*Tum hi ho..* New FF -part 5...pg.8 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Awee, Arjun in jealous. Hah, it's kinda entertaining. Anyways, I loved the part! Continue soon. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
omg...awesome...it was soo great...i cant wait to see wht happens next...plz plz plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey its a great FF!! Can't wait for the next part!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwww,amazing..................loved every bit of it........n i loved salil n arohi's frndship in JTYJN style....plz cont soon.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey girl!!!
it was worth the wait!!! this part absolutely rocked!! well done!!!!
its sooooooooooo cute.....the meow -ratz part was awesom!!! i really liked it...and good night dream right! wah!!
arjun getting all jealous?? loved it....pls clear the misunderstandings sooooooooooooooon...there are tooooo many everywhere ;) hehehehe
well done and keep it u!!
pls update soon yaar!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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CONFUSION CLEARED!!!

Aarohi was still in her bed when she heard the car honk....loudly. She swore under sheets and jumped into her slippers......tying the strings of her wrapper tight. She pushed open the door and wanted to shout but...all she could see was the trail of smoke Arjun's car had left behind.
"Hey wait!!!!!" she yelled wanting to run behind it but chosing otherwise...taking note of her clothes.
Arjun rode in a fury....he hadn't had a wink of sleep and that ruddly gal was snuggling in her bed when he struggled in vain to tame the tempest in his heart. "Am glad she'll be late to academy" he smiled evilly as he drove on.

Aarohi rushed to the bathroom and squeezed out the toothpaste in such a hurry that she messed up the whole sink. "Lagata hain...I'll just have to change my clothes and rush!" she decided and wore the first dress that came in her hand. She dabbed a whole bottle of perfume and waiting desparately for a cab. But her luck was rotten...not one cab was in sight. Suddenly a car pulled up and stopped ahead of her. The door opened and Karan walked out. "Aarohi....you are late?"
She nodded fiercely making her rubberband that tamed her sleek hair cum loose and fall all over her face. "Hop in!" Karan smiled.
She jumped in and tried to set her hair. Karan drove at a mad pace....
"Arre...thoda dheere chalao......marwaane ka iraada hain kya?" she asked him.
"Aarohi...tumhara pehla class kiska hain?" he asked mechanically...pushing the car at a greater speed.
She thought for a moment and den shrieked "Hey Bhagawan!!!!! Karan....I have Miss. Sumati's class first." He looked at her ridiculously...."toh phir tumhara marna toh certain hain.....but you get to choose....die facing the speed of the car or the temper of Sumati-the Chudail?"
Aarohi closed her eyes and retorted "speed I guess...."
He jumped all the lights and drove like a maniac till they reached the academy gates.
"Thanks Karan!!!!" she yelled running breathlessly to her class. Arjun just watched with narrowed eyes as she ran past him....after alighting from Karan's black car.


"Excuse me Ma'am!" she gasped just as the class was about to begin.
"Let's see who we have here....hmmm..Aarohi...where are you cuming from ? Won the marathon?" Sumati asked her,sternly. Aarohi mumbled...."yep...it was greater than any marathon!"
"Get in!" she ordered...but her sharp ears had picked up the words Aarohi had mumbled...and she didn't like students who tried giving smart retorts.
"Miss. Aarohi since you have arrived the fastest .......you shall begin the class by singing the Raag Bhairavi..." Aarohi stared in disbelief.....she didn't know a damn note of Raga bhairavi....she was just a music-passionate...who had grown up with the nature's music in Manali. Her cheeks grew hot and red as she realized the whole class was waiting with bated breath. She took a deep breath as if to indicate that she was ready and then suddenly blurted out "Ma'am I really dont know this raga....if you want I can sing nething of mordern bollywood choices." Giggles broke out and an infuriated Sumati wiggled her fat finger at Aarohi..."Listen girl.....I'll give a couple of marks if you try to be smart....." Aarohi was hurt. She had spoken to the teacher in the humblest was possible. She looked down ....tears threatening to break free....she swallowed them....her self pride at gun-point.
"Fine then...go ahead with your bollywood choice Miss. Aarohi cause there is no way u r escaping this showdown!" the teacher icily sliced with her words. Aarohi winced at the tone...and closed her eyes...."if it was a showdown....den..heavens let me be victorious!"
Falak Tak Chal Saath Mere
Falak Tak Chal Saath Chal
Falak Tak Chal Saath Mere
Falak Tak Chal Saath Chal
Yeh Badal Ki Chaadar
Yeh Taaro Ke Anchal
Mein Chup Jaye Hum, Pal Do Pal
Hooo..Oo..
(Falak Tak Chal Saath Mere
Falak Tak Chal Saath Chal) — (2)
Aarohi was lost to another realm.............
A beautiful starry night and she sat on the rocks as the waves lashed on the shore....her pyjama rims were wet and the foam sprayed across her face from time to time. The moon was smiling down at her...and she felt his hand covering hers.....they both just sat there silently drinking the secrets of the milky moonlight.

