#14 June Confession Special - OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: Ria_Ca

Beautiful..perfect Anj..luved it 😃

Originally posted by: TwinFlames

Nice story😳

Originally posted by: gmgi

Beautifully written Anju👏

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Anjali. ⭐️

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

🤪 🥳 ❤️

Wow. Beautiful. 👏

Gosh loved each bit of it. 👏

So true 😛 to their character, time, situation, circumstances, emotions. 😊

True to KRPKAB trend, style, emotion, charm n RANG.😉

The whole OS was fully filled with to the point dialogues, which is very hard to maintain. Girl r U for real. So much emotional dialogues. ⭐️

Sonakshi! In saat saalon ne mujhe bohot hi acche se samjha diya hai ki main tumhare bina kuch nahi hun. Tum ho, to main hun. 👏 👏

After the above dialogue till the end it was bang on.

So much that I could literally visualize each n everything Infront of my eyes.

N the Ex-Gkb n uske red k totte to unke rang jaise hi ude. U managed so perfectly to keep up their style n rang also. 😆

Itna perfection kyu lati ho. Kon lata hai itna perfection. 😳

Kuch aur dialogue Jo mujhe ache lage wo yaha likhne wali thi. Par Meri awesome n super active memory U know. 😉

Isiliye wapas nahi dekha.

Ya firse mention nahi kiya. 😆

Aur haan. Jaate jaate keh rahi Hoon.

Don't expect any Thank-You or sorry from me.

Na hi aisa mind blowing, beautiful, brilliant n awesome OS dene k liye. Na hi PM k liye.

Aur na hi late, Oops last hone k liye. 😉 🤣

Ab next ready hai kya. 😉

Bohot ho gaya na. 😲

Keep the next ready ASAP. 😛

N m ready for next OS. 😆

Anjali 🤗 🤗

Sorry for late reply dear...aapko pata hai nai, main thoda busy thi...issiliye late ho gayi 😔

My comments are in green😳

Ishwari Niwas is fully decorated with beautiful flowers, lights n all. Afterall this is the occasion of Mr. Dev Dixit's engagement ceremony. But no one looks happy other than ex GKB & her red. Finally their plan to separate Devakshi is going to succeed.

Not so soon Ex GKB... ...I'm sure Anjali aisa nahi hone degi😳Apni story mein toh bilkul bhi nahi 😉

Rest of all the members look tensed about what will happen? Will Sonakshi confess her feelings? Will the engagement happen?

Confusion hi confusion hai bhai 😕

Just then Sonakshi stepped inside Ishwari Niwas wearing a beautiful gown looking like an angel. Dev kept staring at her with her mouth wide open. "How beautiful she is! thought Dev. He couldn't even take off his eyes from her.

Indeed she is beautiful Dev babu 😉...but usse bhi jyaada stubborn hai 😆

Music plays...

Dev & Nisha came forward for dance. Sona felt her heart broken at that time. She could never imagine Dev dancing with someone else other than her. She wanted to go, grab the collar of his shirt & tell him, "Mr. Dev Dixit, how could you give my right to another woman. Only I have the right to dance with you, to be with you & to love you... no one else.

Sirf Sona ka hi nahi...mera dil bhi tut gaya ye dekh ke 🥺...I mean padh ke 😆

But could not as she had decided not to get back to Dev. And she herself had convinced Dev to remarry, to give her place to someone else.

Ex GKB broke the chain of her thoughts & took Sona with her saying "tum meri help karo. Bohot work bacha hai.

Sona kept staring at Dev who was dancing with his new found partner, ex Gkb took her away holding her hand.

Haa...bas yahi karo Sona 😡

Ex Gkb start her blabbering to hurt Sona, "Kitni beautiphul Jodi lag rahi hai na my dear dev aur Nisha ki. Ekdum Ram Seeta jaise. Inko kisi ki black nazar na lag jaaye.

RR 😡

But Sona paid no attention to whatever she was blaberring, as she was lost in her own world. The fear of losing Dev,her first n last love' was making her go weaker.

She just wanted to be alone & cry her heart out.

Mujhe bhi rona aa raha 😭

Elena comes to Sona.

Elena : "Sona! Sagaai ka time ho raha hai, aur tu yahaan kya kar rahi hai? Jaldi aa jaa

Son : " tu chal, main aati hun.

Elena : "Sona! I can understand. Ye sab tere liye kitna difficult hoga, apni nazron ke saamne apne pyaar ko kisi aur ka hote dekhna. Lekin Sona, ye sab abhi bhi khatam ho sakta hai. Tu ek baar Dev bhai ki taraf kadam to badha, wo ye sab rok denge.

