The Nights : DevAkshi OS *NOTE 2 @pg. 20* - Page 5

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Originally posted by: tanya94

I really liked how realistically u write it...waiting to read next parts

Thank you so very much.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Continue soon plz
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Oho...kya part tha...jaldi jaldi update de dooo...
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Oho...kya part tha...jaldi jaldi update de dooo...

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Thanks mona..
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Wow... Amazing start Rads...
So beautiful nd so so romantic dear... I was blashing 😳 😳 ...
Egerly waiting for next update
Update soon... 😊
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Wow... Amazing start Rads...
So beautiful nd so so romantic dear... I was blashing 😳 😳 ...
Egerly waiting for next update
Update soon... 😊

Thanks so much Feroo..😳😳
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Ohhh really nice continue soon and pls pm me
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Ohhh really nice continue soon and pls pm me

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Reception Night
Note: okay I don't know what all happens at pregnancy and all. So if it doesn't happen this way, to koi ni fir bhi entertainment ke liye padh lena.

"Neha.. tu ab sunn rai hai yaa daat khaaegi. Tujhe kaha hai ek jagah beth.
Kal bhi pure din shaadi mein araam nai hua hai tera. Beta aisi naajhuk halat mein itni bhaag daud karna theek nai hai."

"Accha baba theek hai. Beth gai main ab khush. Ek toh dekh na maa mujhe jo lehenga pehnna ta wo main pehen nai paai bhaari ta isliye aur ab koi mujje kuch karne bhi nai de raha hai."

"Neha.. ab tum shaanti se bethogi.. warna main tumhe ghar chorke aa raha hun. " Ranveer warned Neha.

Neha was pregnant and had her date very near. But she was very adamant to attend Dev's wedding reception. So everyone was making sure she doesn't over stress herself.

***

At Dev-Sona's room.

"Please light make-up okay." Sona told the beautician.

Riya and Nikki giggled.

"Di.. oh sorry.. Bhabhi.. aaj aapki shaadi ka reception hai, aaj bhi aapko light make-up hi chahiye?"

"Arre.. toh shaadi ka reception hai toh kya mujhe bhootni dikhna chahiye? Nayi nayi aap light hi kariye"

"Sai kehrai hai Sonakshi.. Usse sundar lagne ke liye kisi make-up ki zarurt nai hai" Dev prompted.

He was trying hard to sneak in but his sisters made sure to tease and not let him in. He came up with the lamest of excuses to enter but only to be stopped at the door. And Sona kept enjoying this teasing.

"Bhaiyya...aap wapas aagye? Chaliye bahar chaliye.." Riya told pushing him out of the room.

"Arre main kyo bahar jaau.. mera bhi room hai..wo main..main reception ke kapde lene aaya ta.."

Nikki quickly went and took his clothes which were lying on the bed.

"Yeh lijiye..ab jaiye.."

"Tum log apne bade bhai se aise baat kar rahe ho?" He tried so sound serious.

"Ji haan..now go.."

Before going he sneaked and saw Sona giggling over at whatever was happening.

***

"Oh god yeh band kyo nai ho raha"
Sona kept struggling with the hook of her blouse.

Everyone had left her room as she had to get in to the lehenga.
Everything was done but just the hook of her blouse wasn't in a mood to be done.
She stood in the room, her back facing the mirror.

The door opened mutely and closed with a minimum bang. She could sense with the foot movement who it was and henceforth she stood still, her heart thumping to the loudest.

With small and slow steps which only increased her exhilaration he came at her back and lightly put his palm on her bare waist.

Mr.Dixit the anticipation is more than enough already. Don't drive me crazy now.' she thought to herself.

With a light touch first at waist Dev seized her closer to him. He could feel her body moving for deep breaths.

"Why didn't you lock the door from inside?" Now playing with her skin around her neck he asked.
"What if it wasn't me?"

"There cannot be anyone else here. I only belong to you" she said now her breathing getting a little normal on pace.


One of his hand feeling her smooth skin at her belly, he pulled her yet again, her back bumping into his chest. He trailed his fingers on her back slowly reaching the hook of her blouse.

She gently closed her eyes to perceive his touch even more. Claiming the hook he clasped it.

***

The newly wed couple walked down the main hall hand in hand.
Every eye was hooked to them as they made their way, glow on their faces and a beautiful smile enhancing their togetherness.

Sonakshi dressed in a gorgeous light pink lehenga looked angelic and her blush was a darker shade of it. Dev suited in a well fitted black tux couldn't look more charismatic.

The evening came down to an end after a series of meetings and greetings ,dance and drama.

