FF:- ~HIGH SCHOOL FUN WITH DEVAKSHI~ IMP Note on Pg 76 - Page 15

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Ok Guys, I didn't go to school today!! ( extended assembly thi)😆😆
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Awesome dear. 👏 .
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Here is the most awaited chapter!!😃😃
Before that, I would like you all to note the following things:-
1. Suman,shravan and Dev have been there for a long time,only Sonakshi is new, so shravan, suman , Dev know each other from grade 10...2yrs(but Sumo does not talk a lot...u all will know it when will read read other parts)
2. Dev wears spects and is very thin( very studious too)😆😆
like this,
So, here goes the chapter!!
CHAPTER 5:-

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DHAMMMDHAMMMDHAAAMMM

She bangs into a guy... the first thing she noticed abt him is his eyes. DEV too noticed her eyes.




[Situation: Dev is sitting ,actually kinda lying on the floor, sonakshi fallen ,kinda sitting on Dev's lap,on his legs, books all over the place...]

[After a few seconds]

Dev: Haiii...goshhh...hello!!u gal!can't u see properly...here take these glasses,,,u need them badly[ uske nikal ke aage karta hai]...and wht the hack r u doing with these many books??? U don have a locker or wht??
Sonakshi: Actually...
Dev: areee...mera pairrr...mar gayaaa...ufff[ guys socho zara...tabh to he was not soo strong naa guys!...]
Sonakshi:Indian ho?
Dev:haan hoon,iska yeh matlab nahi hai,that u break my leg!
sonakshi uddenly stands up from his leg

Sonakshi:actually I m new, its my first day today,I m searching for room 623 tht English,Mr.Durek's class.
Dev helps her with picking all her books,in this, her bio book gets exchanged with Dev's chem. Book.
Dev:ok...I have English too, so v r in da same classes ,lets go..
They r running thru the hallway ,cuz class is far wawy and they r already a bit late. Shravan appears from nowhere and whispers in Dev's ear tht u don have any other work than falling with girls!
Shravan: Hey ,man will u take these books I g2g to my locker and then to the library to return thtt novel...
Dev:Yo, wait..i can't hold these many...cant u c I already have...[but Shravan is gone]
Huhhh Gosh this guy!!is sooo disorganized ..he keeps everything till last due date,and panices at the end
Sonakshi: So ,he's ur friend...wht's his name? And ya ur name too?by da way I m Sonakshi
Dev:I m Dev and he was shravan..
They reach the class.
Now,they sit lik this...suman and shravan come late and come to their places.

Board...
Teacher

--- --- --- --- --- --- ------ ------ ------- --------
Sona sumo shravan dev others

--- --- --- --- --- ---- ------- ------- ------- ------
o t h e r ss ...

Sonakshi:[to suman] why didn't u tell me where the the class was ...it was so difficult for me to find this class
Suman:ooppsss...i m sorry...i was in a bit hurry...then how come u r here early?
Sonakshi: Devan helped me out...
Suman: Hello ppl,v have a new student today,this is Sonakshi and u all r supposed to help her out with her missed classes and notes. [to sonakshi]Don't worry u did not miss a lot,Just a few poems...I am available during lunch hours if u need my help on anything u don understand.I moved the test on thursday instead of today[ all ppl become happy..especially Shravan, kyonuki he didnot prepare naaa]SO we just started a Shakespearean play, and v r finished with the analysis part of Act1 Scene 1...[blahh blah...starts teaching]
All pay attention
Suman and sonakshi whispering
Suman: wht the hack were u talking abt?? Who helped u?
Sonakshi: Devan yaar...he s in our class..
Suman:"which class ??
Sonakshi- this class...wahi pe to batha hai,tumhare right wale ke side mein
Teacher:Silence plz
Now they stop talking & listen to teacher...
... ... ... ... Class finished
Suman: whts ur next class?
Sonakshi gives her tht schedule
Suman: hmm...so u got physics,bio and phys education...great...so u have 3 sub with me but in 1 sub u ll have different class...fair enough...SO now its physics,room 253. first lets go to our lockers
Dev and Shravan go to theirs
Sonakshi:oh...how to use these combination lockers?I just don get this...
Suman teaches her ,but she doesnot get,so kripa opens it for her & tells her tht she ll get it after doing 2-3 times...They go to physics class , Dev& Shravan r already in tht class But separate, Sonakshi and Suman have to sit separate too...that teaher makes the ppl sit alphabetically.

Teacher teaches... ...class finished.

Its lunch time...
All go to their own lockers...take their lunch and go to cafetaria.first sona and sumo then dev and shravan...girls have still not met/seen the guys in cafteria...

Sumo[to Sona]:Hey, c I g2g in library for some books to check out, I ll b back in 10 min or so..[goes]
Shravan[to Dev]:Yaar, who question p papers lene jana hai,mein library jake aata hoon...,ll b bak in 10 min or so

Sonakshi sees Dev now...

Sonakshi: Devan...Devan...oh hello...(kitna bhav kha ra hai(mann mein))...she goes behind her and slightly taps on her back
Sonakshi: hey Devan, whts up?...howz shrad??u r in physics too...am I correct?howz it going?
Dev turns back lekin piche koi nahi...
Dev: r u talking to me?
Sonakshi: of course..i don even know any1 else here at this point...
Dev: hello!!My name is DeV and his name is shraVAN...
Sonakshi: oopss... tabhi main sochu ki yeh shrad I mean shravan ka naam shrad, shraddha ...seemed to me lik name of a girl...
Both laugh really loud...
Dev: Ya, I m in tht physics class too...shravan was there too...and tht gal with whom u were sitting in eng class too is in phy class...
Sonakshi: are yaar...whom r u introducing me to...??haha mein aur suman saath mein toh rehte hain...
Dev: oh I see...shravan and suman[stops] ,ya ,so tht physics teacher doesnot let us sit where eva we can..
Sona: I know eh...wht class do u have after lunch...I have bio..
Dev: really?? Me tooo
Sona: great but sumo has math
Dev: shravan has math too...I think they r in same classes, cuz there's just 1 teacher who is teaching math of gr 12 for diplomas...
Sonakshi: oh I see...but ther might b lots of bio classes...I have bio with mrs. Burges
Dev: me too...she is a nice teacher...
Sonakshi:wht after tht? I have physical education
Dev:this is unbelievable!! me too...
Sonakshi: so wht r they teaching in tht
Dev:its just some normal exercising and jogging cuz its good weather out ther...
Sonakshi: hmm...I see..

Shravan and suman come from different doors in the cafeteria & see Dev & Sonakshi sitting on 1 table together& talking so heartedly & laughing. Both Shravan and Suman 's mouths get wide open.

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Edited by .FlyingClouds. - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
🤣 Devan.. Shradha.. Nice .. Loved it Adi..
Edited by Monaleojan - 9 years ago

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