SOME POSSILE PLOTS CONNECTING LEADS

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It's sundaysmiley40

I was in the middle of writing a scene for Aryaman and Krishna's divorce and their povs it appeared to me what could be a possible plot that connects all three leads emotionally. Here are some of my ideas-

Red: connections

Green: what we can get from plot

Black: plot


Aryaman and Mohan:


ARYAMAN LOST HIS DREAMS WHEN HE WAS YOUNG, MOHAN IS ALSO IN A VERGE OF LOSING SO MANY DREAMS THAT'S NOT RELATED HIS GENDER CRISIS BECAUSE OF KRISHNA'S HINDRANCE. SO ARYAMAN AND MOHAN CAN CONNECT ON DREAMS AGAINST KRISHNA AND SID WOULD PLAY A SIGNIFICANT VAMP HERE. HERE IS ONE PLOT-


Mohan wants to join kathak dance group in his college. Krishna is so against it because of her obvious fear. He will audition it and Aryaman will see how good dancer Mohan is. He will try to address this issue to Krishna but Krishna goes against him because she has her own reasons(she thinks these feminine urges brainwashed Mohan) so she now wants to keep him away from this. They have a angst over it. Aryaman tries hard to convince Krishna how losing dreams can cost a person for lifetime and he will make Mohan enter the dance group will spend quiet nice time with him. Krishna even though feels happy witnessing Aryaman and Mohan's bond she has hesitance as Aryaman yet doesn't know why Mohan has such wishes.


Sid somewhere gets an idea that Krishna is hiding something he will try to find it out by planning plotting. Krishna will try to stop him also Aryaman thinks sid is here to harm mohan so that will give a possible Aryaman vs Sid too.


Aryaman and Krishna:


KRISHNA DOESN'T KNOW YET WHY ARYAMAN IS INDEBTED TO KUNDAN ALSO WHY IS HE SO ADAMANT TO TAKE JIMMEDARI OF THEM. SHE WILL FIND OUT HIS DREAM FOR MUSIC AND SHE WILL TRY TO HELP HIM. THAT WILL BUILD A FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN THEM AND ANANYA NOTICES THEIR CLOSENESS AND WILL TRY TO STOP KRISHNA WITH THE HELP OF KUNDAN BUT KRISHNA FIGURES IT OUT AND SHE STANDS STRONG AGAINST THEM.


In the process of helping Mohan in his dreams, Krishna eventually finds out slowly why Aryaman always listen to her music like he is lost in another world also about why family including his own mother keeps taunting him! She feels bad and she will try to help him again. She makes him sing sometimes and he becomes happy, They will develop fondness for each other with time with time they will fall in love.


Ananya notices their closeness and out of jealousy she will try to warn Krishna. Initially she will succeed but Krishna then understands Kundan didn't want Aryaman to follow his dreams because he is using Aryaman in business. Even he wants Aryaman to marry Ananya so the stakes that are in Aryaman's name Kundan can make it in Ananya's name. Krishna will then stand against both of them. It might create misunderstanding between her and aryaman time to time but their affection for each other will bring them closer.


Mohan and Krishna:


MOHAN EVEN THOUGH IS RIGHT AT HIS PLACE BUT IT'S ALSO IMPORTANT TO SHOW SACRIFICES TO CONNECT TO THEM MORE. HOW MOHAN AND KRISHNA INIDIVIUALLY AND TOGETHER STAY STRONG AGAINST SID AND SRIJLA'S PLAN.


Mohan even though for now is so adamant about his decision. He will understand Krishna's circumstances and fear also that they don't yet have financial stability yet for such big decisions. He can't force Krishna for something that is beyond her. So he decides to understand the full process all by himself without involving krishna and assures krishna that he won't hurt her again. He talks to professor Anuradha , finds out about the ngo, starts working for needy children there with his college hidden from Krishna.


Krishna will be relaxed after Mohan's assurance but she just doesn't want him to go that path again so she will stop him from choosing kathak but Aryaman intervene and he will help mohan indirectly in this this process. That will bring him close to his past.


Sid will try to find out Mohan's truth but Mohan understans his intentions so humiliates him sid takes it personally and vowes to ruin mohan and Krishna's life.


Krishna finds job as bhajan singer in some ngo but ananya plays with her sends her wrong address to some bar. And mean while sid finds out about Mohan's truth and sends that to krishna. Sid and srijala blackmails krishna that she needs to follow this marriage and cancel divorce or they will leak Mohan's truth to the whole family.


