Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 160

Really nice update...when I start to read chapter, I felt ...am I missed previous chapter... Because of starting...

Ok so Gayu let me tell u from the beginning wat happened to me, wen I started reading this chapter...

First two lines I was like 😲
Then next two lines I was like 😕
Then whole stanza I was like 👎🏼

Then I went to chapter 16 jo mujhe laga k main pakka miss kar diya hai..Lenin jab dekha to i was like 🥱

Main Sochu yeh ho kya raha hai... 😆
Fir Maine apni akal lagayi aur story neeche se padni shuru ki... 😆
Thanks to u...itna ghumane k liye 😆
Coming to ur update mujhe na abhi se hi next update padna hai coz yeh blinds down karke badi curiosity jaga di hai.. 😆
Very very nice n mind boggling update 👏

I can't stop laughing
When I started reading I thought I have missed chapters
I went back to index to check 😲
But no, I haven't missed anything 😆
I started reading again. I was bowled 😆
Excellent writing. Too much excited for upcoming chapters 👏 👏 👏

yaar,.. bahut achha chapter tha. so now dev is going to make sona feel restless and jealous at the same time. wish his proximity with tina,makes sona blurt the truth that she started liking him in a romantic way, not platonic like they shared till now . i am not sure if dev already has romantic inclinations or not, i would love to see some devakshi moments anytime😉

This chapter was too cute...when I started reading it, I thought I actually missed the previous chapter..so I actually went back to read the previous chapter

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Jaise hi maine ye chapter padhna start kiya..

I was likeye kya hai...

Man koi or story to nahi read kar rahi.

Kyunki last chapter me to sona ki pol khulne wali thi

Or idhar to romantic devakshi

Or jab baad me jaake pata chala ye to sona ka dream hai...fir to meri hansi hi nahi ruki🤣

Main to soch soch ke pagal ho rahi thi ki kaheen main kuch miss to nahi kar diya

Or baad me kya nikla...oh! God🤣

Accha buddhu banaya aapne mujhe aaj to😆

Fir laga ki haan...sahi story padh rahi hu or kuch miss nahi kiya maine😉

Dev sona dono try kar rahe hain is relationship ko nibhane ka

Sona ne khud bola dev ko bed pe sone ke liye😃

Ab Dev khoob maze lene wala hai sona ko tang karke...

Bechari cheeku...

Dev ne to usko apne saath rakh liya

Ab to or bhi maza aane wala hai...

Kis point pe aake roka...

Dev sona cabin me akele

Kya hoga...

Dev sona ki bolti band karwayega or sona dev ki rahul ki tarah😆

Plsss plss plss update soon

Waiting...

Anji ko buddhu banaya bada mazaa aaya

Chalo now on ur latter comment
Sahi baat hai ki dev aur sona sincere si koshish kar rahe hai apne rishte ko nibhane ki
Aur sona to khud se pehel kar rahi hai dev ke saath comfortable hone ki

Ab jab dev ne itna kuch bhugta hai sona ko samjhane ke chakkar mein to dev maze to lega hi na
Ab sona dev ki personal helper jo ban gayi hai
To thoda flirting to banta hai


Jiss point pe roka hai wahan se kya pata ek aur surprise mile
All i would say is stay tuned anji 😉

Originally posted by: binuuu

Hoo gayudii...aap muje budhu bana diya...

When i was reading first part i was like, oh God! How i missed previous chapter...then i went to first page n checked index n previous chapter...then i realised i already read it...

Sapna tha voh...n i thought it was really happening..

Haha...how many lies sona?😆she is already attracted by him...

Finally he caught her n he understood that she is working in his company...

Super duper part dii...that introduction part..oh godd😆i can't imagine sona's situation...

Rahul-Sona part was also very funny..

So she is going to assist him...interesting dii...

What is the next target..jaldi bathaaoo..

Binnudiii bhi ullu bani
Yayayyy

Sona to jhoot pe jhoot bole jaa rahi hai
LLekin ab kya karegi
Dev ne to pakad liya
Ab to sona gayi


Sona ka intro bada mazedaar tha na
Aur rahul ko bhi bada rulaya iss ladk8 ne do dino mein
Ab dekhte hai ki yeh dev ko rulati hai ya dev ise
Yaa phir dono milke koi aur hi track pakadte hai
Stay tuned
Will update soon

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Anji ko buddhu banaya bada mazaa aaya

Chalo now on ur latter comment
Sahi baat hai ki dev aur sona sincere si koshish kar rahe hai apne rishte ko nibhane ki
Aur sona to khud se pehel kar rahi hai dev ke saath comfortable hone ki

Ab jab dev ne itna kuch bhugta hai sona ko samjhane ke chakkar mein to dev maze to lega hi na
Ab sona dev ki personal helper jo ban gayi hai
To thoda flirting to banta hai


Jiss point pe roka hai wahan se kya pata ek aur surprise mile
All i would say is stay tuned anji 😉

Originally posted by: Sharica

Gayu...bahot maja aaya hoga tujhe aaj itna pagal banake hume..

Seriously..kaise sochti hain ye sab..

Jaise hi maine chapter read karna shuru kiya...

I was like...maine Gayu ka hi FF open kiya hain na😕

Fir aage padna shuru kiya..tab maine post ka subject check kiya...vo bhi sahi nikla...

Main fir aage badi and jab Dev Sona ko guest room mein le jaata hain..wahan maine chapter number dekha...maine socha 16 to maine read kiya hain and ye 17 hi hain...maine kuch miss to nahi kiya tha..😕

Fir mujhe laga shayad tu koi OS likh rahi thi, galti se is FF mei vo update kar diya...😆

Fir bhi dimag ke ghode be break lagake maine aage padna shuru kia and socha shayad tune story fast forward kar di hain..FB mein batayegi ki Dev and Sona ke beech baat yaha tak kaise pahonchi...aur shayad tu hamari SR waali demand puri kar rahi hain

But but but...us ooouch ke saath mera aur Sona dono ka sapna toot gaya😭

Yahan pata laga ki hume pagal banaya gaya intentionally😛

Fir aaye hum chapter ke flow mein..and samajh aaya writer kya karna chahti thi...😃

Brilliant mind...

Chapter was super awesome...Dev ko kya bataye Sona ki vo sapne mein kya dekh rahi thi...bichari jhooth bolna bhi nahi aata😆

She has almost forgiven Dev..just a matter of time...All will be good...She allowed Dev to sleep besides her was a big change and now things will start falling in place with their love..

Dev got to knw Sona ke job ke baare mein and wife satao planning chalu...maja aayega😳

Loved Sona's answer to Rahul and thanks for giving jealous Dev...

Ab Sona se personal kaam krwayega and I knw jaan boojh ke Tina ke close rehne ka try karega...I am so excited...❤️

Sona tera kya hoga ab...confess to karna padega...Dev kya kya badmaashi karega offc mein😳

Waiting waiting waiting...

Update soon...

Haan gins how did u know
Mazaa hi to lena tha mujhe

😉 😉

Ab dev hai ki sabkuch detail mein janna chahta hai
Aur sona hai ki dev ko sab detail mein bata nahi sakti

Haan bass sona ne dev ko maaf kar hi diya hai
Par thodi si hichak hai jo kuch samay mein chali jayegi

Ab dev to full on sona ki bajao mode pe hai
Lekin hope woh rahul ki haalat dekh ke samajh jaye ki sona se panga lena is not at all advisable

Ab dev kya kya karne waala hai bass dekhte jaao
Aakhir sona ab uski personal helper jo hai

Will update soon
Stay tuned babes