Destiny--An Arjuhi FF || Part 1A; Pq5 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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What up guys? Thank you for waiting patiently for this FF. I know I have taken plenty of time, but I finally finished typing it up. So without much further chit-chat, I finally give you the first half part of the FF. I say half of the part because it was so long I had to cut into 1A and 1B. So here is 1A. Sorry for any mistakes and errors and I hope you enjoy yourselves (:
Note: Special appearance from Prem and Heer. Also keep in mind that at some parts Prem is reffered to as "Puh-rem" and Arjun as "AJ" or "Ar-june" because that's way people pronunce their names.

-Part One: A-

It had been a beautiful morning. Usually April was always like this here in Boca Raton, Fl. Beautiful blue clear skies, the sun out warm and shinning, the perfect temperature of 70-85 degrees Fahrenheit, and the slight breeze every now and then to balance the heat. It was one of the main reasons why he loved this place so much. The weather was almost always just right.

At exactly 10:10 in the morning, Arjun Punj lazily rolled out of bed after hitting the snooze button for the 4th time. He slowly walked into the bathroom. Rubbing his eyes, and grabbing his toothbrush and the tube of crest toothpaste. Putting the toothbrush under the cool water to rinse. He looked into the mirror for the first time, noting the tired and deep purple outline around his eyes and the hangover facial expression he held just moments before he yawned. You see Arjun was never a big drinker, nor had he ever been. In fact, he hated it almost. But it was Friday night and it been ages since he was out at a rave like this. He felt as if he earned, no deserved, a good night; after all, it is his last year in college. God knows he had needed a good break to relax and cut loose like this for a while now. And to top it off, he was out there to celebrate his best friend, Prem's birthday.

Prem Juneja was among the few Indians he knew in this tiny city. He'd known him for fours years now. When Arjun fist came to FAU--Flordia Atlantic Universty--the college assigned Prem in "charge" of him. To guide him around campus, give him tips on succeeding in his classes, basically helping him ease into college life and make him comfortable there. Prem had went out of his way and helped Arjun over and beyond. Truth be told, Arjun was very grateful to have Prem in his life; much more than he ever let Prem know.

Now Arjun and Prem were at a rave called 'Pokerface' and the place was packed. Arjun could only recognized a few people and among the few he recognized, most were Prem's colleagues.

"Happy Birthday Puh-rem"
"Yeah, Happy Birthday dude"
"So, tell me, how does it feel to finally be almost 15 bro?"
All the guys cracked up like it was the funniest joke they have ever heard, giving each other high-fives. Even though Prem was older than Preet--his younger brother--and his Arjun, he was the youngest among his friends.
"Oh Thank you guys! And man, Tony where the hell do you come up with all these jokes, you're hilarious!" Prem chuckled sarcastically. "But to answer your question it's feels bloody fantastic, a quarter of my life just gone, where do these days go? " he sighed.
"Well aren't you the party pooper? Man, you are really downing our moods, you need a drink to cheer you up. Here, and you too AJ" Chris--a friend of Prem and Arjun--slided two shots over to them.
Arjun really wanted to say no, but he took it anyways, afraid they might take it as rude. It was Prem's birthday celebration and Arjun could tell Prem's heart wasn't here. Usually Prem loved hanging with his boys, partying, he loved it. Now, don't get him wrong either, because he didn't get wasted all the time either. Prem was just an outgoing and very laid-back type of guy, who liked to hang out with his boys, and usually they hung out at raves like these. So, now Arjun felt the need to lighten his friend's mood. He grabbed his drink and handed Prem his; to which Prem eyed him with a hint of curiosity and shock.

Taken aback with a confused expression on his face Prem said "Arjun? Can I talk to you for a second? Excuse us fellas, we'll be right back" and walked to the corner.

Arjun walked over cautiously, he figured Prem would be surprised if he took a drink. Smiling innocently as if he had no clue, he asked "What's up?"

"I don't know, what's up with you? Tum theek toh ho na?"

