Devakshi OS : Black currant @ 12.15 Am

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Concept : No leap Np Separation Sonakshi is Pregnant and She is in her 6th Month Dev Loves her
No ishwari/Mamiji Drama This is Very light hearted Story Do enjoy and Please give your Valuable Feedback


She wears her slipper and come slowly out of Room...with baby steps she

enters in kitchen and opens fridge takes out vanilla ice-cream she makes faces looking at white ice-cream she throws cup in dustbin...

Then she takes out another cup its butter-scotch She throws this too this time with anger

She sat back on dining table rest her elbows over table she rests her head over her palm

Thinks what to do now she is craving heavily for black currant ice-cream also she wants to eat Gulab-jamun But her bad luck No ice-cream nor Gulab jamun in the fridge


Here At Room

Dev opens his eyes and panicks not to see Sonakshi by his side...

he comes downstairs

quickly to search and see her sitting and sulking talking to herself...

he scratches his temple and says to himself...

"Mera Chota baby fir se mumma ko pareshan kar rahe hai Ab dekhte hai kis chiz ki craving ho rahi hai...he smiles and goes near her and sit by side her ...Same as he put his elbows on table and rest his head on his palms Same as she sat in front of him...


he rises his eyebrows and give her What happen now looks...


She looks at Dev and Says ...Why dont You Just put black currant Ice-cream in fridge i want now...

Dev looks at her with frown...now he shows her watch 12.15 Am Sonakshi he says Is waqt...

She looks helplessly with in his...almost pleading ...he can't see her wife like this when she is 6th month pregnant He says her okay he is going to 5 Star hotel and will be back in some time he pushes his chair back and about to move Sonakshi holds his hands Dev turns and ask what happen now...

She getup too and hug him and whispers I love you...

He hugs her back and says I know You love me...but why now You are saying this...

I just want to tell you pulls her self back while saying this she blushes...

Dev pecks on her cheeks and says ab main jaau (can I go now)

Sonakshi nods in negative...Dev looks at her confusingly ...

Kya Main bhi chalu (May I come with You) I need some fresh Air she asks

Dev holds her hand and give her suport to walk

both sits in car

Almost Half an hour Dev stops Car in front of Hotel where Seems Wrap up of Any marriage reception only few guest and Family member is taking their dinner

He somehow manages to enter in Hotel People watching Both as Sonakshi is in Big long tshirt and Pjs and Dev in his shorts He helps Sonakshi to seat comfortably on Chair cum couch...

he takes his seat's cushion and puts behind Sonakshi so she can comfortably seat ...


All couple who were enjoying their with their partner they Stops

And stares At the high profile couple with so much confusion at this odd hours wearing odd outfits.its really surprising for them as some of men are working under the Dev Dixit business man. One curios soul asks .is not the ruthless businessman .who rules in the business world and also known for his punctuality. The other who is actually employee under Dixit industries.he utters with confusing and amused tone. Exact he is the same man who is not only punctual about time also so much concern about the outfit of his employee at office. But the poor soul heard only his wife's complain .yes exactly at office but at home he is perfect and caring husband .look how caring he is towards his wife that .he arranged cushion for her and you. Don't pay attention what I do full day .and again engrosses starring the lovey dovey couple and experience their love

Here Dev orders his order for black currant ice cream for her lady love. And busy to staring better to say waiting to fulfil his wife's next pleading..

Sonakshi pout her lips and complaint .kya Dev .aap kaunsi hotel me lekar aye hai. I can't wait more..Sonakshi .darling .just few min .odd hours u know na .so just taking lil time. Tab ...hmmm. Tab tak u can taste this and took one chocolate for her from his pocket

Though its Sonakshi's fav still her inner one is craving something else.. The other curious souls are waiting what the next side of Dev Dixit is going to unfold in front of them. And here Dev with his pleading charming smile open the wrap and took the chocolate for one bite in front of Sonakshi. Any lady will melt with this smile but Sonakshi and her crazy hormones .with lil bit loudly .Dev I want ice cream nothing else.. Still Dev smiles and goes to bring his order .and says thank you to god at least for the crazy mood swing SONAKSHI called him Dev entire the world ...ASAP some ladies joined to Sonakshi when Dev left the place.

One lady .hi Mrs Dixit .must say aapke husband is so caring. Second lady . yes so romantic too .did you see his charming smile. Sonakshi did not say much as she did not like the last comment from one Lady. She just replies .yes lucky too as Dev loves me so much.


