you updating the next chapter???

do it soon naaa plzzz

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Pooja

@Pooja_0910

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#910

Originally posted by: achiever
well,, one thing tht i want to know thts bothering me since few chapters now..

wat cud b ideal length of a chapter.. i mean i have restricted myself for the last two chapters well..

bt i want to know.. wether u r all okay with long chapters.. i know certain chapters had been jst tooo long.. bt is it really worth it.. reading tht is to say? so tht v both can save our precious time.. u reading and me writing..

put ur thots very frankly friends!

p.s: a writer anyways has to b fewer with words and larger with essence..😆 and i know i need more words to express!😆😆😆

Do you know na how much i like long chapters so please dont reduce its length:-)