Krishna asks her rights as wife and daughter in law of the family after that and everyone including Aryaman gets shocked. He tries to understand Krishna but she had a break down. Slowly Krishna will meet those people from ngo and anuradha maam, they will explain Mohan's struggle. She starts feeling bad why kept him in shell and she starts supporting him.


Ananys will find out Mohan's truth and so she will tell Aryaman. Aryaman will get furious because he has past related to it. He will try to stop mohan but krishna takes his side now stand strong against everyone. Ananya will make a deal she will help Mohan change his identity to but Krishna has to accept the divorce. Krishna agrees for her brothers sake and Aryaman gets hurt and so on.


I just wanted to write something and this whole plot idea came to my mind. It has angst, love, friendship, emotional connection everything. I don't know what makers are upto but this kind of storyline can viewers easily for the emotional dependency in my opinion. But whatever share your ideas too.

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Originally posted by: BaniLogy

It's sundaysmiley40

I was in the middle of writing a scene for Aryaman and Krishna's divorce and their povs it appeared to me what could be a possible plot that connects all three leads emotionally. Here are some of my ideas-

Red: connections

Green: what we can get from plot

Black: plot


Aryaman and Mohan:


ARYAMAN LOST HIS DREAMS WHEN HE WAS YOUNG, MOHAN IS ALSO IN A VERGE OF LOSING SO MANY DREAMS THAT'S NOT RELATED HIS GENDER CRISIS BECAUSE OF KRISHNA'S HINDRANCE. SO ARYAMAN AND MOHAN CAN CONNECT ON DREAMS AGAINST KRISHNA AND SID WOULD PLAY A SIGNIFICANT VAMP HERE. HERE IS ONE PLOT-


Mohan wants to join kathak dance group in his college. Krishna is so against it because of her obvious fear. He will audition it and Aryaman will see how good dancer Mohan is. He will try to address this issue to Krishna but Krishna goes against him because she has her own reasons(she thinks these feminine urges brainwashed Mohan) so she now wants to keep him away from this. They have a angst over it. Aryaman tries hard to convince Krishna how losing dreams can cost a person for lifetime and he will make Mohan enter the dance group will spend quiet nice time with him. Krishna even though feels happy witnessing Aryaman and Mohan's bond she has hesitance as Aryaman yet doesn't know why Mohan has such wishes.


Sid somewhere gets an idea that Krishna is hiding something he will try to find it out by planning plotting. Krishna will try to stop him also Aryaman thinks sid is here to harm mohan so that will give a possible Aryaman vs Sid too.


Aryaman and Krishna:


KRISHNA DOESN'T KNOW YET WHY ARYAMAN IS INDEBTED TO KUNDAN ALSO WHY IS HE SO ADAMANT TO TAKE JIMMEDARI OF THEM. SHE WILL FIND OUT HIS DREAM FOR MUSIC AND SHE WILL TRY TO HELP HIM. THAT WILL BUILD A FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN THEM AND ANANYA NOTICES THEIR CLOSENESS AND WILL TRY TO STOP KRISHNA WITH THE HELP OF KUNDAN BUT KRISHNA FIGURES IT OUT AND SHE STANDS STRONG AGAINST THEM.


In the process of helping Mohan in his dreams, Krishna eventually finds out slowly why Aryaman always listen to her music like he is lost in another world also about why family including his own mother keeps taunting him! She feels bad and she will try to help him again. She makes him sing sometimes and he becomes happy, They will develop fondness for each other with time with time they will fall in love.


Ananya notices their closeness and out of jealousy she will try to warn Krishna. Initially she will succeed but Krishna then understands Kundan didn't want Aryaman to follow his dreams because he is using Aryaman in business. Even he wants Aryaman to marry Ananya so the stakes that are in Aryaman's name Kundan can make it in Ananya's name. Krishna will then stand against both of them. It might create misunderstanding between her and aryaman time to time but their affection for each other will bring them closer.


Mohan and Krishna:


MOHAN EVEN THOUGH IS RIGHT AT HIS PLACE BUT IT'S ALSO IMPORTANT TO SHOW SACRIFICES TO CONNECT TO THEM MORE. HOW MOHAN AND KRISHNA INIDIVIUALLY AND TOGETHER STAY STRONG AGAINST SID AND SRIJLA'S PLAN.


