Dark FF| Name Of Love,Revenge| Chapter 6/Pg 57 (27/8)(Updated) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolmeet

Anu, take care of ur dad and family first.

Hmmm... Sri Di!
Thank You for your concern!

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Hey Annie!

Don't feel sorry dear!
We can understand
Pls don't worry abt us...and take care of ur family!
I hope ur dad & sis get well soon😛

Ohhh Thank You Darling!
Thanks for your concern & well wishes...
Your understanding is just enough for me.
Thank you once again...

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

Oh Anu take care of Ur self and Ur family.BTW Ur coming school tomorrow na?

Thank You K2 for your well wishes!
Hmmm...

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Anush is ur dad ok??????
Please take care of him n ur sis
Update kabhi bhi de sakte ho
Family first

Yes, he is now Okay & doing good...
Hmmm... Meri choti behen toh mujhe pareshaan karna chodti nahi😆
Hmmm... Updates ab main try karoungi, I'll write it soon & post as soon as it is ready...
Hmmm...

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello everyone, I'm back again. I don't know anyone missed me or not but I really missed you all! Thank You For being so much understanding.
Thank You so much for your concern & well wishes.
That's why bonus points for you all.
It is Character, not sketch but relationships between them.
So no bakwaas, here you all go.

RELATIONSHIPS BETWEEN CHARACTERS...

DEV:


Mother, Ishwari & Father, Raghunath. Both had a deal with the small venture of textiles, Bose Enterprises. Ishwari & Raghunath died. Reason to be told later. (Important Climax)

Only Sister, Nikki Of Mama, Raghav & Mami, Tarini who live in London. Nikki, Raghav & Tarini, trio loves Dev.


SONAKSHI:


Mother, Asha, very understanding & Father, Bijoy who is diagnosed with cancer first stage & loves his daughter...

Chachi, Radha Rani who is evil & money-minded & have done many bad things in past & Chacha, Baldev who supports Radha Rani & has treated Sonakshi badly. Both were in connection with Dev's parents.

Two Brothers, Saurav, Elder than Sonakshi & son of Asha-Bijoy, loves Sonakshi very much & concern her, pamper her & Vicky, Younger Brother Of Sonakshi, son of Radha Rani & Baldev, he too adores Sonakshi & flirts with her, but is always concerned for her & never loves his parents for not treating her parents, a significant role in future...


OTHERS:


Rohan Verma, Oppurtunist & appears to be friend of Dev but instigates him for many things. A Buisness Partner Of Dev. (To Be Decided When To Introduce)

Rahul Singhaniya, Business Rival of Dev. Always trying to bring him down in many ways, he was a suspect of being reason to Dev's parents death but story took turn. (To Be Introduced Soon)

More Character's Relationships To Be Introduced.

Character Sketch won't be provided as characters will tell about themselves as story unfolds.


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Hope You Liked It.
The above just provides a insight of the relations between characters as maximum characters are different from show.
Scroll Down for the 1
st chapter Up(at last).
Comment, Like & Share your views how you find these relations amusing?
Something Different that you are gearing up for reading this story.
Thank You Once Again For being Patient & understanding. I Thank everyone, my all well wishers who wished me luck & happiness & sent prayers for my dad, as today he is fine & good.
I'll always remember your wishes.


Love,
Anushka

Edited by LoveAnushka - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Here comes the first chapter ready & done. A start of new life that is marriage.
Sentences & situations left unsaid are mystery to be revealed (Not so) soon.
I have written which part is whose POV's because last time in Teaser, I forgot to or purposely didn't mention which is whose POV's because it was easier but I thought now I would for your convenience.


IMPORTANT:
Many of my readers subjected to the second banner of this story that pics were not in sync with story & pics used not depicts that of a dark storyline. But the banner is for later story, because the story is dark but when love realizations will take place & slowly followed by confrontations then that banner will be used & give a light look to story.


A very big chapter. As for compensation for not updating & being here, I wrote it faster & updated.

So Here You Go For The Chapter.

DEVAKSHI FF||NAME OF LOVE, REVENGE

It's the Harsh Reality That You'll See, Not The Smooth Dreamy Love Story

~~CHAPTER 1~~

^^BANNER BY ME^^

SONAKSHI'S POV


Duniya sach main kitni jhooti aur kitni dikhavi hoti hai, aur paison ki laalchi hoti hai...

Itna paison ka laalach ki jiss ladke se main sirf ek baar mili hoon apne engagement par, wo mere aaj pati ban jaayega kyunki who ameer hai... lekin ussne mujhe kyun chuna?

Kabhi socha hi nahi ki itna sab kuch sehne ke baad meri zindagi main phirse sirf dhoka aur dukh aayega!

Maa came & put a hand over my head as slowly caressed it...

"I'm sorry tujhe kabhi aise shaadi karni padegi maine socha nahi tha!" Said Asha, cursing the fate for her lovely daughter.

