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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heya folks.You've accidently or not so accidently stumbled upon a horror that i oh so lovingly like to call poem.Well its not exactly a poem more of a scribble.

Him & I

He was everyone's dream living in a nightmare.
He was a blank paper yet i saw hues of color.
He was a lost cause and i was his destruction.
His eyes were still yet i saw splash of emotion
He was fire yet i burned him
He was an enchanting glow but a pit of darkness to me
He was wounded yet my cure
He was beautiful storm and I was his terror.
He was the epitome of confidence
but a nervous wreak to me.
It was His secret that i wanted on unravel
yet I became His keeper.
He was a lock of emotions and i was His key.
He was a mystery but an open book to me.
It was His story that i lived
Until it became mine
Thank you for bearing it!!
Do leave reviews

Love
Anshika
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My my soo apt for them...loved it..
This forum is so full of undiscovered talented ppl...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasha01

My my soo apt for them...loved it..

This forum is so full of undiscovered talented ppl...


Awww thank you soon much
Itti tareef😳
Talented??? These are my little horrors 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh goodness...Wat a poem . Beautiful n apt .
Loved it.

Luv
Srilotus.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolmeet

Oh goodness...Wat a poem . Beautiful n apt .

Loved it.

Luv
Srilotus.


Hey!!
Thanks a ton for your appreciation
M glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written and the fact that you call it a scribble actually shows your modesty😳 Lovely🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chucklebuddy

Beautifully written and the fact that you call it a scribble actually shows your modesty😳 Lovely🤗


Thanks a Lott!!
Yup modest is my middle name or not 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: catharsis

Beautifully written!👏


Thank ya 😊

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