FF:- ~HIGH SCHOOL FUN WITH DEVAKSHI~ IMP Note on Pg 76 - Page 47

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Awesome andys sweet update
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Awesome andys sweet update

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You are killing me with your updates these day. Just Perfect. ❤️Loved how you write them.🤗
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Devakhsi part was awsm..loved it..

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Waiting for the update of your both FF Aditi.
Are you busy in your studies, then no worries, we can wait for long too.
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Originally posted by: kashishbano

Waiting for the update of your both FF Aditi.
Are you busy in your studies, then no worries, we can wait for long too.

So sorry dii, for keeping you waiting
I have written the parts!!😊
Will update in some time😊
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Originally posted by: kashishbano

Awesome Aditi. NICE UPDATE DEAR. 👏
Sweet and lovely chapter.
Suman aur shravan ke chance pe devakshi ka dance, I mean song. 😛 starbucks...
Wink of dev and misunderstanding of sonakshi 😆 .
Btw, dev said yeh toh hum se bhi aage nikla aur ustad hai 😉 .what did he mean.?
Enjoyed it. Very interesting Aditi.
Waiting for the next update.
Love and big hug to you as usual ❤️ 🤗

Thank you dii🤗
Ab what did he mean, yeh toh usko hi pata hoga naa..😆😆
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Here is the next chapter-
Credit for the Banner:- CarpedeimRose

CHAPTER 14

school 8:00 am

Eng class

All sitting on their places.Sonakshi is carefully listening to teacher , Dev busy staring at her, shravan staring at suman

Shravan:ufff...yeh ada...aaye haaye ada...hosh udaye ada...karde deewana...adaa...janleva adaa..katilana addaa...mar dale naaa..;

Dev:uff...ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga..jaise shyar ka khwaab...jaise khilta gulab...jaise ugli kiran...jaise... Hamlet's internal conflicts ...

Tea:Dev...Dev...Describe Hamlet's internal conflicts..

Dev:[coming out of sonakshi land]oh...yaa...umm...Hamlet was...umm...having internal conflicts...yaa...

Tea:we all know tht...decribe it...according to his soliloquy.

Dev:umm...I don't know...

Now, sonakshi ko pata chal jata hai ki he was looking at her so she looked at him with angry eyes...

Teacher starts teaching again,telling Dev to concentrate.now Dev is listening but attention is in his dreams.But Yeh kyaaa...



Sonakshi is staring at dev jo board pe dekh raha tha

Now dev turns towards her and smiles at one side of his cheeks ..sona too smiles but then comes out of la la land , grins, pretends to rite something ..looks back at dev and finds dev is already staring at her..She winks at him, dev ko toh jhatka laga...bohot zor ka..and mann hi mann mein muskura raha hai...lik this, staring and aankhein churaofying chalta rehata hai...for lik a half an hour...lol

Tea:Now u all will sit in groups,everyone on the left sides will go with everyone on left of another row and same for right siders,change the spots now...

Group1- Dev,sonakshi,Sierra[sierra is Natasha-does not understand hindi/urdu-just normal girl in class]

Group2-kri,ang,Ben[ben is Aditya of edkv-normal guy -understands a bit of hindi/urdu,just a bit-normal guy ,(kya karoo...koi aur naam nahi yaad aa raha...isliye Ben...likhne mein bhi short hai..lol)]

Tea:now decide group leaders first,then .[.blah..blah...koi assignment deke goes]

Group1

Sona:I ll b grp leader

Dev:no I ll b ..

Sierra:I don wanna b...u 2 decide..

Sona:ok...me then

Dev: Suno...I ll b grp leader...I have more experience!

Sona:ok...sierra u say..I m more eligible ryt.?not Dev

Sierra:ya..umm..

Dev:[sierra ka haath pakad leta hai] me 2, beautiful

Sierra:umm...ya...

Sona:ok..lets vote...sierra...u want dev?

Dev sierra ki book giratta hai ,both bend down,dev winks at sierra ...