Mohan even though for now is so adamant about his decision. He will understand Krishna's circumstances and fear also that they don't yet have financial stability yet for such big decisions. He can't force Krishna for something that is beyond her. So he decides to understand the full process all by himself without involving krishna and assures krishna that he won't hurt her again. He talks to professor Anuradha , finds out about the ngo, starts working for needy children there with his college hidden from Krishna.


Krishna will be relaxed after Mohan's assurance but she just doesn't want him to go that path again so she will stop him from choosing kathak but Aryaman intervene and he will help mohan indirectly in this this process. That will bring him close to his past.


Sid will try to find out Mohan's truth but Mohan understans his intentions so humiliates him sid takes it personally and vowes to ruin mohan and Krishna's life.


Krishna finds job as bhajan singer in some ngo but ananya plays with her sends her wrong address to some bar. And mean while sid finds out about Mohan's truth and sends that to krishna. Sid and srijala blackmails krishna that she needs to follow this marriage and cancel divorce or they will leak Mohan's truth to the whole family.


Krishna asks her rights as wife and daughter in law of the family after that and everyone including Aryaman gets shocked. He tries to understand Krishna but she had a break down. Slowly Krishna will meet those people from ngo and anuradha maam, they will explain Mohan's struggle. She starts feeling bad why kept him in shell and she starts supporting him.


Ananys will find out Mohan's truth and so she will tell Aryaman. Aryaman will get furious because he has past related to it. He will try to stop mohan but krishna takes his side now stand strong against everyone. Ananya will make a deal she will help Mohan change his identity to but Krishna has to accept the divorce. Krishna agrees for her brothers sake and Aryaman gets hurt and so on.


I just wanted to write something and this whole plot idea came to my mind. It has angst, love, friendship, emotional connection everything. I don't know what makers are upto but this kind of storyline can viewers easily for the emotional dependency in my opinion. But whatever share your ideas too.







Bani..


I love all the scenarios...🤩😍


I am currently out... Toh Ghar aane ke baad apne bhi scenario daalongi.. pakka

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Interesting scenarios

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interesting....😍
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Ok.. came back.. got a nice rest..


here's my scenario..


Mohan gets influenced by Sid and fights with Krishna. He is now giving his sister the 'silent-treatment' .

Krishna is super hurt by her brother's cold attitude. He takes Aryaman's support and goes to college against Krishna's wish.


Ananya (or actually maybe that evil sister of Aryaman, Meghna) advises that as long as Krishna is financially dependent on Aryaman.. Aryaman would always have the final word in all their decisions. Ananya (or Meghna) instigates that Aryaman is the reason that the siblings are now fighting.


Krishna becomes cold to Aryaman over this and tries find a job.


SHE GETS A JOB!! (sorry.. still trying to manifest this...smiley39)


Let's say it is a job as artisan in really far away hand-loom factory. let's even say she have to take two local trains and bus to reach there. Aryaman is not happy with the job. But Krishna is adamant that she will continue working there.


Krishna and Mohan's cold war continues. Krishna is emotionally really affected by her brother's attitude. She is breaking every time he avoids her. Even Mohan is sad, but he is more stubborn. He wants Krishna to talk to Anuradha maam first. Krishna still cannot accept that condition.


Their fight affects Krishna so much that she started becoming physically and emotionally weak. Aryaman tries to console her. But Krishna can not tell him the real problem between her and her brother. So she stops him in all his attempts reminding about their 6 month relationship.But he need not worry about her brother, because with Mohan, her relationship is with forever, they were just fighting.


In college, Mohan does get close to Anuradha ma'am but couldn't properly open up. He was hesitating. Anuradha ma'am does intuitively understand him and his problems but patiently waits for him to open up on his own. His designs were so good that they get selected for fashion show. Krishna becomes so happy. But because of their ongoing fight, Mohan does not receive her congratulations.


This time, Aryaman supports Krishna as he sees Mohan becoming extremely rude to Krishna.

Ananya instigates Mohan that, Aryaman and Krishan are getting closer and once they actually become proper husband and wife, then Krishna will not care about Mohan. Mohan gets insecure about all this. And starts to become cold towards Aryaman also.