The family greeted the guests as they left.
"Dev bhai now we should also leave. Its quite late." Ranveer said.

"Haan." Dev smiled and said.
"Neha tum already apne aap ko bahot exert kar chuki ho ab tum ghar jaake araam karo ok." Said Sonakshi being a sister in law and a doctor.

***

Taking out his tux, standing in his shirt and trousers Dev paced back and forth in the room waiting for Sonakshi.

Sona tum mujhse kal kya badla le rahi ho kya, where are you.?' he said to himself.

The door opened and Sonakshi entered. Without giving her any time to think he closed and locked the door and pinned her to the door only.
"Where were you?" He whispered.
A little startled by the sudden proximity she tried to speak "woh..main.."
Looking deep into her eyes with in a low voice he said
" Mrs. Dixit apne husband ko itna wait karana acchi baat nai hai." and chuckled a bit. Making Sona smile in shyness.

She freed herself and tried to move.
As she took few steps Dev held her hand brought her to him and hugged her from the back, now both of them faced the mirror.

"Kya kar rahe ho?" She said feeling shy.
"Kya kar raha hun?"
"Dev.."
"Tum sharmate hue aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho."
And both of them looked into the mirror.

The mirror had never given such a beautiful image. They could feel their togetherness even more.
"Dev..mujhe jaane dijiye na pls" she said as her usual self.

"Kyo?" Dev said nuzzling his nose over her neck.
"I have to change."
"Sona..It should be balanced right?"

"Matlab?" She said still shying away.
"I mean.. I helped you wear this so I should also.."

Before he could complete Sona who flushed with a blush moved out of his grip and tried to walk away and before she could move a step Dev lifted her up into his arms.

Carrying her delicately he placed her over the bed he got above her. Dimming the side lamp he brought his face closer to hers.

After a nice glare into her eyes he didn't want to delay it much further and he pressed his lips onto hers. Holding his shirt and hair tight she brought him even more close.

Cupping her face and findling with her hair he deepened with the kiss making her moan a little. She held his shirt so tight that the top button came off.

Rolling on bed, she came over him. Dev trailed down his fingers over the smooth skin of her waist making Sona go mad over his touch. A little breathless they were getting.

The intensity was reaching another levels altogether, the kiss becoming deepened and the touches - intimate.
Moving his hand over her back he got hold of the hook of her blouse.

Playing with the hook and increasing her desperation more he opened the first hook and kissed her earlobe.

*Beep beep beep* the phone rang.
To shut the noisy thing he stretched his hand to silent the call and kissed her again.

*Beep beep beep* the phone rang again. Sona catched a glare of the name of the caller and told Dev to stop for a while and picked up the call.

"Hello.."

"Hello Bhabhi.. actually Neha complained of labour pain when we were heading to home so I've rushed her to the hospital. "

"Okay okay Ranveer. Don't panic we'd as soon as possible."

Both Dev and Sona quickly got into their causal clothings and informed Ishwari about Neha's condition and all three of them rushed to the hospital.

***

"Congratulations.. your wife has given birth to a baby girl" the nurse gave the good news.

Everyone was very elated listening to the blissful news and their faces lightened up.
After an hour or so Dev asked Sona and Maa to leave for home and that he'll be staying at the hospital with Ranveer.

"Dev I'll also stay here." Sona said.
"Sonakshi you are already tired. Please tum ghar chali jao."

"Uska yaha rukne ka itna mann hai..toh rukne de na.. subah jaldi driver ko bhijwadi dungi wo Sonakshi ko le aaega ghar." Ishwari told Dev. She too was trying to be a good mother in law.

Sona, Dev and Ranveer stayed at the hospital the whole night. And Dev and Sona spent their night sleeping on the hospital chairs where Sona had put her head over Dev's shoulder.

In the morning both of them went on to meet Neha and congratulate her for welcoming a new life into existence.
"Thank you bhai, thank you Sona."

"Ab tumhe apna khayal bahot hi acche se rakhna hoga. Aur tumhari puri diet ki responsibility meri hai." Said Sona and everyone giggled.

Sona gestured Dev for something and he immediately nodded and picked up his phone to call someone. Neha noticed this and asked Dev to not call anyone.

"Kisko call kar rahe ho aap?"

"Woh.."

"I know.. par aap log apna honeymoon bilkul b cancel ya postpone nai kar rahe ho."

"Par Neha.."

"Par kya bhai.. mera dhyaan rakhne ke liye sab hai yaha.. Ranveer hai, meri do maa hai, bhabhi hai.. sab hai yaha.. aap log itne mushkilo ke baad saath hue ho aap log meri wajah se nai jaaoge toh mjhe bahot bura lagega.. aur wese bhi 2-3 din mein mujhe discharge bhi mil jaega. Pls don't cancel your honeymoon."