Sonakshi:[sona sees this,she is jealous]Do u want dev to b the grp leader??

Sierra:plz guys...stop it...lets just divide the work...


Group2

Shravan:I m not gonna b grp leader

Suman:me neither..Y don't u Ben

Ben:umm...I was absent for 2 days,I donno the recent stuff..I m I gonna guide u guys..

Shravan:ok..then...sumo is the grp leader

Sumo:noo...U r ...

Shravan:no...u

Sumo:no...u

Ben:fine...I ll b it...u guys can jst help me out with the story...will u suman?[sumo ka haath pakadta hai and uski chair suman ke paas leta hai]

Suman:I ll surely help..here...copy these notes...u lll get the main idea

Ben:ok...[aur paas aata hai sumo ke][guys..use notes likhne hai isliye..not for any other reason]

Shravan[shravan ko toh gussa aa raha hai...Ben pe..]Hey,Ben take mine,sumo's notes r incomplete and untidy ,see my work

Ben:no ..i can get her writings,..and its complete

Sumo:[gussa]Hey shravan,if u donno ,don tell tht my work is stupid...look at urs...its awful..

Shravan:I think there's some problem with ur eyes...plz get them checked...I can read my thing okay!!

Sumo:tu kaun hota hai muje aise kehne wala???

Shravan:umm...mein tera...umm..tumhara...umm...

Ben:well guys chill,lets start with the work

Suman[thinks]:yeh maine kya puch liya...thik ho toh pucha...jo uske mann mein hai...wohi toh kahega..

Shravan:[looks at sumo with mischevious eyes]bata doon...

Suman:[holds Ben's hands]wait...don write tht part...its rough work...fair is on next page

Shravan[ very very very jealous]:is BEn ki toh main...aisi ki taisi..

Group1

Sierra;u both look lik ,umm...r u both bro-sis??

Dev:NO WAY!!!![sierra ka haath chhod deta hai and drags his chair near sonakshi]She's my friend...V r friends...hmm...ya...friends...

Sona:[laughing]Dev,ab kuch dino mein Rakshabandhan hain...aao ge naa...Tumhe meri taraf se special invitation!

Dev:WHAAATT!![accha toh,madam ko shaitani sujh rrahi hai..hmm...dikhata hoon ise toh...group leader banne nikli hai...ise toh mein banata hoon...maaamuuu]haan behna...mein zaroor aaunga...lekin usse pehle[takes sierra's hand]mein ise ek yummy si kiss dena chahta hoon...

sierra [ busy writing something]:Gosh!...these both started it again...tht too in their language!

Sona:[in total gussa]WHT THE HELL!!Shut up...mein koi teri behen -wehen nahi hoon...Stupid!!
Dev:are...bura maan gayi...koi baat nahi...bhai duuj[comes after 2 days of diwali]Bhai duuj par bhi aa jaunga bas...ab toh khush...!!

Sonakshi:stands up and storms out of the class

Dev:[(to himself)abe Dev , is sierra ko mar goli][sierra ko chhodta hai...]sonakshi!!sonakshi!![uske piche piche daud raha hai]sun tho sahi...yaar...sunna meri baat ko..

Sonakshi:kya hai[turns towards him in gussa]

Dev:Sun.koi aur bhai-behen ka festival reh gaya ho toh bata de...aa jaunga yaar...kya hua be...

Sonakshi:[more and more angry]ahh...u!!...achha ek baat batao...who sierra ke bare mein tu waisa sochta hai kya

Dev:no yaar...I was just trying to make u jealous...and u r jealous...u r eh?...haan...r'nt u?

Sonakshi:[moves towards other side]and do u really find me as ur sister...??

Dev:no man...I was just kidding.,..Y r u feeling so jealous and weird abt us two...tum kaun ho meri...ki ...

Sonakshi is spellbound...:umm...woh...umm...ohh...I forgot my books in class..bye.[shys away]..[jaate jaate...dur se..] tumhari FRIEND!!...


That was the end of the chapter!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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