When Krishna scolds Mohan that he should not be rude to Aryaman. Mohan gets angry at her and accuses her of changing after coming to Mumbai. And he leaves angrily to college. Leaving Krishna sad


With so much emotional stress.. Krishna gets high fever and faints in her office. Maybe she hits her head and gets hurt. (Why not?smiley39)The employees call Aryaman(her husband) and Aryaman takes her to hospital. Even in unconscious state, Krishna keeps muttering Mohan's name over and over. Aryaman understands just how much her brother's anger is affecting her, so brings Mohan from college and shows him his sister's condition. He scolds Mohan and reminds Mohan about all the sacrifices she made for Mohan till now.


Krishna wakes up and tries to stop Aryaman from scolding her brother but she was too weak to even get up from the bed. Aryaman goes overboard and calls Mohan ungrateful. Mohan becomes guilt ridden and runs from the hospital.


It starts raining heavily. Mumbai rain.


Why rain??


Well, because rain makes everything more dramatic!! (and also because it is raining here.. right nowsmiley39)


After reaching the home, Krishna and Aryaman find out that Mohan has not come back home. Krishna gets anxious. Aryaman assures her that he will find Mohan and goes to find him. Krishna cannot stand still and she goes out in rain.


Aryaman finally finds Mohan near some temple. They both reconcile and they both apologize to each other. Aryaman tries to find out the actual reason behind the siblings fight. But Mohan does not say anything. Aryaman does not press further. When they both reach house, they find out Krishna went out to search Mohan in this harsh weather with that weak body of hers. they both get worried.


Meanwhile Krishna is too tired, but still tries her best to find Mohan. She again faints but she gets rescued by Anuradha ma'am. Anuradha ma'am takes unconscious Krishna to her home and informs Mohan that Krishna is with her. Both Aryaman and Mohan relax after hearing that. As there is flood in the route, Anuradha asks them to come after the rain stops.


Krishna wakes up after some time and she meets Anuradha. They both finally talk. Krishna talks about her fears and the society's attitude. Anuradha patiently hears everything Krishan has to say. She tells her that the path Mohan wants to take is indeed difficult there is no denying it.. but it could be more sad if he had to travel the path alone. She shows her other people who actually did this.. tells her abouut different types of people... different countries practices... etc etc.


Krishan is much less skeptical, but still not ready accept all this. The rain stops. Mohan and Aryaman come to pick her up. The Joshi siblings finally hug after a long time. This stopped their fight.


After reaching their room, Krishna asks Mohan some more time to accept his truth, as she still cannot understand this. But She assures him that no matter what his truth is, she will always love him. Mohan agrees.


By the by


yeh scenario thada zyada lamba kheeecha na maine??


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Waise....I don't know what to do with Aryaman.. I'll think about it

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Chalo.. Aryaman ke liye bhi likthi hoon...


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So.. let's continue .. Kahan the hum?


joshi fight... Krishna job(still manifesting it.. rehne de na.. please)...Fever+fainting= hospital... Jeeju saala fight...Mumbai rain.. jeeju-saala dosti...anuradha and krishna talk.. joshi fight end.


As they show in all ITV shows...Weirdly... hospitals mein sabko pyaar ka ehsaas hota hai... Humare Aryaman ko bhi wohi huasmiley39


Now he feels something more than 'zimmedari' for his newly-wed-soon-to-be-divorced wife.


But banda hoga bewakoof upar se adiyal kahin ka, so he does not accept it. Par iska matlab yeh bhi nahi ki he will leave her alone.


He will try to find ways to be near Krishna terming everything as all part of his 'zimmedari'


He will also insists on Krishna to leave the job but Krishna will not accept it. She want's to be independent after the divorce. Seeing Aryaman's extra care and concern about Krishna, Ananya gets jealous.

She regrows Krishna's guilty consciousness with extra power this time. And krishna decides to leave the Mehta+kakkar mansion(with her brother). She gives the reason that her workplace is too far away. And also the 6 months term is about to end.


Aryaman gets super angry with the decision. He asks her to leave the job but not the house. Krishna does not agree. Also along with guilt, Krishna has now another reason to separate from Aryaman. During these days, she and Mohan grew close.. they talked a lot.. she slowly started to understand Mohan's truth.


During the fashion show, she helped mohan, and She finally could see the happiness he felt when he was a girl. Even though she couldn't understand, his happiness was way too precious for her to loose. She decided to support him no matter what. Knowing Aryaman's aversion to people who were considered different. She didn't want to continue any relationship with him, because if they grew close, she would be forced to choose between her brother and her love. And it ever came to that, she knew she would eventually choose her brother causing Aryaman more pain. It was better if they separated before their feelings went anymore deep.


