os: better off without Dev Dixit

Hey new to this forum... my first try in writing an OS...inspiration is today's SBS segment where ISHWARI select groom for sonakshi...

So it begins...

At BOSE House...

Everybody was sitting and having there evening tea and discussing sonakshi's life post break up...

Elena says sona may show that she moved on ad is now looking for new beginning but i know masa and massi she is still stuck at Dev and wishes somewhere that they both can be together, i haven't seen her smiling since days and i so wish she smiles.

They all were lost in there discussion suddenly the heard the door bell , saurav went to open the door.

Saurav: who do you want to meet ?

P: i am from jodimaker.com i have come to meet your parents.

Saurav: turning and asking maa baba have you called anybody from jodimaker.

All were shocked and said no we haven't ,

P: no mrs ishwari dixit have send me to meet you all

Bose house was shocked more now they decided to call the representative inside.

P: hi mrs ishwari dixit has selected a guy from our site for your daughter and told me to tell so that you can get your daughter married .

BOSE House shocked suddenly Asha got up and started shouting who is that lady, who gave her this responsibility to select a boy for my daughter, she was fuming in anger, suddenly they hear SONA'S voice...

MAAA...

Who is this guy and why is he here...

They tell her the whole thing... sona just couldn't believe it and was fuming in anger and just then she decided its time to put your foot down and teach the DIXIT'S a lesson...

Sona left Bose house in anger and reached Ishwari niwas...

As she was entering her good old memories came back to her but she was in no mood to let them overpower her , she barged into the drawing room with the jodi breaker guy...

Everybody was present there even neha and ranveer was also there as they came to meet Ishwari...

Sonakshi : Mrs Ishwari Dixit what do you think of yourself ? who are you? All were very shocked with sona's language RR got up and started taunting sona jiji dekho kitni lambi ho gayi hai iski jaban ... acha kiya Dev ne chodh diya...

Sona: i am not talking to you neither i am interested in talking to a female who herself have no identity of herself and whose only work is to just spoil other's happiness...

Dev who was standing behind came forward and asked why are you talking like this sonakshi...

Sonakshi ignoring Dev asked Ishwari again but came no reply...

Sona said you think you are my mother, my grand mother, my best friend or somebody who is very close to me that you will find a rishta for me and send it to my family .

All were shocked and Dev couldn't believe what he was hearing...

Ishwari, i was just trying to help your parents...

Sona cuts her off and said " no you were not helping my parents but you were trying to make sure that me and Dev never reconcile in future, so let me tell you one thing MRS ISHWARI DIXIT i am glad you did all that drama, actually i am happy you showed me true face of your son...your son is a not a man of his words... he cannot take stand for his love, he is a coward who runs away when problem comes to him, a very weak person he is"...

Dev was shocked listening to all that tears were rolling down but he could not do anything , he knew he was responsible for everything...

Sona says " you think i will come back to this kind of a man and this kind of family who are so selfish, self-absorbed that they cannot think beyond themselves... i am better off without you guys...

You can keep your son to yourself all your life and i don't care... i wont even come back to him even if you and all your family will plead too...

I will get married and will have a happy life because i know my family can find a better match for me that your Dev who will value me and will stand for me when time comes not like your son who can abandon anybody...

Let me tell you one more thing you son can never keep any girl happy... he is not capable of that...

Sona gave angry glare to Ishwari who was shocked to core to hear such harsh word for her son but before she could say anything to sonakshi... sona had already turned around...

Sona was all set to leave but then turned around o say

" I am better off without your Son"

i hope you guys like it... my first try...

Thanks dear for this!!!!much needed at this time...

Res. And Welcome to the forum

Hi, i Loved it.. U don't seem writing for the first time. So well have u written that it feels sona shud exactly give it back to ishwari.
I feel for a dev but then seeing the way he broke up and now in today's segment was laying on ishwari's lap, I am furious. I thought dev will not speak with ishwari but it doesn't seem so. Plus He listens to RR. I hate the way he doesn't speak up. I really am happy sona took the stance and gave it back. Thanks a lot for writing this story. It pleases my heart to see sona replying back to that psycho lady.

Very nice OS 👏

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Amazinggg...
how beautifully u penned it...
loved sona very much..
what she said was completely true..
sona in lioness mode...
totally njoyeddd...
hope something like will happen in show..

Wowww wowww wowww. This is just brilliant and want the exact scene to be played in the show.

WOW WOW . This was brilliantly written. The need of the hour. Really wish exact scene comes in the serial too. Really loved the bashing from Sona to eshwari. First it was Dev who broke sona prospective alliance and then started match making. And now his mom doing the same.

I wish sona gives her piece of mind to ishwari 😡 who the hell is she find an alliance for sona
In this also she doesn't wish any gud for sona its only her selfish motive to keep dev n sona away for life
N I'm seriously pissed off after seeing dev laying his head on ishwari's lap and listening to RR's crap 😡

I want such scenes to happen in show too. Ishwari needs to know what she has done.loved it to the core.