Devakshi TS: True Love Never Dies (Final Part- second chance)pg 18

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys!
After getting a wonderful response from you all on my first work...Here I came with my new work...

I hope you all like this...


This story is about a particular scene from yesterday's episode which I wished to be like this...so here are my predictions from the scene when Dev becomes jealous on seeing Sona & Jatin's closeness...

Dev goes to room very jealous & hurt seeing his Sona with someone else...

And start talking to himself "Main kyun usey itni importance de raha hun? Akhir wo meri lagti kya hai??...Kuch bhi to nahin..wo to mujhe chodkar chali gayi thi...ek baar bhi mudkar nahi dekha...main kaisa hun!! Zinda bhi hun yaa nahi (tears start flowing from his eyes)

Mere baare mein sochegi bhi kyun? Usey uska Jatin jo mil gaya tha...to usey kya farak padta hai...

To fir mujhe kyun farak pad raha hai... Main kyun uske baare mein soch rha hun...

Bas Dev! Control...(wiping his tears)
Wo jo bhi kare...mujhe ussey bilkul bhi farak nahi padega...
That's it...

Dr. Sonakshi Bose...is baar main tumhe itni power nahi dunga ki tum fir se meri zindagi ko narak banake chali jaao"

Saying this he was about to go out of room...when Jatin bumped into him...

Actually Jatin had heared every single word...
So now he comes to Dev

Jatin: Main batata hun kyu tumhe itna farak pad raha hai...kyu itna bura lag raha hai. Actually tum na jealous ho rahe ho mujhe Sona ke itne kareeb dekh kar Kyunki tum to aaj bhi Sona se utna hi pyar karte ho...usey kisi or ke sath dekh nahi sakte. Tumhe dard hota hota hai usey kisi or ke sath dekhkar

Dev became furious listening to all this

Dev: Enough! Jatin tum apni bakwaas band karo...tum kuch nahi jaante.

Jatin: Haan...jaise tum to bahut kuch jaante ho. Tum or Sona to sab kuch jaante hue bhi anjaan bane baithe ho...par main tum dono ko aise nahi dekh sakta.
Kisse jhooth bol rahe ho tum dono?! Khud se yaa duniya se?? Kabhi apne dil ke andar jhaank kar dekho...khud-b-khud pata chal jaaega tum dono kya ho ek dusre ke liye

Dev: Jatin ab tum apni limits cross kar rahe ho...I Just Hate Her...pyar to kab ka bhula diya

Jatin: Kam-se-kam mere saamne to I Hate You ka raag band karo... please

Kya kaha tumne...pyar ko bhula diya...do you really think so?!
But let me tell you one thing Mr. Dikshit...
"True Love Never Dies"
Log mar jaate hain...par pyaar tab bhi nahi marta...to apko kya lagta hai...
"Aapka pyaar itni aasani se khatam ho jaaega?"

Agar apko aisa lagta hai...then you are totally wrong...

Zara poocho apne dil se...


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Index
Part 1: pg 1
Part 2: pg 10
Last part: pg 18

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Sharica thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice...like it...
I think we will surely see something like this in the show as well..

Do write more..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice.. Beautiful... Loved thr convo..
Hope aab yeh J kuch akal wala kaam kare dev sona k liye toh hum fans se bht badhaiya mile
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharica

Very nice...like it...

I think we will surely see something like this in the show as well..

Do write more..

Thank you very much...
I m glad you like it...

From yesterday's episode me too hope that we ll see something like this in show
Jatin helping devakshi to solve their problems

Surely...
Will write😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Very nice.. Beautiful... Loved thr convo..

Hope aab yeh J kuch akal wala kaam kare dev sona k liye toh hum fans se bht badhaiya mile

Thanks a lot anu😃
Ab to meri umeed jatin asha pe hi hai...
In dono mein se koi hi dEvakshi ko sath laa sakta hai...unki feelings ko realize karwa sakta hai...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome OS di! Aapne meri farmaaish sun li thank you very much! Love you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww beautiful anji loved their convo
Tu to professional writer ban gayi 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jeeya123

Awesome OS di! Aapne meri farmaaish sun li thank you very much! Love you!

Thanks jeeya😃
Haan yaar...
Tune bola tha na...
To aaj free baithi thi...to likhne baith gayi
Aur sab kuch khud hi dimag me aata chala gaya...to likh daala

Love you too dear...
Agar tumne na bola hota...
To may be main na likhti
So I should thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowers321

Aww beautiful anji loved their convo
Tu to professional writer ban gayi 😃

Thank you suchi😃
Tune to mujhe professional writer ki upadhi de di...
Bahut bahut shukriya iske liye😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice Os...enjoyed the convo between them ..i always wished Dev had a good frend ...Bunty was thre but disappeared...i hope we get to see Jatin n Dev bonding in future as good buddies..
But i loved ur writing dear..very realistic!

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