After the Phone Conversation: A DevAkshi OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is my very first attempt at writing an OS, please forgive any mistakes. This continues after the fight /argument in yesterday's episode.

Will be waiting for your reviews. Happy Reading!😊


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'After the Phone Conversation'

Sonakshi kept turning in her bed, She simply was unable to get today's fight out of her mind. She sat up and switched on the night lamp beside her bed. .Elena was sleeping peacefully. She wanted to wake her up, her heart was feeling heavy. .It was the first time that Dev and her did not talk for so long.

Actually, it was merely 6 hours since she last cut his call. But, it was suffocating for her.

Instead of waking Elena, she ended up stroking her hair lovingly and tucked the blanket on her nicely.


Mai kya karu? Dev bhi pareshan honge. .I should not have forced him to speak to Auntiji. Wo keh rahe the ke Auntyji ne unse bhi baat nahi ki. .

"Should I call him?"


She picked up her phone and started dialling his number. Only one ring went through and she cut the call.


" It is 2am for God's sake Sona! Wo so gaye honge, pata nhi unki tabiyat kaisi hogi"

But she was wrong. The phone flashed Dev's name as it rang. He had not slept too.

"Hello!" She spoke.

She could not hear anything from the other end.

"Dev?"

No response, but she knew he was on the line.

"Dev, apko baat nahi karni to mai phone cut kar rahi hu"


"Sonakshi! Ruko . .ruko!"

He finally spoke.

"Ye kya baat hui Mr Dixit?" she spoke with a very low voice, distress clearly reflecting in it.

"Ms. Bose, silent treatment sirf aap de sakti hai kya?" Said Dev with an equally low voice, but his attempts to be normal were very evident.

He could imagine Sonakshi smiling a bit, at his line.

"Dev, apko neend nahi aa rahi?"

"Hmm, aap bhi to nahi soyi"


"Aise ladai karte hai to mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta"


"Mujhe bhi, Sonakshi."

"Dev, I am sorry maine aise apko bina sune phone cut kar diya. . "

"Hmm, mujhe bohot hurt hua Sonakshi. .apko pata hai na aap aise karti hai to mujhe kaise lagta hai. Par aap bhi to pareshan thi, mujhe samajna chahiye. .kya ho gaya tha? Aap ghar jaldi kyu chali gayi? Meri wajah se. . Ya kisi ne kuch kaha apse"


"Dev, ek baat kahu. .?"

"Haan bolo na"


"Abhi mai sirf apse baat karna chahti hu, bas normally. Please kuch aisa nahi kehte ke fir ladai ho jaye"


"Acha, to Ms. Khargosh aapko mujhse kal sab share karna pdega. .thik hai na?"


Sonakshi could visualize his eyes lighting up as he said Khargosh. She couldn't help but smile.


"Done. Par ye bataiye Mr. Dixit ke mere Mr. Aubhodro ki tabiyat ab kaisi hai"

"Oh ho?! Mere Aubhodro. . Kyaa baat hai! Pehle to khud unko jhatkarti hain. . Ab puch rahi hai kaise hai. . Apke bina kaise ho sakte hai Ms. Khargosh. . "

"Aww! I love this cheesy Dev" she said with a giggle. .

"And I love you Sonakshi."

He said with all the warmth and love in the world, in his voice.

For the 8th time Dev said this (yes, she was counting😆). .but Sonakshi could not stop her blush.

"I wish mai abhi apke paas hota. .to apko. . "

"He stopped there.

"Apko??"


"Apko Sona nahi hai kya Ms. Khargosh? Time dekha hai. . Chaliye sojayiye. . "

"Okay Dev, Good night"

"Good night Sonakshi.Mai sab thik kar dunga, I promise"

"I know, Dev. I know"

Dev touched the phone to his heart as he cut the call, with a peaceful smile on his face while Sonakshi moved to her bed with exact same smile.


They knew that they will keep fighting, keep disagreeing, will fail to understand each other at times. . But in the end, they will be back to being together, for they are inseparable.

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aaliah3108 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aa jaa ...aa jaaa !!! I want to hug u for this.

Such a sweet scene yaar !!

I so wish Dev - Sona talk to each other before he talks to Mamaji ...they really should... I am hoping against hope that this will happen ...I really want them to talk ...and realise they just hurt each other uselessly and unknowingly...


Love u Saumya for putting this on paper at least !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww 👏😳 nice OS...I hope it happens in the show...ek sms bhi chalega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome..I wish devakshi resolve their problems like this Everytime when they fight
It was so cute and so loved their restlessness to sort out the hurdles
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow superb saumiee ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a beautiful os
Do keep writing dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooo cute..really nice very sweet..👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww..this is very cute Soumya..😳 I was also thinking they should talk to each other normally once in the night. It will be great if we get such a scene😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww loved your thought They will keep fighting but they will patch up asap because they just can't stay mad at each other for a long time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet.wish they patch up soon.

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