"Nahi maa, Chod! Kismat main hi nahi hai mere khushi mehsoos karne ka sukh." Then she saw her Maa averting her gaze & not meeting hers...

"Maa, Tu mujhse kuch chuppa rahi hai? Bata?" She chided her And before she could speak further, a lady came decked up in gold more than bride as she chewed on her paan, she caressed Sonakshi's head & then suddenly got hold a of hair pulling it backwards as she screamed in pain, Asha tried to stop her but she started saying,

"Chaand sa Mukhada hai tumhari beti ka Asha behen, aur dekho ladka mila bhi toh kaun, itna sona hai gudda toh! Ab meri baat dhayan se suno, tumm humare jamai ka acche se khayal rakhogi phir who tumhare saath jo bhi kare! As she left her hair & She held her paining head but adjusted the veil of her lehenga...She continued, "Phir wo tumhe kaise bhi rakhe! Kuch bhi kare tumhare saath! Aree bhai aakhir who tumhara pati banana wala hai! Itne ameer ghar se rishta hai, Dev Dixit!"

Asha came in front of her & jerked her hand which was holding Sonakshi's wrist leaving fingerprints indicating how it would have hurt her.

"Bas Radha Rani! Bas! Bohot pareshaan kar liya meri beti ko tumne! Ab aaj toh uski shaadi tumhari ghatiya... stops realizing what she was going to say... mera matlab hai, jis ladke se meri beti thik se janti bhi nahi, uss se aaj uski shaadi ho jayegi, bina dekhe , jaane!

Radha Rani chewed on her paan quickly trying to savor the sweet taste by uttering bitter words, " Dekha toh tha issne, magar tum dono ke aaj pankh nikal aaye... Chalo koi nahi karlo aaj apni maanmani, shaadi hai na iss apshagun ladki ki..."

As Asha roared, "Meri beti apshagun nahi hai Radha! Chali jao aur akella chod do aaj ke liye..."

As Sona intervened standing up in front of Radha, "Aur haan Chachi, mere jaane ke baad, aap Maa aur Baba ko aazad chod dengi, iss... iss jail main bandi se aazad kar degi, aap jo chahti thi kki main chali jaaoun to jaa rahi hoon aaj. Toh ye aap ko karna hoga warna main bahar jaate hi aapke upar case darj kar doungi!"

As Radha laughed wickedly saying, "Thike nahi karenge pareshaan. Magar tum agar bahar muh khologi apna toh... phir main nahi jaanti, tumhare baba ke dil ka kya hoga jo pehle se hi heart ke mariz hai, cancer bhi hai...tch, tch, tch... Toh sochlena. Baaki jaise jaise samay bitega, waise waise dekhenge. Agar kabhi maan kiya ya laga toh main kal ka hua sab kuch dohara(repeat) kar sakti hoon."

As Radha walked away... Sona made Asha sit, and sitting down on coldness of floor, she kept her head in her lap like she used to do, from her childhood... And they both relished the silence between them which was rare with dangerous people around them.

Asha : Apne Baba se ek aakhiri baar mil kar accha laga na, hmm?

Sona looked up & smiled in answer. As she thought how her life is sailing & she is all for a game in it. How she survived with everything still amuses her. And now if something more comes, maybe she won't be able to fight as her mom won't be there with her, supporting.

As Asha caressed her daughter's head thinking how she is really blessed with a daughter who have such beautiful heart & so innocent. She would miss her most close child, Sonakshi.

As Sonakshi was now thinking how she would be married in few hours & change into different persona.

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DEV'S POV


I saw her walk down elegantly from the stairs... Decked up! Why not? I have heard Ms.Bose is a precious girl for them...

Still I don't understand why did they... (Sentence left uncompleted)

As Mantras began off & I knew, matter of few hours & I would be snatching her happiness, her being, her everything... everything.

Mama & Mami didn't come in this wedding as they had important deal to finalize & Nikki have her exams... She wanted to but I didn't allow her. So basically no ones there except few business associates.

As of I wont exchange a word to her nor trouble on way to home because troubles are going to become a journey for her... Poor her...

Huh! What does those people think of themselves! They can do anything!

You didn't left my being, now I'll snatch theirs! From today this girl's everything is mine... I'll destroy her & her family!

I am not at all interested who is she or how does she look, least I have heard she is beautiful.. If she is then that's fun! But real fun will start when you'll be in my house...

Mantras continued with raging fire in havan & inside me...

My eyes met hers as I tied the mangalsutra(a chain, symbol of a married girl)...

And I smiled evilly & filled her parting with vermillion, swearing on it that I will not let her live, & make her living hell...Just Hell.

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SONAKSHI'S POV


I had seen him smiling strangely, darkly at me still I ignored it...

And then the time came that I feared of leaving behind my mother, father & 2 brothers of mine...

I had Saurav Dada who was always there to understand & support me, & Vicky, my younger brother, even if he was son of Chachi & Chacha, we had great bonding, even now... He always makes my mood light & cheerful when Chachi used to be inhumane to me... I love that kiddo & would miss his flirting, hugging me when he is scared & would miss Dada's love & concerns...

