FF:- ~HIGH SCHOOL FUN WITH DEVAKSHI~ IMP Note on Pg 76 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Yes ofcourse Additi...CONTINUE IT...loved the concept..

Thank you😳😳
I would surely continue😊
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Go ahead with it dear... Would love to read your FF.😊
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Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

Go ahead with it dear... Would love to read your FF.😊

Thank you Jyoti dii😊
I would continue ASAP😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds very interesting dear...
Plz do contine dear... Would love to read ur FF
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice thought Aditi...from me also Aditi 😆
Highschool Devakshi.. sounds quite interesting. Pls share the prologue / character sketches soon and add me to your PM list 😊
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Sounds very interesting dear...
Plz do contine dear... Would love to read ur FF


Thank you dii😊
I will😊
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Originally posted by: aditi07

Nice thought Aditi...from me also Aditi 😆

Highschool Devakshi.. sounds quite interesting. Pls share the prologue / character sketches soon and add me to your PM list 😊


Thank you so much Aditi dii😊😊
I must say, you have a lovely name😉😆😆
I will continue soon😊
And surely pm you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii everyone!!
Thank you for liking my concept!!
I have posted the Character sketch😊
And would soon be posting the 1st chapter😊

Love you all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for your love, support and encouragement.Character Sketch is on page 1. Here is the first chapter-

Credit for the Banner:- CarpedeimRose

Chapter 1

A girl from Air India steps on tht land and her hair r coming all over the face cuz of the wind...thts our dear SONAKSHI.


A guy jumps up from the bed like a spring after hearing the darn Alarm and shuts it off and sleeps again, but the sun rays from the window wake him up...thts our dear DEV.




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Suman:Are yaar...kitni der laga di ...I was waiting for u outside the airport..


Sona: Kya kahu yaar...wo immigration walo ne roka tha..to take pic and all documents stuff...


Sumo:Oh ok ok.. I get it...so..how was the journey??


Sona:Sooo tiringgg...but fun...cuz I traveled in plane for da 1st time...lolzzz


Sumo:Oo I c...yaar...teri bohot yaad ayi...aur mujhe tujhse itniii saari batein karni hai ...intniii saari baatein karni hai...tht kya kahoon kitnii saaa[ sona stops her>


Sona:Haan...ab yeh dialogue baji band kar...mera samman kaun uthayega...tu...????


Sumo:La mein uthati hoon [ moves ahead to take one of the bags]...


Sona:Rehene de bohot bhari hai...and waise bhi its just 1 bag...and car is just a few steps ahead...I ll do it...


Both go towards the car...they put luggage ...they sit...they go to sumo's home...



Actually sumo is living alone(she came on student visa) ,same with sona...now they r gonna live together...



Here comes sumos home...ek flat hai...she opens the door...typical Indian ghar hai..[from inside] (lolz)...Indian khane ki khoshbu aa rahi hai...



Sona:Are tuje Indian khana banana kab aaya...tuje toh kuch bhi nahi aata tha naa//!!


Sumo:Yahan aake sab sikh liya...


Sona:Wowww...chalo achha hai...where's da washroom...I wanna go to freshen up...


Sumo:Straight to the right...tum jao.., tab tak , mein khana lagati hoon...


Sona:[thinking( to herself)> bol toh aise rahi hai...jaise mein uska pati hoon..."khana laga deti hoon"


She freshens up and comes back and sits on table...her legs r paining...


Sona:La tuje help kar do...


Sumo:No just yeh microwave mein hi garam karna hai...nothing long to do...u sit and relax...


Sona:Ok


Tabhi she picks up the remote to switch on the tv...and to her surprise she sees...there is a bill!!!


Sona:Are yeh kya??... khana hotel se layaaa tune...mujhe doubt to ho hi gaya tha...ki tu meri achanak itni seva kyun kar rahi hai...kya zaroorat thi...hello mam...mien burgar ,pizza kha sakti hoon...


Sumo:No actually burger pizza kaa samaan hai..but mujhe aaj Indian kahana khana tha tere saath...aur itne dino se nahi khaya ...


Sona:Yaar...leking this cud be expensive naaa..


Sumo:Are hum toh parties mein bahar se hi late hai...and nothing costly...its normal...


Sona:Ok ...I see...


They both eat...and then go into the room...Sona enters the room...its all pink...cuz pink is Sumo's fav. Color...


Sona:yeh kya??...pink achha hai...but this is too much yaar...ab mein aa gayi hoon...I m gonna put curtains sky blue color and bed peach color...


Sumo:No...I said no...yeh toh aisa hi rahega...


Sona:No I m gonna change it...wahan India mein bhi hostel mein yeh haal tha...yaad hei...log hame pinky kehte the...


Sumo:Kehte hai toh kahen...and waise bhi no1 gonaa come here...


Sona:Ok lets do 1 thing...u take tht bed I ll take this 1...and I ll put all my things on this side...u put there...


Sumo:Ok ...


They start talking...Sumo talks abt their old Indian friends and Sumo talks abt her new friends in the school...


Sona: hey where is the school...and when shall I go for admission...and all my documents ...and my ...


Sumo:Ufff...don worry...I have already talked with ur counselor and u can hand him ur marksheets from Indian school...he ll see it and probably u ll have to take a simple test...and they ll give u 4 courses this semester...and listen...take physics,chem.,bio and phys ed...this sem...it ll b good for u...


Sona:Ok...physics is hard...


Sona:u think tht...but over here.u ll not find it hard...


Blah blah ballahh...lik this they talk abt school stuff...and all tht..




P.S- This was the first part. Please tell me how was it. Do hit the like button if you liked it and comment








Edited by .FlyingClouds. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice concept...and loved the 1st part.Would love to see Dev and sonakshi in high school.
Sona and sumo kitne ek jaise names hai😆
Continue soon.

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