Aryaman, oblivious to all these complex emotions in Krishna's mind, just gets furious at Krishna's decision to leave him. He tries everything a ML does in angst.. use your imagination to the extreme Bani... I'll give you freedom here.


Chalo.. after all that angst... Aryaman's gets into accident... (because why not???) And this time it is Krishna's turn fall in love in Hospital.. (That is the ITV law!! Dammit!!) Aryaman also realized that they loved each other. Hey!! while we are it... Let's cure Aryaman's mom also here. Now she loves Krishna.. because Krishna again saved Aryaman.


Krishna then leaves the house before the things gets complicated. She denies having any feelings for Aryaman sir. They get divorced.


The Joshi siblings rented and shifted to small 1BHK in a small apartment complex. A place far from Mehta-Kakkar house but near to her factory. They decide to start their life afresh in this new place. They would talk about the surgical procedures and all other things with Anuradha.


BUT...


Aryaman is in LOVE!! He now completely understands his feelings and now he wants Krishna in his life. He confesses his feelings to Krishna in front of everyone in his family including Ananya. Krishna obviously rejects him.


Aryaman empowered by TRUE LOVE.. now decides to woo Krishna. NO matter what.


So he buys the apartment where Krishna and Mohan are staying and shifts to the flat next to Krishna's. Thus becoming their neighbor.


Oh BTW.. Because he really don't know basics of living like middle-class., he forces Ketan to be his room-mate. And that is how I make Ketan relevant to the storysmiley39


He flirts with Krishna. He starts singing songs. He becomes full on majnu... Waise he can sing this songsmiley39smiley39

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0WPSYFm7iE


While he tries his seduction moves on Krishna, Ketan does all the house-chores like cooking and cleaningsmiley39smiley39(I am a genius when it comes to making Ketan relavant )


Krishna irritated with all his nautanki gets angry at him, but he always responds with flirtatious behavior. He say that he will stop his launda baazi only when Krishna also accepts that she is in love with him. He knew her heart. He knew something was stopping her. But he won't let her go.


Krishna now fully cornered don't know what to do? She tries to escape to another city.. but Aryaman still stops all her plans.. and Finally Krishna also confesses that she loves Aryaman.


But She tries her best to make Aryaman know about Mohan. Mohan fearing his truth will separate his sister and his jiju thwarts all her attempts at telling truth.


Krishna and Aryaman gets married again.


Happy times.


Then Sid will disclose Mohan's truth. Aryaman becomes angry that Krishna hid it from him plus the whole Transphobia thing. And Krishna will leave with her brother. Choosing her brother's happiness over her happiness.


Let's say.. after some more angst.. Bani.. again your department.. Aryaman finally accepts Mohan. and

Mohan becomes Mohini.

Krishna and Aryaman get back together again


The end!!


PHEW!!


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Edited by umawanderer - 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: umawanderer

Ok.. came back.. got a nice rest..


here's my scenario..


Mohan gets influenced by Sid and fights with Krishna. He is now giving his sister the 'silent-treatment' .

Krishna is super hurt by her brother's cold attitude. He takes Aryaman's support and goes to college against Krishna's wish.


Ananya (or actually maybe that evil sister of Aryaman, Meghna) advises that as long as Krishna is financially dependent on Aryaman.. Aryaman would always have the final word in all their decisions. Ananya (or Meghna) instigates that Aryaman is the reason that the siblings are now fighting.


Krishna becomes cold to Aryaman over this and tries find a job.


SHE GETS A JOB!! (sorry.. still trying to manifest this...smiley39)


Let's say it is a job as artisan in really far away hand-loom factory. let's even say she have to take two local trains and bus to reach there. Aryaman is not happy with the job. But Krishna is adamant that she will continue working there.


Krishna and Mohan's cold war continues. Krishna is emotionally really affected by her brother's attitude. She is breaking every time he avoids her. Even Mohan is sad, but he is more stubborn. He wants Krishna to talk to Anuradha maam first. Krishna still cannot accept that condition.


Their fight affects Krishna so much that she started becoming physically and emotionally weak. Aryaman tries to console her. But Krishna can not tell him the real problem between her and her brother. So she stops him in all his attempts reminding about their 6 month relationship.But he need not worry about her brother, because with Mohan, her relationship is with forever, they were just fighting.