I had told Dada & Vicky to stay with Baba who was diagonosed with cancer first stage & was being treated, he needed bed rest & was on sedatives due to sudden faints & was so weak that doctors had not given him permission to even come to my marriage, I know he was sad... I visited him in hospital in morning but had to leave him for preparations...

I cried hugging my mother & then bid off her reluctantly, Chachi, Chacha hugged me to show as if they were sad for me... But I knew they were the most happiest persons on earth, & I didn't hug them back...

I walked to the waiting Lamborghini & raised my eyes to meet Dev Dixit, now my husband's gaze & saw him staring at me, he raised his palm for me to hold as I hold on to it & got into the car... The touch felt something very different to me...

I sink into the soft backseat of car & besides me sat Dev Dixit... As the Lamborghini drove smoothly out the hall & in the streets & we passed through a park, that park brought a set of fresh tears as I remembered how we used maa, baba, dada, Vicky & me used to sneak out & mark some beautiful memories to overcome our past...

I didn't realize that it's quiet some time, & we are on outskirts of the city & we made or way to a high slope where it was all guarded by white fencings & pretty flowers & vines decorated...

And we came across a plush bungalow, a big one which was all of whites, blacks & glass linens with Dev Dixit' imprinted on the board outside a gate...

I realized we are far... very far & turned back to see the routes but all I saw was a large part of city from above, emitting lights...

The car finally stopped at the fountain straight in front of the stairs leading in the house... I stepped out & saw it was a deep forest kind place & I'm trying hard not to admit that I'm... Scared. Being this away & on an isolated place with an unknown man who have just became my husband.

I located myself alone as the driver left & suddenly I felt a hand slipping into the duppata grabbing my waist & picking me up from the ground & giving me a jerk & holding me in bridal position...

It was Dev, & to say I was beyond than shock... he married me but I didn't gave him the right to touch me at all...

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NARRATOR'S POV


Sonakshi shouted on him," Mr.Dixit, please put me down, right now!"

Dev shushed her quipping," Mrs.Dixit, now that you are my wife I have every right on you right? So your work is to please me from now, right now!"

Sonakshi stared at him as he entered the house lobby, in front two staircases leading on upper floor & many big golden chandeliers were there & a diamond one chandelier adoring the middle of the house, it seemed a palace...

Sonakshi said to Dev, struggling to get down from his arms, "Mr.Dixit, please respect my views & give me few days to accept this realationship..."

Dev, "Ohhh! I forgot to tell My house, My rules... And by the way you should get accustomated to this because this will be your daily scenario..." Smirking dangerously at her...

As he placed her down at the threshold of the room's entry... Sonakshi asked," Dev...(Pausing, & continuing in deep voice) Why are you doing this to me, & for what? I sense foul & wrong with you ..."

Dev came closer to her & said," Because I want to f**k you every day, make your life a hell... You just sensed but it's the truth sweetheart... Sonakshi" He uttered slowly & intensely...

As hot blood ran from her ears to her face, it drained out her expression & she knew her life was over at last. Last time her blood relations had made her life worst but this time this man would make her soul killed...

As Dev backed out & pushed the royal door of the large room with a hand print recognizing security device as it slid smoothly but had her trapped here...

As Dev grabbed Sonakshi's arm fiercely & pulled her inside the room as doors closed behind automatically, not revealing the secrets of palace that was buried & with upcoming days to change both soul's life.

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So, how did you find the 1st chapter?
Interesting, Intriguing or something else?
Mostly it seemed from Sonakshi's POV, as for Dev's POV will be more by another set of chapters.
It was a big one, Hufff... and I finally wrote it.
Now its your turn to comment, like & like always constructive criticism is welcome.
Hope you liked this quick & lengthy update. Half part of last is written second time as it was not saved while the first half took some time & was written before only...


Okay so byes for now. I'll reply everyone & soon continue my other stories.


Do Check out the Trailer of the FF.


And Thank You once again for being my patient & understanding readers.


Love,
Anushka

Edited by LoveAnushka - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update anu.. Par thoda confusion hua switching between dev sona pov.. And i didnt get the characters yet such as u said most of them will come later so wll wait..
Story ka starting hi shaadi.. Matlab devakshi ek ho gye hai... Achha hai.. Dark.. Dark.. Aajkal sab k sab dark kar rhe ho.. Light ka toh zamana hi nhi rha.. Haha.. Lol.. Mujhe bhi dark pasand hai...

Dark romance and torture hoga bola tha tune.. Dark passion for each other bhi dikhana anu.. Warna maza nhi ayega... Samjhi na...

Jaldi update kardo.. And i hp ur dad is well now..
Edited by AnanyaGhosh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Welcome back Anu
Interesting update.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolmeet

Welcome back Anu

Interesting update.
Update soon.

Thanks Sri Di...
Thanks, Glad you liked it...
Will surely update soon!

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
I am really fearing for sona poor soul yaar
Update quickie

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