OS:Destiny of Love Part 2 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Im beginning a new story here...if u guyz lyk it plzz cmmnt...only den
i'll continue with the nxt part...if u dnt lyk it sorry for wasting ua
tym..

Part 1

Sonakshi was getting ready to go to hospital.
"Sona betta, tu elena ko lene jaate wakth white n red roses le aayegi? "
"Baaba...aapka toh jawab hi nehi... maa ke har ek bday par aap ye phoolen dete hei...so romantic "
"Arrre...mein nehi dunga toh kya humare padossi denge tumari maa ko phool? "
"Haa haa pata hei... dnt worry... aapke roses aapko milenge Mr.romantic Bose "
"Khushbu boutique se laana.. shaam ko fresh flowers waha hi milte hei "
"Ok... abh iss romantic baba ki beti ko jaane dijiye... im getting late "
"Haa beta..Tu jaa.. bye "
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"Hloo...Sona...tu kab pahunchegi? "
"haaa...Elenaa mei bass thodi der mei pahunchungi "
"Thodi der matlab? Dnt tell me ki tu abhi tak hospital mei hei "
"Arre tu tensn kyun le rahi hei..I ll b there soon "
"Agar tu 30.minutes ke pehle nehi aayi toh mei akele chali jaungi "
"Offo..tensn mat le... mei abhi pahunchungi... bye "
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- Somehow sonakshi's scooter made her way through the traffic and she reached the shop.
"Baiyya... white n red roses dijiye "Sona rushed into the shop and said.
"Rajnath, mere roses dijiye " She heard a man say aftr she ordered.
"Sorry madam... white n red roses nehi hei "
"Kya? Aise kaise..aap dekh...".sona was cut short by the stranger again.
"Rajnath, jaldi karo "
"Ye lijiye dev sir...".Sona was shocked to see the shopkeeper give white n red roses to Dev.
"Arre baiyya, aapne toh kaha tha nehi hei... toh phir ye kaha se aaya? "
D:"ye mere flowers hei...aapko chahiye toh koi aur shop mei jaao "
S:aapke flowrs? Aapke naam likha hei kya issme... and for ua kind information, meine pehle maangi thi, so these are mine. Saying that she grabbed the bouquet frm dev.
D:excuse me..hw dare u? mere flowrs vaapas karo..
He tried to get back the flowrs bt sona held them behind her. Dev got annoyed by her behavior. He yelled at the shopkeeper "Rajnath, iss ladki se flowrs vaapas karne k liye kaho warna... ".
"Madam plzz... dev sir har shaam yahan se phool lete hei.. yeh unhi ka hei... aap plz dhoosri shop mei jaao "
"Muje woh sab nehi jaanna...aap ye batao ki kitna hua... waisse bhi aaj ek din k liye aapke dev sir dhoosri shop mei chale jaayenge... ".she made a fake smile at dev..
"Aap kitni badtameez hei...abhiii mere flowrs vaapas karo" dev shouted at her and tried to get flowrs.
"Oo hello, badtameez mei nehi aap ho..aapko bass chillaana aata hei..ek din aapki girlfrnd ko flowrs nehi milenge toh kuch nehi hoga... par aaj meri maa ki bday hei... so i want this for sure."
"Mera koi gf nehi hei...yeh meri behen k liye hei..aur mei iss liye chillaa raha hu kyunki aapki behaviour hi itni childish hei." He shouted again pointing finger at her.
"haan haan... aapke gf kaise ho sakta hei.. aise badtameez insaan ke saath kaun rehna chaahega..Aapse argue karne ka mere paas tym nehi he...issliye.. ". She kept money at the table and walked out of the shop as fast as she can saying "bhaiyya ye lo 50 rupees ...baaki paise rakhlo".

Dev tried to get her bt she ran as if she were in a race, got on her scooter and rode away.