"Perfect, never better, why?"
"Um, let's see. You hate to drink, you think it's dumb, and today you want both of us to drink. Mujhe lagta hai ke tum pagal ho gaye ho."
"Pagal to nahi hua, but I am going to drink"

Prem eyed him again, sat his drink down on the table next to him, and reached out his hand to check Arjun's forehead and face.

Arjun laughed softly "Prem, I'm okay really. It's just one drink. We're out here celebrating your birthday, so relax and grab a drink."

"Okay, chalo chodo ke tumko drink kar na pasand nahi hai, yeh bhi samaj leta ho ke meri party hai. Per tumhari bhabi ko tum jaante ho. Party mein jaana uska plan, but usko paata chala ke maine drink kiya toh mar jawonga."

Two years ago, Prem went to India with his family. There they ran into old family friends'The Manns'--and that's when Prem meet Heer. Little did he know she was going to be his life one day. Pretty soon they fell in love and got married. Arjun was really happy for them; and since he thought of Prem as a brother, Heer didn't mind him referring to her as bhabhi. In fact, she loved it when he called her that, he was so cute and brotherly to her.

"Look who is talking like a crazy now! Bhabhi won't get mad over one drink. C'mon please?" giving Prem a sad puppy-dog face.

Prem couldn't help but chuckle now, looking at Arjun's face " Arjun, pagal toh ho gaye ho. Chalo I'll drink, but only one! And you have to answer my question first. Aren't friends suppose to keep friends from drinking instead of pressuring them to?"

Arjun winked "You're right! Friends don't pressure friends! Well, it's a good thing were brothers huh?"

Both Prem and Arjun laughed. They turned to walk back to the their group of friends. Prem playfully hit the back of Arjun's head lightly, both continued their laughter.

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' '

Arjun couldn't hold his smile in as he thought of last night. That one drink was definitely worth the fun he had. So what, the hangover will pass. He shook his head back and forth, laughing at a close memory, water flying everywhere off his head. After he felt fresh, he turned off the shower head and wrapped himself in a towel.
He walked into his bedroom and put on a fresh pair of clothes. With a cup of hot coffee in mind to ease the headache, he walked into the kitchen. After much searching, Arjun finds himself empty handed. With a bit of anger in his mind for his rommie Mark. Dammit! I've reminded him a millions times, it's his turn to get the coffee, we're running out. But does he get it? No! Mimicking Mark's voice he continued his mental bashing , Dude chill, we won't run out, I'll get it tomorrow, promise. But did tomorrow ever come? No! I knew I would have to get it. I knew he wasn't going to get it. Just stupid!

He continued for another minute or two, till his head starts hurting more. Ahhhh! His hands flew to his head. There is no use in arguing with myself, I'm just going to have to go out and get it. He walked back to his room to grab his keys and wallet. Before heading out he looked in the mirror once more, to make sure he looked decent.

You have new text message! High-five! You have new text message! High-five!

Arjun turned his head over to see his phone lit up on his night stand. As he walked to his night stand, he had a feeling he knew who might be texting him.

Have I told you you rock? I love you man! Where did you come up with the idea? Genius, bro! You're the best! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Yupp, he'd guess right. It was from Prem. Arjun and Heer had arranged for Prem's birthday for weeks. True, they went out to celebrate Prem's birthday yesterday; but actually it was not till today. Prem wanted to spend time his birthday only with his wife, no one else. He was the romantic type of guy. In fact, he married her on his birthday. He wanted to remember that his birth, the reason why he is here on earth, is for her and only her. So to make sure he got the birthday he wanted. He arranged for them to head to a spa for relaxing and rented a luxurious room in a fancy hotel for him to spend quality time with his wife. Arjun was happy he liked it.

After texting him back he noticed he had a voicemail too.

Hello Mr. Punj. This is Professor Riley. Don't worry, you're not in trouble. You could never be in trouble, such a good boy. Anways, I was calling to ask if you can meet up with me at Applebee's next to our facility for lunch around 12? If that's okay with you. If you can call me back at is number letting me know if you can meet up or not. I know it's early and it's a weekend but I assure you it could be worth your time. So call me back and I can give you all the details. Take care.

