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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!

late ho gayi...
Practical tha na aaj...to time nahi mila...

exam ke liye skip karne pe no sorry maangna
koi issues nahin
ulta very good bola jayega


But finally ab aa gayi😃...with my comment...
Update was WOW!!👏
⭐️
Dhaasu update...maza hi aa gaya...
Sona's behaviour was justified... Afterall uske saath itna kuch kiya...or kiya bhi uske best friend...uske bunny ne...

thanku so much yaar anji
itna pasand aaya tumhe😭😭

All the moments in car and flight were too emotional...
Aur dixit house mein sona ki entry dev ki baahon...that was awesome... Loved it😳😳
Us time ishu ka reaction😆😆
Ye proverb to ishu ki state pr ekdum perfect hai...but zara sa mould kr rahi hoon:
Ishu proposes, dev disposes😆😆😃

kya baat hai
kamaal ki kahawat boli
perfect fit

Ishu sochti kuch hai...aur hota kuch aur hi hai...😆


actually

Waise hum sab ishu se irritate ho chuke the...par ishu ke hone ka kitna faayda hua hume...agar ishu na hoti to DevAkshi ki shadi kaise hoti.😛😉
Aur aaj jo hua wo bhi na hota...fir to ye ff hi nahi hota😉


arrey uske kaaran hi to devakshi ek hue hai
aur tum sab ho ki use kos rahe ho

😆😆😆


Hotel buoy ki to waat hi laga di dev babu ne😆😆...laundary me kaam de diya...bada maza aaya😆
Police ko arrest karwane ki dhamki tak de daali
I loved it

uski jo band bajayi haina dev ne
i loved it

Ab to dev sab karega apni cheeku ko manane ke liye...use comfortable feel karwaane ke liye. Bade acche se usey shaant kar diya. Or room se baahar bhi chala kya...

Ab sona kya sach mein apne mummy papa ke ghar chali jaaegi??? Agar gayi to dono ek dusre ko miss karenge...maza aayega ye dekhne mein...aur fir dheere dheere pyaar bhi ho hi jaaega...very very excited 😃😃


sona to jayegi
ab dev kya karega yeh dekhna hoga

So finally ishu ka number bhi aaya😃😃
Hamari itni badi wish poori hui...ishu ka bhi band baja re baja...
Aur to aur 15 saal purana raaz bhi khol diya...idhar bhi neha thi...accha hai maar di. Yahaan ishu to sambhaali nahi jaati to neha kaise sambhaalte.
Ye ishu to confirmed pagal hai. Kuch bhi maan leti hai. Atleast dev se pooch to leti ki kya hua tha. Khud hi sab assume kar leti hai. Uski in assumptions ki wajah se usne itne saal sona se nafrat ki. Aur ab uski life ko barbaad karne ki koshish kar rahi hai...
Very good dev! Ishu ko sach to dikhaya...uski aankhon se nafrat ki patti utaar di...

isshu ka no kaise na aata
bola tha na sabki dhulayi hogi
ab bass nuttu baby bachi hai
uski bhi jam ke watt lagegi


Ab lag to raha hai ki ishu sudhar gayi...par pata to next update mein hi chalega aakhir kya chal raha hai uske dimag mein...
But i hope usko apne kiye par pachtava ho raha hai...
Ab next update mein clear kar dena di ki ishu ke dimag mein kya chal raha hai...

ab maata sudhregi yah aur bigdegi yeh dekhna padega

Idhar bhi dev ghar chodkar chala gaya...par kya sach mein chala jaaega...ishu rokegi yaa sona ke liye aaega...

arrey ghar chodke nahin gaya hai
bass tehelne gaya hai😆😆😆

Waiting... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting...waiting... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting... Waiting...Wwwaaaiiitttiiinnnggg

Itna wait kar rahe hain...
So please update very very very soon😃

will update soon dear

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Dystopia

I read the last couple of chapters in one go and I was so happy when Dev finally found out the truth.

Loved the way Dev handled Sona in the last chapter and how Devakshi are back.
Can't wait for the next update




thanku so much dear
glad u liked my character progression
will update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago




Yaar ek to muje aalas chadha hai
Upar se tum log comment ka reply dene ko bol rahe ho
😭 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hum nhi bolenge toh kaun bolega????
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Posted: 8 years ago

Kaunsa PM gayu? Tumhare new OS wala?? Vo I have read and commented as well..

Is there any other PM?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Hum nhi bolenge toh kaun bolega????




Ab yeh baat bhi sahi hai
Par mere aalas ka kya kiya jaye
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharica



Kaunsa PM gayu? Tumhare new OS wala?? Vo I have read and commented as well..

Is there any other PM?





Nahi woh nahi
Ek aur hai
All thanks to my alas bhejne ka mann hi nahi hota
Aaj bhejti hoon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Teaser for upcoming Chapter 13


As the car halted infront of Malhotra House, Dev turned to Sona who was about to get down and tried to persuade her again..."yahaan rukna jaroori hai kya...aisa karte hai main na roj office jaane se pehle tumhe yahaan chod dunga aur shaam ko ghar jaate waqt pick kar loonga...to tumhe yahaan rehne ka feel bhi ayega aur humara ghar bhi poora lagega...what say...accha idea haina..."...he extended his hand for a hifi when Sona replied to him emotionlessly..."dikki kholiye...mujhe bag nikalna hai..."...she got down abruptly from the car as his hand still hanged in the air...the lost soldier meekly followed her advise and helped her take her bag out...as he proceeded towards her house wheeling in the suitcase Sona stopped him..."aapko andar aane ki koi jaroorat nahin hai...yeh mera apna ghar hai...mujhe iska raasta pata hai...aap yahaan taka ay iskeliye thank you...ab aap jayiye...aapko der ho rahi hogi..."...she pulled the suitcase from his hand and proceeded into the house all by herself...Dev gave it a last try when he called her from behind..."waapas lene kab aau tumhe?...kal ya parso..."...he hoped she would reply..."pata nahin...jab ghar aane ka mann karega tab phone kar dungi...tab tak please don't bother..."...she walked past him as he stood there dejected.

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Posted: 8 years ago
ok guys have updated the teaser above
the next chapter is almost ready but will be posted depending on the response I get for this teaser
so the more the number of comments the more earlier the chapter will be updated!!!!!!

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