Reception Night
Note: okay I don't know what all happens at pregnancy and all. So if it doesn't happen this way, to koi ni fir bhi entertainment ke liye padh lena.

"Neha.. tu ab sunn rai hai yaa daat khaaegi. Tujhe kaha hai ek jagah beth.
Kal bhi pure din shaadi mein araam nai hua hai tera. Beta aisi naajhuk halat mein itni bhaag daud karna theek nai hai."

"Accha baba theek hai. Beth gai main ab khush. Ek toh dekh na maa mujhe jo lehenga pehnna ta wo main pehen nai paai bhaari ta isliye aur ab koi mujje kuch karne bhi nai de raha hai."

"Neha.. ab tum shaanti se bethogi.. warna main tumhe ghar chorke aa raha hun. " Ranveer warned Neha.

Neha was pregnant and had her date very near. But she was very adamant to attend Dev's wedding reception. So everyone was making sure she doesn't over stress herself.

***

At Dev-Sona's room.

"Please light make-up okay." Sona told the beautician.

Riya and Nikki giggled.

"Di.. oh sorry.. Bhabhi.. aaj aapki shaadi ka reception hai, aaj bhi aapko light make-up hi chahiye?"

"Arre.. toh shaadi ka reception hai toh kya mujhe bhootni dikhna chahiye? Nayi nayi aap light hi kariye"

"Sai kehrai hai Sonakshi.. Usse sundar lagne ke liye kisi make-up ki zarurt nai hai" Dev prompted.

He was trying hard to sneak in but his sisters made sure to tease and not let him in. He came up with the lamest of excuses to enter but only to be stopped at the door. And Sona kept enjoying this teasing.

"Bhaiyya...aap wapas aagye? Chaliye bahar chaliye.." Riya told pushing him out of the room.

"Arre main kyo bahar jaau.. mera bhi room hai..wo main..main reception ke kapde lene aaya ta.."

Nikki quickly went and took his clothes which were lying on the bed.

"Yeh lijiye..ab jaiye.."

"Tum log apne bade bhai se aise baat kar rahe ho?" He tried so sound serious.

"Ji haan..now go.."

Before going he sneaked and saw Sona giggling over at whatever was happening.

***

"Oh god yeh band kyo nai ho raha"
Sona kept struggling with the hook of her blouse.

Everyone had left her room as she had to get in to the lehenga.
Everything was done but just the hook of her blouse wasn't in a mood to be done.
She stood in the room, her back facing the mirror.

The door opened mutely and closed with a minimum bang. She could sense with the foot movement who it was and henceforth she stood still, her heart thumping to the loudest.

With small and slow steps which only increased her exhilaration he came at her back and lightly put his palm on her bare waist.

Mr.Dixit the anticipation is more than enough already. Don't drive me crazy now.' she thought to herself.

With a light touch first at waist Dev seized her closer to him. He could feel her body moving for deep breaths.

"Why didn't you lock the door from inside?" Now playing with her skin around her neck he asked.
"What if it wasn't me?"

"There cannot be anyone else here. I only belong to you" she said now her breathing getting a little normal on pace.


One of his hand feeling her smooth skin at her belly, he pulled her yet again, her back bumping into his chest. He trailed his fingers on her back slowly reaching the hook of her blouse.

She gently closed her eyes to perceive his touch even more. Claiming the hook he clasped it.

***

The newly wed couple walked down the main hall hand in hand.
Every eye was hooked to them as they made their way, glow on their faces and a beautiful smile enhancing their togetherness.

Sonakshi dressed in a gorgeous light pink lehenga looked angelic and her blush was a darker shade of it. Dev suited in a well fitted black tux couldn't look more charismatic.

The evening came down to an end after a series of meetings and greetings ,dance and drama.

The family greeted the guests as they left.
"Dev bhai now we should also leave. Its quite late." Ranveer said.

"Haan." Dev smiled and said.
"Neha tum already apne aap ko bahot exert kar chuki ho ab tum ghar jaake araam karo ok." Said Sonakshi being a sister in law and a doctor.

***

Taking out his tux, standing in his shirt and trousers Dev paced back and forth in the room waiting for Sonakshi.

Sona tum mujhse kal kya badla le rahi ho kya, where are you.?' he said to himself.

