The Longest Night! *devakshi os*

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Arpi

@-Arpi-

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

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ssimmy

@ssimmy

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

All I can say is wow. Such a beautifully written OS, I could sense the passion between these two. I hope to a scene along the lines of this in the show!

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lavanya

@dlavanya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing OS... very well written... i could actually imagine Dev and SOna in the scene... excellent work...

Hope writers give something like this in the show -- even if a toned down version is good enough...

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404_NotFound

@404_NotFound

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

I loved it ..very well written...wish the makers could show something like this in the show...

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Sony_dips

@Sony_dips

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Send ur story to the writers please then only they will get the idea ..what actually viewer wants to see..good job 👏

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Mishal Manisha

@gudiyanrani143

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

If only we get something like this in the show!! Lol

Great work...

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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

That was a lovely os.
Thankuou so much for writing it...I was really dying to read an os on Devakshi after their weding.

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babli1

@babli1

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

So lovely..pl write more, so waiting for next 😉

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Sensuous dear..

Not only u bt even I needed it very badly..

Thnks for giving a lifeline to me...

Cv's needed the weekend with such scene n excitement that all can have a beautiful torture. .

Do write the next part asap...

Plz pm me dear...

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

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Very Well written Os. Loved it... Will be more happy..if u give the 2nd part of this os.coj show main to dikhate nei..os/fs se kaam chalana padta hai! ;)

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