Sona : "I am Ok. Ab please tu jaa. Main aa rahi hun.

Miss Bose ka shield bahubali ke kawach se bhi jyaada strong hai😕...tootti hi nahi 😡

Elena goes from there.

In hall, Dev was busy searching for his Sona as he could not see her. Then Sona entered the hall.

Dev smiled looking at her. She too responded with a fake smile. Both of them were just staring into each other's eyes. Their eyes were speaking out all their hidden emotions.

@ bold 😭 😭

Ex Gkb broke their eyelock.

Ex Gkb : "Ab sagaai ka time ho gaya hai. Fasat se rasam starat kar do. And brings a thaal carrying rings.

Rings bhi aa gaye 😲...RR light ki speed se kaam kar rahi hai 😆

Sona had not the courage to see all this Losing Dev for ever', losing her haq on Dev', Losing the right to love him'. She wanted to escape from there.

Her heart was full of pain which she wanted to cry out. So silently she went outside the Ishwari Niwas.

It was raining. It looks like as God also want to cry along with Sona.

Looks like...Rain wala Confession milega 😳

She didn't seem to be affected with rain. Without caring about rain, Sona stepped out. She kept walking. God knows when tears start flowing from her eyes.

The beautiful memories of past, Devakshi dancing in rain, came to her mind. Her lips curved into a smile. The very next moment, her smile vanished when she remembered what she saw a few minutes back. Dev dancing with someone else who is going to become his life partner.

She could not control herself and sat down on floor.

@ bold 😭 😭

There in Ishwari Niwas

Dev was searching for Sonakshi, but she is nowhere.

Ex Gkb noticed this.

Ex Gkb : " Dev beta! Kya idhar-udhar see kar rahe ho. Dekho Nisha tumhara wait kar rahi hai. Use ring wear karwao.

Dev could only say : "Sonakshi

Ex Gkb : "Sonakshi? Dev tumhari engagement Nisha se ho rahi hai. Aur tum Sonakshi ko call kar rahe ho.

Dev : "Sonakshi kahaan hai?

All started looking for Sona. But couldn't find her anywhere in the house.

Dev babu...aapki Sonakshi bahar ro rahi hai aapke liye...Jaldi jao😉

GKB ki english...massallah😆

Asha : "Meri bacchi, pata nahi is waqt uske upar kya guzar rahi hogi? Wo kahaan chali gayi?

DK comes there.

DK : "Sirji, maine madam ko baahar jaate dekha tha thodi der pehle.

Hearing this, Dev ran outside as fast he could to search Sona.

Elena was about to go out. But Asha stopped her.

Asha : "Tu mat jaa. Is waqt un dono ko ek dusre se baat karne ki zaroorat hai.

Humari Asha ki kiran...so understanding😃

Ex Gkb got scared, what if her plan failed?

Ex Gkb : "Excuje me! Aap chahti kya ho? Dev ki sagaai happen ho rahi hai, aur aap chahti hain ki Dev apni sagai leave karke aapki beti ko sambale.

RR 😡

Finally mamaji spoke up

Mamaji : "Radha Rani!apni kaali zuban band rakh. Jo ho raha hai, hone de. Main to bas bhagwaan se yahi praarthna kar sakta hun ki un dono bacchon ki jholi mein khushiyaan bhar de. Abhi Dev jab ghar laute, to apni khushiyon ke saath laute.

Well said Mama ji👏

Ishwari : "Bilkul sahi keh rahe hain bhaiya aap! Main abhi diya jalaake aati hun mandir mein mere bacchon ki khushiyon ke liye.

Meri taraf se bhi jala dijyega Ishu maa😳

Nisha's parents could not make head & tail of what was going on there.

Nisha's mom : "Ye sab kya ho raha hai? Hum log yahaan apni beti ki sagaai ke liye aaye the, ye tamaasha dekhne nahi.

Nisha : "Mom! Main aapko sab samjhaati hun. Main aur Dev sach mein sagaai nahi karne wale the. Ye to bas ek naatak tha Sonakshi ki zuban par uske dil ki baat laane ka.

Dev ne mujhe sab bataaya tha ki wo ab bhi Sonakshi se pyar karte hain, aur Sonakshi bhi unse. Lekin Sonakshi in dono ke rishte ko doosra mauka dene se dar rahi hai, isliye apne dil ki baat nahi sun paa rahi.

To humne bas usko realise karwaane ke liye ye naatak kiya. I am really sorry mom dad.

Liked this part...Nisha is a nice girl, I'm happy ye sab sirf ek naatak tha

Hearing all this Ex Gkb & her red ke tote ud gaye

Ex Gkb : "What?? Ye sab natak tha.