In college, Mohan does get close to Anuradha ma'am but couldn't properly open up. He was hesitating. Anuradha ma'am does intuitively understand him and his problems but patiently waits for him to open up on his own. His designs were so good that they get selected for fashion show. Krishna becomes so happy. But because of their ongoing fight, Mohan does not receive her congratulations.


This time, Aryaman supports Krishna as he sees Mohan becoming extremely rude to Krishna.

Ananya instigates Mohan that, Aryaman and Krishan are getting closer and once they actually become proper husband and wife, then Krishna will not care about Mohan. Mohan gets insecure about all this. And starts to become cold towards Aryaman also.


When Krishna scolds Mohan that he should not be rude to Aryaman. Mohan gets angry at her and accuses her of changing after coming to Mumbai. And he leaves angrily to college. Leaving Krishna sad


With so much emotional stress.. Krishna gets high fever and faints in her office. Maybe she hits her head and gets hurt. (Why not?smiley39)The employees call Aryaman(her husband) and Aryaman takes her to hospital. Even in unconscious state, Krishna keeps muttering Mohan's name over and over. Aryaman understands just how much her brother's anger is affecting her, so brings Mohan from college and shows him his sister's condition. He scolds Mohan and reminds Mohan about all the sacrifices she made for Mohan till now.


Krishna wakes up and tries to stop Aryaman from scolding her brother but she was too weak to even get up from the bed. Aryaman goes overboard and calls Mohan ungrateful. Mohan becomes guilt ridden and runs from the hospital.


It starts raining heavily. Mumbai rain.


Why rain??


Well, because rain makes everything more dramatic!! (and also because it is raining here.. right nowsmiley39)


After reaching the home, Krishna and Aryaman find out that Mohan has not come back home. Krishna gets anxious. Aryaman assures her that he will find Mohan and goes to find him. Krishna cannot stand still and she goes out in rain.


Aryaman finally finds Mohan near some temple. They both reconcile and they both apologize to each other. Aryaman tries to find out the actual reason behind the siblings fight. But Mohan does not say anything. Aryaman does not press further. When they both reach house, they find out Krishna went out to search Mohan in this harsh weather with that weak body of hers. they both get worried.


Meanwhile Krishna is too tired, but still tries her best to find Mohan. She again faints but she gets rescued by Anuradha ma'am. Anuradha ma'am takes unconscious Krishna to her home and informs Mohan that Krishna is with her. Both Aryaman and Mohan relax after hearing that. As there is flood in the route, Anuradha asks them to come after the rain stops.


Krishna wakes up after some time and she meets Anuradha. They both finally talk. Krishna talks about her fears and the society's attitude. Anuradha patiently hears everything Krishan has to say. She tells her that the path Mohan wants to take is indeed difficult there is no denying it.. but it could be more sad if he had to travel the path alone. She shows her other people who actually did this.. tells her abouut different types of people... different countries practices... etc etc.


Krishan is much less skeptical, but still not ready accept all this. The rain stops. Mohan and Aryaman come to pick her up. The Joshi siblings finally hug after a long time. This stopped their fight.


After reaching their room, Krishna asks Mohan some more time to accept his truth, as she still cannot understand this. But She assures him that no matter what his truth is, she will always love him. Mohan agrees.


By the by


yeh scenario thada zyada lamba kheeecha na maine??


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Waise....I don't know what to do with Aryaman.. I'll think about it


Yar uma this is so good. hamein writer bana do sab sort out kar denge ham smiley37

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Originally posted by: umawanderer

Chalo.. Aryaman ke liye bhi likthi hoon...


Image


So.. let's continue .. Kahan the hum?


joshi fight... Krishna job(still manifesting it.. rehne de na.. please)...Fever+fainting= hospital... Jeeju saala fight...Mumbai rain.. jeeju-saala dosti...anuradha and krishna talk.. joshi fight end.


As they show in all ITV shows...Weirdly... hospitals mein sabko pyaar ka ehsaas hota hai... Humare Aryaman ko bhi wohi huasmiley39


Now he feels something more than 'zimmedari' for his newly-wed-soon-to-be-divorced wife.


But banda hoga bewakoof upar se adiyal kahin ka, so he does not accept it. Par iska matlab yeh bhi nahi ki he will leave her alone.


