Chap 2:The U-turned LOVE[pt5(B)/pg15] SD and SR ;P - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all three parts together, you write very well, all the emotions portrayed so well. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all , I hope you are doing fine and enjoyed the wedding...Weddings are such a masti time...Wish good health for both of you and your laptop...😆
And obviously we liked the update as usual...Loved this sophisticated , suave, handsome, a man with manners Ashu celebrating his love with his girl with Wine...👍🏼, and not ignoring , not avoiding the physical need , loved how he moved behind her to took her in his arms...😍
Sharing his childhood story, a sad part of his life, which he cant forget however he tries , is so heart wrenching...😭 😭, and Nidhi crying hearing his hurt, his sorrow means they are now one soul, ( hopefully one body too, very soon ☺️ )...
For me the best part was to see both of them in Mirror...Both of them feeling complete with each other realizing how incomlete they were individually...And the unique style to propose...👏
One question : Why Ashu had decorated his ( soon to be their ) bedroom like that ?
Only because Nidhi came to the house for the first time ? Or he wanted to do something else ???? 😍 ☺️ 😍 ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Ana, just read Part 3...wowww what a cute proposal...was superb...great thinking and writing...keep writing...will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar great update.
The emotions and expression well written.
yaar cool_sk, really you have given a wonderful and fantastic fanfic.
the concept was totally different amd unthinkable, but you justified it with your wonderful imazination.
Thanks .😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey anna will we have an update today pretty please
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vasanthi16

Don't know how i missed the update...loved the romantic Ashu trying to propose...beautiful...👏👍🏼


Hope u r keeping fine now...

Waiting for ur next update ...




hey vasanthi dear
Romantic ashu just trying his best to show himself romantic😳
ya, i m gud now...just a lil cough left behind but its all ok

luv ya
ana😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: oaz30

First hope you are better


anna i could hate you for such a short update but i love you... awww this is awesome... loved yeah wala ashu... haila... the way the emotions are depicted are superb... looking forward for more but please yaar dont make us wait long

Shari



shari dear, i m better yara...thanx for the concern😳
i know it was short n i wasn't doing well in writing either...but i m glad u still liked the boring part...i m glad you could feel that emotions depiction was right...

P.S: My brother just got out so i m here, banging his laptop😆😆😆

luv yaa
ana😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alu5123

Read all three parts together, you write very well, all the emotions portrayed so well. Waiting for the next part.



thanx dear...😳 glad you liked my way of writing
i m just gonna start writing the next part...😳

luv ya
ana😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhalobasa

First of all , I hope you are doing fine and enjoyed the wedding...Weddings are such a masti time...Wish good health for both of you and your laptop...😆


ya...i loved the wedding...and especially when u just come so far to attend the wedding, the treatment you get was overwhelmed😆😆😉

And obviously we liked the update as usual...Loved this sophisticated , suave, handsome, a man with manners Ashu celebrating his love with his girl with Wine...👍🏼, and not ignoring , not avoiding the physical need , loved how he moved behind her to took her in his arms...😍

Oh, i so imagined the scene in my mind...n i was like😳😳...GOD...ashu is trying to remove all the distance bw him n his Nidhi😃
Sharing his childhood story, a sad part of his life, which he cant forget however he tries , is so heart wrenching...😭 😭, and Nidhi crying hearing his hurt, his sorrow means they are now one soul, ( hopefully one body too, very soon ☺️ )...

Oh you naughty naughty girl...😈...waise i too want the same😆...they soon will be DO NAAM AIK JAAN☺️
For me the best part was to see both of them in Mirror...Both of them feeling complete with each other realizing how incomlete they were individually...And the unique style to propose...👏

I m glad you liked that...i was thinking before that ashu should already write down that on mirror but then this mirror scene would have been missed...n i so wanted that scene😳...for the first time i myself realize how romantic it can be to just look into the mirror...with your love one standing beside (HOPE my would be read all this🤣) Am i sounding despo to get married😕😆😆

One question : Why Ashu had decorated his ( soon to be their ) bedroom like that ?
Only because Nidhi came to the house for the first time ? Or he wanted to do something else ???? 😍 ☺️ 😍 ☺️
Hooo...🤣 ur question literally cracked me down in the middle of the night as i read that😆😆...my brother was looking at me like i have gone mad...🤪...well ryt now it was to bring the essence of romance...but later on...who knows😆😆

thanku for the lovly comments dear...

loved them n u
ana😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anu13

Hi Ana, just read Part 3...wowww what a cute proposal...was superb...great thinking and writing...keep writing...will be waiting



thanx anu 😃 glad u liked this part n the proposal though i really think it could have been better...
but i m trying my best to give you guys a clear view of my imagination

luv ya
ana😃

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