Professor? What could he want? Hmmm... 12 o'clock huh? He checked the time. 11:30am, if I call him and leave now I can make it with couple of minutes to spare. Arjun dialed his number; when the professor didn't pick up he left a message saying he'd be there.

TO BE CONTINUED...
Edited by xobabiicakesz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Dhruvi - What a Fabulous Update! You really "set up" Arjun for us. Nice peek into his personality, his qualities as a person, and a man. 👍🏼
Love the commraderie between Prem and Arjun. Clearly they are great friends, and as close as brothers.
Prem certainly is a romantic fellow - whew! Heer is one lucky woman! A man who marries her on his birthday so he will always be reminded ... "the reason why he is here on earth, is for her and only her." OhMy! 😍
Destiny just flowed as I read along Dhruvi. I was so disappointed when I reached the end of the last paragraph and saw ..."TO BE CONTINUED..." I didn't want the update end! I wanted to keep reading on and on. OH! And I was right, the wait and the anticipation only made reading Destiny that much sweeter! 😊
Please post Part 1-B soon! Can't wait to find out the "opportunity" the professor has available for Arjun. Hopefully, the "opportunity" will lead him to meeting Arohi - soon! 😊
Thanks for the wonderfully long update Dhruvi! Loved It! ⭐️
Edited by fire_woman - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhruvi..really gud..!
I think the wait was definately worth it 😉..Arjun seems 2 b a descent guy..bt den at times ppl get misled..so it's not his fault..
He had a drink at the party..n a rave one..okay..it's fine i guess..just once..n i hope he dusnt do it agn..n he eva asked Prem to drink..eva tho he dislikes it so mch...well..i like the brotherly relation btwn em..it luks cute..n Premeer r aldready married..tat's nice..n i hope dey remain in <3 foreva..
Arjun is gonna meet d professor..is he sum gooodie goodie fella?..i wonder y d professor calld him..
I hope 2 c Arohi soon too..
Update soon
-Aish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great start, i loved reading the update, awww its nice to see 2 friends who are like brothers, cant wait to read your updates
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amazing,superb,sweet,cute n gr8 one!!!
Keep it upp
Update soon=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
its reallllly sweet! please update sooooon....i love the fact that it was descripyive and well written and long!!! amazing!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey lovely part...nice to c prem n Arjun so close.... prem heer already married is nice... plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Thank you guys so much.
Your feedback means tons to me and I'll comment back each one indivually later.
Thanks once more.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Dhruvi...
Great start...Love the way Arjun and Prem are with each other....Prem is so romantic, married Heer on his birthday..thts sweet.....
Waiting for Part B...Update soon.....
Kim
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fire_woman

Dhruvi - What a Fabulous Update! Thank you GG! 😳

Prem certainly is a romantic fellow - whew! Heer is one lucky woman! A man who marries her on his birthday so he will always be reminded ... "the reason why he is here on earth, is for her and only her." OhMy! 😍
I know, right? If only guys were like that in real life! He is sooo romantic... well he was until now, but he will always remain so, in this FF.
Destiny just flowed as I read along Dhruvi. I was so disappointed when I reached the end of the last paragraph and saw ..."TO BE CONTINUED..." I didn't want the update end! I wanted to keep reading on and on. OH! And I was right, the wait and the anticipation only made reading Destiny that much sweeter! 😊
Awe, you're are so sweet! Thank you so much. I'm glad it was worth the wait, it was the least I can do since I've made you guys wait so long for it.
Please post Part 1-B soon! Can't wait to find out the "opportunity" the professor has available for Arjun. Hopefully, the "opportunity" will lead him to meeting Arohi - soon! 😊
As soon as possible love. I am still busy, these last 8 days of school are going to nuts! Funny you guess that the oppurtunity will lead him to Arohi.... hmmm not a bad guess, we'll just see what happens [;
Thanks for the wonderfully long update Dhruvi! Loved It! ⭐️Thanks for reading GG (:

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