Edited by fionadsouza - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆so cute nok jhok
Dev couldn't catch her😆
Lovely
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start with their Nokh-jhokh... It's seems very interesting... Plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start... Do continue.😊👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow a graceful starting


Love to read more and more

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi fiona, that was an interesting story... I was thinking Dev might grab her wrist & the flowers would slip off her hand & fall on both of them... LOL (Since they were Roses)
Do continue & PM me the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute one
Loved the fights between dev and sona
Continue soon and pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start :)
Loved it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SewwandiVB

Hi fiona, that was an interesting story... I was thinking Dev might grab her wrist & the flowers would slip off her hand & fall on both of them... LOL (Since they were Roses)

Do continue & PM me the next update...


ua imaginatn is awsumm...bt grabbing a girlz hand (who is a total stranger to him) will b bad manners naa...dev will never do that...thats wt i think...😉
bt diz scene wud hv been totally lovey-dovey...roses,roses everywhere...Awww 😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Sona reached the airport and searched for elena, but in vain.
She dialled elena's number many times, bt it was unreachable. Sona knew she was late. The sun had almost sunk into the sea and paved way for the moon. As tension started brewing in her mind elena called her.
s:elena, kaha chali gayi tu? Kitni dher se try kar rahi hu... fon unreachable aa raha hei...
E: sonaa,, mei phas gayi hu...pata nehi ye kaha aa gayi mei... yahan se auto aur taxi nehi mil raha
S:meine bola thaa naa akele mat chali jaana.. tu kuch landmark batao... mei abhi aati hu.. just stay der
E: haa sonaa...tu jaldi aa jaa... muje kuch tteekk nehi lag raha..mei city star construction site ke paas hu
S: dnt worry, mei abhi aati hu
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It took her sometime to find the location.
Elena ran and came to her when she saw sona.
E(hugging sona tightly): sonaa... thank god ,tu aa gayi warna pata nehi kya ho jaata
S: tum tteek ho na?
E: I'm fyn...bt yaha ke ladke naa... impossible...itne badtameez ladke meine aaj tak nehi dekhe..
S: kya hua? Kisine kuch kaha tujse? R u ok?
E: kuch ladke muje ched rahe the..mei akeli thi , isliye kuch nehi kar payi..lekin mei bhi kisise kam nehi..car ki no. note ki he meine..muje chedne aaya thaa kameena.. sona, chal hum police station chalte hei
S: kya? Abhi police station? Tu abhi abhi aayi he..aur ghar pe sab wait kar rahe honge.hum kal jaayenge... aaj rest kar le
E: bilkul nehi...pehle uss bewkoof ko ek zhabakh sikhana hei.. muje abhi jaana hei
S: ok fyn baba ... chalo
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Next day sona was getting ready for hospital as usual, but then elena came rushing to her jumping with joy.
E: sona , abhi muje police station se fon Aaya.. uss idiot ko arrest kiya
S: sach!!?
E: muje uss badtameez ko naa ek thappad lagaana he..tu raaste mei muje waha drop karna
S: arre...tu kyun thappad lagayegi jab teri behen hei uski ilaaj ke liye... dekh toh loon aakhir kisne cheda meri behen ko
E: wow Dr.sonaa..ekdum filmy huh... lagta hei nyt party k liye puri thaiyyari kar rakhi he...
S: party se yaadh aaya.. tu naa maa ko kuch mat batana..aaj uska day hei..mei nehi chahti ki woh pareshan ho.. police ke naam sunte hi pareshan ho jaayegi
E: tu tension mat le..tu naa buss apni unke baare mei soch... dada ne bataya muje ki party mei uske pariwar bhi honge
S: haan...actually dada ne hi invite kiya tha un logo ko..humare famly se milwaane k liye ...dada toh mere peeche hi pade hei..
E: kaash woh bhi aate...Dada ne bataya bahut hot hei.. tu mili hei kya usse?
