||In your Arms...|| A DevAkshi TS. Part 2 updt on pg:3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heya Ppl... I am new here..but not new to writing or IF. You can call me Sharmi.
DevAkshi have made me go crazy.. followed all the episodes in one week. Nd Their chemistry is Awesome! I mean Super Awesome!
There was a request on the forum to write something special on them as Valentine's day is approaching.
My wicked mind has got some idea on this beautiful pair. Nd I am penning it down. Hope u guyz like it.

Here it goes...

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Dev...



She entered the hall gracefully with a small curve tugged at her lips.

She wore a beautiful sleeveless red gown which was sticking to her body shaping her curves till her knees and puffed downwards. Her hair pulled into a small bun and soft tendrils framing her ever so beautiful face.

The spot light was on her. As she walked towards the crowd. She was no less than a princess all decked up. Simple and elegant.
Her cheek bones shaded lightly with crimson. Nd her eyes decorated with black kohl making it look so bright. Her lips painted a soft red yet she looked ravishing. She looked so damn beautiful even after all these years and will anyone believe that she is a mother of a beautiful young girl.

My eyes was on her.

ONLY ON HER.

But I was not the only one who was staring at her with my jaw hitting the floor. All the men were drooling over her nd my body flared with rage.
Possessiveness took over me.

She came and settled herself near the elderly Dr.Sinha. She took a glass of champagne.
She finished two drinks slowly as she talked with many business people and with some regarding their diet nd she offered some general tips for a healthy life.

The party was organized for all the successful entrepreneurs of the year. Nd Dr.Sonakshi Bose was someone who has become really famous nd successful within a short span of time.

Impressive.

Nope...

Very Very Impressive!

Whatever anyone said, i knew she had bought her business to heights by shedding her sweat.

My blood boiled when Vicky said all those nonsense about her using unwanted and dirty ways. I felt like punching him like anything..but i couldn't show that she affected him. But no problem all together i did give him when i found his cheap tricks and illegal ways of running my hard-earned business. I punched him, slapped him nd kicked him too. A part of it was secretly for all that he said about "my Sonakshi".

Yes...My Sonakshi... She was a self made woman. She took her decisions and was independant. She never ever failed to impress me. Just like now.

Many men approached her for a dance, nd I felt like breaking all their hands. But she politely rejected all of them. She did see me. We did have a eyelock for a good long time.
But she was the one to avert her gaze at first.

I failed. Badly. I just couldnt keep my eyes of her. I just wanted to take her in my arms and hold her there forever.

I took long strides until I stood in front of her. Her eyes widened.
I held my hand out and bowed a little.

"Can i have the pleasure of dancing with the most beautiful lady tonight?"

Everyone's eyes were on us...especially on her. Waiting for her answer.

As I looked up..her reaction was priceless. Looks like she never expected this. I chuckled inside.
Her eyes widened her mouth a little opened nd if i am not wrong she was breathing a bit fast.

Oh my! I still affect her! Nd I loved it
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She looked to her sides and she saw me. In my eyes. She softened and placed her soft hands in mine.

My smile grew ever wide. I could hear gossips around us. But I didn't give a damn to it. All i cared was that now I had her in my arms.
We stood facing each other in the middle of the dance floor amidst other couples. I placed my hand on her hips...a bit lower than the modesty level. Pulled her close as she placed her hand on my shoulder. The other hand entwined in hers. We started swaying and swaying. Gazes locked and a small smile on our face. It was slow filled with a satisfaction... with love.. with the feel of each other in one another's arms.

It felt great.

I pulled her more closer as her orbs dilated a bit. Nd Held her firmly. Our bodies brushed each other's. My heart raced up. I could sense that hers too did. We were caught in an never ending gaze.
I swirled her and pulled her back as her back hit my chest.
I bent a little and whispered huskily.

"You look so breathtaking. Any ideas of killing someone tonight?"


She blushed making her cheeks go more crimson. I smiled as i got a glimpse of my old Sonakshi...



Well this will be a Two or Three shot... don't know...
So... did I guyz like this. Leave it comments and feedback.
Criticism is most welcomed.

Love Sharmi.

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Jade0001 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow this is such a beautiful piece of work

the proudness in Dev just awesome the beautiful Sonakshi making all men fall at her feet 😆

waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow beautiful ...please continue...eagerly waiting for the next chapter and please write a looong one...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This one was beautiful
Waiting for the next part😳
Edited by saumiee - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey hi sharmi,
Firstly a warm welcome to the forum...I hope U have great fun here 🤗
Beautifully written update
Looking forward to the next part!! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum
Wonderful update👏
Loved it so much...

Please continue soon
Waiting for next chapter...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start dear...plz continue soon
Would luv to read ur writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

beautiful
0lease continue soon



Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Wow beautiful ...please continue...eagerly waiting for the next chapter and please write a looong one...



Thank you dear 😳
Surely will put a loong one...working on it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Juhi 😃

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