The ladies did not hear her comments. Just starring the way Dev was coming

Sonakshi looks at the direction and she feels aww with the view Dev is coming with tray in his hand and wearing a chef hat...he puts tray in front of her all ladies asap

Its a heart Shape ice cream and Gulab jamun on It... and says Ma'am here is your black currant and gulab Jamun he too sat back

He takes one scoop and feed her...She closes her eyes and enjoys ice cream and Let out a Sigh with Hmmm...mmm

All people again watch them Dev ddnt give attention to Sonakshi's hmmm mmm and nor on people he again feed her now this time Sonakshi Let out hmmm more than before...Dev slowly says to Sonakshi ye kaisi awaz nikal rahi ho log samzenge Ki main kuch kar raha hu (What are those sound please people will think that I am doing something to you)

Sonakshi realize what he just said She blushes ...she too feed Dev...

both completes and Dev goes to pay bill when he returns he saw Sonakshi standing with help of near By pillar watching couple dancing


(Song Playing in bg)


Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Sun mere humdum

Hamesha ishq mein hi jeena

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Sun mere humdum

Hamesha ishq mein hi jeena



Dev slowly comes to her and take out his hand for her she gives Him what looks...Dev gesture her by hand lets Dance...She happily give him her hand


"Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Jaga mat

Pairon se zameen

Zameen laga mat



Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Jaga mat

Pairon se zameen

Zameen laga mat


His hands slips around her waist and Slowly pick her in arms and comes to dance floor Sonakshi turned to beet red all couples give both side and Dev place her to her feet on floor

Dev again slips his hand to her waist and she rests her head on his chest

Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Sun mere humdum

Hamesha ishq mein hi jeena...



He whispers something in her ears

She looks at him confusingly ...She asks him with eyes

he again whispers : Yo tambin te quiero

Sonakshi again what : Yo tambin te quiero



Kyon urdu farshi bolte hooo

Kyon urdu farshi bolte hooo

Dus kehte ho do taulte ho

Jhoton ke shanshaaa bolo na



Dev signals her to look at in his eyes Sonakshi did same both shares a eyeslocks...


Kabhi jhaako meri ankhen

Kabhi jhaako meri ankhen

Sunaaye ek dastaan

Jo hooton se kholona


Dev leans down to her and about to kiss her but then his tummy (not fully fat) collide with her Full grown tummy

Both looks down at their tummy kissing each other and laughs.



Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Jaga mat

Pairon se zameen

Zameen laga mat

Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Jaga mat

Pairon se zameen

Zameen laga mat

Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Aye

Hairathe ashiqui

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Dum dar dum dar jasn jasn dum

Dev again Picks her in arms and both bid byee to all and sit in cars

Sonakshi leans down to his shoulder and rest her head on his shoulder...and ask Wo kya bola tha aapne Dance Karte waqt (what you said while we were daning)...He smiles and says


" I LOVE YOU TOO"


Sonakshi lift her head and looks at him and He continue Arey tumne Mujhe Bola tha Naa(You said me at home)


" I love You "😳


So i replied You


"I love You too"😳


END😳

Translation : yo tambin te quiero (Spanish) - I love you too (English)

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Edited by Dhinchank - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I haven't read the whole story but initial lines remind me of Salaam Namaste in which Preity asks Saif for Belgium choclate icecream...and they go on for searching it on the streets of London
And a now a sond dedicated to it from the movie as well!😉
"Paune baara baje dono ghar se chale..."

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one
Ammy you rock
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really cute Os dhinchank...
The way dev was pampering her is sooo cute!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... it's really amazing dear..
A much needed one in the forum atmosphere...
Old caring scenes flashing back...
Thank-you soo much dear...
Keep giving more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

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I haven't read the whole story but initial lines remind me of Salaam Namaste in which Preity asks Saif for Belgium choclate icecream...and they go on for searching it on the streets of London
And a now a sond dedicated to it from the movie as well!😉
"Paune baara baje dono ghar se chale..."


Ohh yes Sonali...that was the first thought in my mind!!
Salaam namaste and that song
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww ..its so so nice and beautiful written...loved it😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Aman that is Absolutely Beautifully
Posted: 8 years ago
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its such a cute os .. totaly loved it ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS ...Soo sweet & romantic
Do write more

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