S: naa..woh ek baar ghar aaya tha..dada k saath..thab mei nehi thi.. lekin baaki sabse mila.. aur shuru hui rishte ki bhaath..I hope aaj hi meri shaadi naa fix ho jaaye
E: I wish dada mere liye bhi koi hot ladka doondke laathe..achaa ek foto toh hoga naa tere paas..dikhaao naa sonaa plzz
S: mere paas foto voto nehi hei.. tu dada se jaakar pooch..jab shaadi hi nehi karni toh foto dekhar kya karungi?
E: sona.. tu bhi na..bilkul nehi badli..and dada muje foto nehi dhika raha..bol raha tha "nazar lag jaayega mere dev babu ko" ... meine bhi keh diya "muje nehi dekna" bade aaye dev babu ka chamcha
S:tu naa ye sab baatein chod aur thaiyyar ho jaa.
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At police station, sona and elena went to the Sub inspector(SI) they had met yesterday.
E : thank u so much sir. Aapne itni jaldi usse arrest kiya.
SI : it's our duty. Aap log Mere saath aao..we need confirmation from u.. vaise vicky naam hei uska.
He directed them towards the lockup.
E: haa sir... yehi hei
V: tum? Tumari himmat kaise hui mere khilaf cmplaint karne ki?
S: jail ke andhar padne par bhi thameez nehi seekha kya?
SI: chup ho jaao. ye tera ghar nehi he...aur ladkiyon se aise bhaath karte he kya?
E: ise thameez ka matlab bhi pata nehi hoga.. ladkiyon ko chedenge toh aisa hi hoga , samje?
V: tuje pata nehi tu kis se bhaath kar rahi hei... mei ishwari communication owner ka bhai hu...
At that moment, constable came and told to SI that someone had come to bail vicky.
SI: mei dekhta hu
V:dekha, mera bhai aaya hoga.. meine bola tha naa... abh dekh kaise aasani se me yahan se aazhadh hota hu
S: elena, mei zara dekhti hu
E: haa sona...(turning to vicky ) tu kisika bhi bhai ho..muje kya hei.. pata nehi apne aapko kya samajtha hei..
Meanwhile sona was shocked to see the person talking to SI.
S: tum?!!!
Dev turned to see from where the voice came and became surprised as much as sona.
D: tum?!!!!! tum yaha?
SI: aap log ek dusre ko jaante he kya?
S: oh toh ye hei uss badtameez ka bhai...abh samaj mei aaya woh itnii thameez kaha se seekha
D: matlab tumne complaint ki thi vicky k khilaf? im sure tumne hi kuch kiya hoga..pata hei Kal teri wajah se mere ghar mei kitna tamasha hua..
SI: Mr. Dev, ek minute..isne nehi.. cmplaint iski behen ne kiya hei.. N sorry to say aapke bhai ka bail aaj nehi ho sakta..
D: dekhiye sir, aapko koi misunderstanding hua he.. mera bhai aisa nehi kar sakta..
SI: koi ghalatfehmi nehi.. vicky iski behen elena ko ched raha tha..sirf ye nehi..jail mei bhi aapka bhai bahut badtameezi dikha raha thaa.. chahiye toh aap khud dekh lijiye..
D: agar aisi bhaath hei toh usse yehi rehne dho.. muje nehi milna usse.. 2-3 din yahan rahenge toh shayadh sudhar jayega
S: agar aisa hei toh pehle aapko jail bejna tha... aap bhi thameez seekhthe !!
D: aap kya ye thameez thameez laga ke rakha hei ? Aap toh phd li hei naa issme , isiliye toh kisi aur ka flowers lekar 8 saal ki bhachi ki tarah bhaag gayi ..
S: aap muje 8 saal ki bachi bol rahe ho? Aap kon hote hei muje judge karne k liye?
D: Aur aap kon hote hei muje badtameez bolne k liye?
SI: excuse me... ye police station he.. aap aise bachon k tarah kyun lad rahe ho..
D: sorry sir, pata nehi mei aise kiddish logo se bhaath hi kyun kar raha hu..anyways sorry for the distrbance.
S: kya kaha ? Kiddish?..Aur mei?
Sona realised she was still shouting at him in front of everyone .
S: sorry sir, Muje bhi koi shauk nehi hei aise insaan se bhaat karne mei..pata nehi kaha se aa jaate he...ekdum impossi...
Before she could utter another word, Dev went off.
"Dekha.. muje kiddish keh raha thaa aur khud puri bhaath sune bhagair chale gaye!!" Sona murmured to herself. Elena came in but sona didn't notice.
E: sona tu kya akeli bhaath kar rahi he..aur kaha he uska bhai?
S: kuch nehii...woh chala gaya.. usko aaj bail nehi milega
E: achaa hua...lekin woh bewkoof sudarenge nehi..hum bhi chalte he.. yahan ek aur pal rukenge toh mera dimag kharab ho jaayega
S: haa.. muje bhi der ho rahi he. Chalte he.
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