He will try to find ways to be near Krishna terming everything as all part of his 'zimmedari'


He will also insists on Krishna to leave the job but Krishna will not accept it. She want's to be independent after the divorce. Seeing Aryaman's extra care and concern about Krishna, Ananya gets jealous.

She regrows Krishna's guilty consciousness with extra power this time. And krishna decides to leave the Mehta+kakkar mansion(with her brother). She gives the reason that her workplace is too far away. And also the 6 months term is about to end.


Aryaman gets super angry with the decision. He asks her to leave the job but not the house. Krishna does not agree. Also along with guilt, Krishna has now another reason to separate from Aryaman. During these days, she and Mohan grew close.. they talked a lot.. she slowly started to understand Mohan's truth.


During the fashion show, she helped mohan, and She finally could see the happiness he felt when he was a girl. Even though she couldn't understand, his happiness was way too precious for her to loose. She decided to support him no matter what. Knowing Aryaman's aversion to people who were considered different. She didn't want to continue any relationship with him, because if they grew close, she would be forced to choose between her brother and her love. And it ever came to that, she knew she would eventually choose her brother causing Aryaman more pain. It was better if they separated before their feelings went anymore deep.


Aryaman, oblivious to all these complex emotions in Krishna's mind, just gets furious at Krishna's decision to leave him. He tries everything a ML does in angst.. use your imagination to the extreme Bani... I'll give you freedom here.


Chalo.. after all that angst... Aryaman's gets into accident... (because why not???) And this time it is Krishna's turn fall in love in Hospital.. (That is the ITV law!! Dammit!!) Aryaman also realized that they loved each other. Hey!! while we are it... Let's cure Aryaman's mom also here. Now she loves Krishna.. because Krishna again saved Aryaman.


Krishna then leaves the house before the things gets complicated. She denies having any feelings for Aryaman sir. They get divorced.


The Joshi siblings rented and shifted to small 1BHK in a small apartment complex. A place far from Mehta-Kakkar house but near to her factory. They decide to start their life afresh in this new place. They would talk about the surgical procedures and all other things with Anuradha.


BUT...


Aryaman is in LOVE!! He now completely understands his feelings and now he wants Krishna in his life. He confesses his feelings to Krishna in front of everyone in his family including Ananya. Krishna obviously rejects him.


Aryaman empowered by TRUE LOVE.. now decides to woo Krishna. NO matter what.


So he buys the apartment where Krishna and Mohan are staying and shifts to the flat next to Krishna's. Thus becoming their neighbor.


Oh BTW.. Because he really don't know basics of living like middle-class., he forces Ketan to be his room-mate. And that is how I make Ketan relevant to the storysmiley39


He flirts with Krishna. He starts singing songs. He becomes full on majnu... Waise he can sing this songsmiley39smiley39

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0WPSYFm7iE


While he tries his seduction moves on Krishna, Ketan does all the house-chores like cooking and cleaningsmiley39smiley39(I am a genius when it comes to making Ketan relavant )


Krishna irritated with all his nautanki gets angry at him, but he always responds with flirtatious behavior. He say that he will stop his launda baazi only when Krishna also accepts that she is in love with him. He knew her heart. He knew something was stopping her. But he won't let her go.


Krishna now fully cornered don't know what to do? She tries to escape to another city.. but Aryaman still stops all her plans.. and Finally Krishna also confesses that she loves Aryaman.


But She tries her best to make Aryaman know about Mohan. Mohan fearing his truth will separate his sister and his jiju thwarts all her attempts at telling truth.


Krishna and Aryaman gets married again.


Happy times.


Then Sid will disclose Mohan's truth. Aryaman becomes angry that Krishna hid it from him plus the whole Transphobia thing. And Krishna will leave with her brother. Choosing her brother's happiness over her happiness.


Let's say.. after some more angst.. Bani.. again your department.. Aryaman finally accepts Mohan. and

Mohan becomes Mohini.

Krishna and Aryaman get back together again


The end!!


PHEW!!


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Can I add one scene I so badly want to see but nahi dikayenge aisa kuch pata haismiley26


Aryaman takes Krishna and Mohan to beach after knowing their dispute. He bonds with Mohan they dance a bit, they even plays with rainbow colored ballon(symbolism) Krishna sees all these from far and she starts feeling good. At least someone is trying to make mohan happy. She sees them in slow motion and that song dheeme dheeme plays. DEDO MUJHE DEDO KYU SATA RAHE HOsmiley44

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