Inke expressions...let me guess 🤣

Ishwari : "Shukriya beta.

Outside Dev was shouting, "Sonakshi! Sonakshi! Kahaan ho tum?

Finally he spotted her sitting on the floor with tears flowing from her eyes, all drenched in rain.

Dev's heart broke into million pieces when he saw Sona like this, totally broken.

He ran towards her, sat next to her.

Dev : "Sonakshi! Pata hai main kitna dar gaya tha jab tum mujhe kaheen nahi mili. But Sona kept mum, her face showing no emotion which made Dev more sad.

Dev again tried to talk to her.

Dev : "Sonakshi! Kuch to bolo. Gussa ho mujhse, to mujhe maaro, daanto mujhe. Main yahi deserve karta hun. Kitna hurt kiya tumhe.

I'm Sorry Sonakshi... I'm really Sorry.

Tum to meri strong Sonakshi ho na.

To which Sona finally responded.

Sona : "Strong! (and laughed sarcastically)... Strong nahi hun, bilkul bhi nahi hun. Par haan, kabhi thi, bahot strong thi, jab hamara pyaar meri taaqat tha,

Lekin aaj to wo pyaar meri sabse badi kamzori ban gaya hai.

Dev & Sona both had tears in their eyes.

Dev : "Sonakshi! Tum kamzor pad gayi ho, to main hun na, tumhe sambhalne ke liye... Humesha.

Sona : "Dev! Tum meri chinta mat karo. Main apne aap ko sambhaal lungi. Maine yahi to seekha hai pichle saat saalon mein. Main ab dard ke saath jeena seekh gayi hun. Tum jaao, sab log tumhara intezaar kar rahe honge. Tum mere chakkar mein apni khushiyon se muh mat modo.

Dev : "Do you really think Sonakshi... ki tumse door jaake mujhe khushiyaan milengi?

Sonakshi, meri saari khushiyan sirf tumse judi hain. Tum meri zindagi mein jab aayi, to tumne mujhe jeena sikhaya, hansna sikhaya.

Aur jab tum chali gayi...

To meri khushiyon ne bhi mujhse muh mod liya.

Pichle saat saal mein maine saans to li, lekin tumhare bina zindagi jeena bhool gaya.

Ab jab tum wapis aayi,

To laga ki mujhe nayi zindagi mil gaya ho. Main fir hansne laga, jeene laga. Sirf aur sirf tumhari wajah se.

Sonakshi! In saat saalon ne mujhe bohot hi acche se samjha diya hai ki main tumhare bina kuch nahi hun. Tum ho, to main hun.

Sona : "lekin mujhe in saat saalon ne poora badal ke rakh diya. Mujhe to in saat saalon ne poori tarah tod diya hai, bas kisi tarah apne parivaar aur Soha ke liye apne aap ko smbhaala hai. Dar lagta hai mujhe, nahi hai himmat pyaar karne ki...

Main ab aur nahi tootna chahti, jaise hun... wesi hi khush hun.

Dev : "Sonakshi! Main tumhare is dard ko bahot acche se samajhta hun. Pehle bhi 2 baar tumhe apni zindagi se nikaal chuka hun, to kese tum mujh par yakeen kar paogi...

Saat saal pehle jo bhi hua hamare beech, I promise aisa kuch nahi hoga. Tum zindagi ke har mode pe mujhe apne saath paogi.

Tumhe jo kuch apne life partner se expect karti ho, I promise main tumhari har expectation pe khara utrunga.

Main bas tumse yahi keh sakta hun, aage tumhari marzi...

Sona kept quiet for few minutes & then finally spoke up

Sona : "Dev! Main is dar se chutkara pana chahti hun, ek baar fir mauka dena chahti hun hamare rishte ko.

Fir se vishwaas karna chahti hun tum par.

kyunki aaj bhi meri har dhadkan mein tum ho...

Tum hi mera pehla aur aakhiri pyar ho.

I LOVE YOU

As soon as Dev heard those 3 magical words, he took Sona into a bone crashing hug.

Both were crying hard as they are trying to flow away their pain, lonlines along with their tears.

Dev : "Sonakshi! Tumhe bas akele yahi kadam badhaana tha meri taraf, ab aage ki poori journey main tumhara haath pakad kar tumhare saath chalunga.

DEVAKSHI promise.

Loved this whole part Anjali❤️ ...so emotional...Beautifully penned 👏

So, Miss. Bose are you ready to live your fairytale with me?

Sona : "Yes"

Hum bhi ready hai to witness your fairytale DevAkshi 😳 😃

Thanks for pm Anjali !!😃

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