The door opened and Sonakshi entered. Without giving her any time to think he closed and locked the door and pinned her to the door only.
"Where were you?" He whispered.
A little startled by the sudden proximity she tried to speak "woh..main.."
Looking deep into her eyes with in a low voice he said
" Mrs. Dixit apne husband ko itna wait karana acchi baat nai hai." and chuckled a bit. Making Sona smile in shyness.

She freed herself and tried to move.
As she took few steps Dev held her hand brought her to him and hugged her from the back, now both of them faced the mirror.

"Kya kar rahe ho?" She said feeling shy.
"Kya kar raha hun?"
"Dev.."
"Tum sharmate hue aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho."
And both of them looked into the mirror.

The mirror had never given such a beautiful image. They could feel their togetherness even more.
"Dev..mujhe jaane dijiye na pls" she said as her usual self.

"Kyo?" Dev said nuzzling his nose over her neck.
"I have to change."
"Sona..It should be balanced right?"

"Matlab?" She said still shying away.
"I mean.. I helped you wear this so I should also.."

Before he could complete Sona who flushed with a blush moved out of his grip and tried to walk away and before she could move a step Dev lifted her up into his arms.

Carrying her delicately he placed her over the bed he got above her. Dimming the side lamp he brought his face closer to hers.

After a nice glare into her eyes he didn't want to delay it much further and he pressed his lips onto hers. Holding his shirt and hair tight she brought him even more close.

Cupping her face and findling with her hair he deepened with the kiss making her moan a little. She held his shirt so tight that the top button came off.

Rolling on bed, she came over him. Dev trailed down his fingers over the smooth skin of her waist making Sona go mad over his touch. A little breathless they were getting.

The intensity was reaching another levels altogether, the kiss becoming deepened and the touches - intimate.
Moving his hand over her back he got hold of the hook of her blouse.

Playing with the hook and increasing her desperation more he opened the first hook and kissed her earlobe.

*Beep beep beep* the phone rang.
To shut the noisy thing he stretched his hand to silent the call and kissed her again.

*Beep beep beep* the phone rang again. Sona catched a glare of the name of the caller and told Dev to stop for a while and picked up the call.

"Hello.."

"Hello Bhabhi.. actually Neha complained of labour pain when we were heading to home so I've rushed her to the hospital. "

"Okay okay Ranveer. Don't panic we'd as soon as possible."

Both Dev and Sona quickly got into their causal clothings and informed Ishwari about Neha's condition and all three of them rushed to the hospital.

***

"Congratulations.. your wife has given birth to a baby girl" the nurse gave the good news.

Everyone was very elated listening to the blissful news and their faces lightened up.
After an hour or so Dev asked Sona and Maa to leave for home and that he'll be staying at the hospital with Ranveer.

"Dev I'll also stay here." Sona said.
"Sonakshi you are already tired. Please tum ghar chali jao."

"Uska yaha rukne ka itna mann hai..toh rukne de na.. subah jaldi driver ko bhijwadi dungi wo Sonakshi ko le aaega ghar." Ishwari told Dev. She too was trying to be a good mother in law.

Sona, Dev and Ranveer stayed at the hospital the whole night. And Dev and Sona spent their night sleeping on the hospital chairs where Sona had put her head over Dev's shoulder.

In the morning both of them went on to meet Neha and congratulate her for welcoming a new life into existence.
"Thank you bhai, thank you Sona."

"Ab tumhe apna khayal bahot hi acche se rakhna hoga. Aur tumhari puri diet ki responsibility meri hai." Said Sona and everyone giggled.

Sona gestured Dev for something and he immediately nodded and picked up his phone to call someone. Neha noticed this and asked Dev to not call anyone.

"Kisko call kar rahe ho aap?"

"Woh.."

"I know.. par aap log apna honeymoon bilkul b cancel ya postpone nai kar rahe ho."

"Par Neha.."

"Par kya bhai.. mera dhyaan rakhne ke liye sab hai yaha.. Ranveer hai, meri do maa hai, bhabhi hai.. sab hai yaha.. aap log itne mushkilo ke baad saath hue ho aap log meri wajah se nai jaaoge toh mjhe bahot bura lagega.. aur wese bhi 2-3 din mein mujhe discharge bhi mil jaega. Pls don't cancel your honeymoon."

Done with the second part. I am not getting alot of time these days to write. So the update is here after a wait and not really a proof read it is. But I still hope you people like it. If you do then pls hit the like button and comment.
Oh yes one more thing.. suggest some destinations for their honeymoon.. I'd like to get your suggestions.😃
So do you guys want a passionate update or very passionate update?😳😳 (if I'd be at your place I would have definitely gone with the latter though😆😆)

Edited by _RS_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was awesome...
Excited for next part...
Update soon

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