Dheko Kahan Aa Gaye Hum Sanam Saath Chalte
Jahan Din Ki Bahon Mein Rathon Ke Saaye Hai Dhalte
Chal Woh Chowbare Dhonde, Gin Mein Chahat Ki Boonde
Sach Kar De Sapno Ko Sabhi
Hooo..
Aankho Ko Neeche Neeche, Mein Tere Peeche Peeche
Chal Du Jo Keh De Tu Abhi
Bahron Ke Chaat Ho, Dua Oon Ka Haat Ho
Padthe Rahe Yeh Gazal
Hoo..Ohh

(Falak Tak Chal Saath Mere
Falak Tak Chal Saath Chal) —- (2)

He bent over and tucked her hair behind her ear....she felt a tingling sensation. He whispered sweet-nothings into her ears and she smiled. Her heart brimmed with love and she could feel the sincerity in his touch too.

Dheka Nahin Mein Ne Pehle Kabhi Yeh Nazara
Badla Huwa Sa Lage Mujhko Aalam Yeh Sara
Suraj Ko Huyi Hai Rarat, Raaton Ko Kare Shararat
Bheita Hai Khidki Pe Teri
Haaannnn
Is Baat Pe Chand Bhi Bigda, Kathra Kathra Woh Pigla
Bhar Aaya Aankho Mein Meri
Toh Suraj Bhuja Doon, Tujhe Mein Saja Doon
Savera Ho Tujh Se Hi Kal
Hooo…Oo.
(Falak Tak Chal Saath Mere
Falak Tak Chal Saath Chal) — (2)

Yeh Badal Ki Chaadar
Yeh Taaro Ke Anchal
Mein Chup Jaye Hum, Pal Do Pal
Hooo..Oo..
(Falak Tak Chal Saath Mere
Falak Tak Chal Saath Chal) — (4)

She felt his finger graze her jawline and she sucked in her breath as he turned her face towards him.....the moon was beaming down upon him.....all its glory spent to illumine the face of her....love....She opened her eyes and..found a pair of familiar brown eyes staring back at her.
"NAHIII!!!!" Aarohi screamed shattering the magic that the class had been succumbing to. The lecturer frowned..." your pitch was horrible...and the curves were rugged...there was no smoothness in the flow!" But the rest of the class was smiling...they knew the obvious truth. Aarohi just picked up her books and muttered an inaudible excuse me...escaping from that hell. But what actually was bothering her was the vision of the brown eyes....and she knew perfectly well whom they belonged to.

That evening she reached the studio and found the room dark. "Hello neone here?" she asked slightly afraid. *Crash!* she swirled about and went in the direction from where the sound had come. She groped in the dark and at last found the switchboard and turned on the lights. Her eyes were blinded by the sudden gush of light and she closed them. When she opened them she saw Arjun sitting in the inner room with a half finished drink and shattered glass.
"Isse kya hua hai?" she thought. She tentatively stepped inside and softly asked "Arjun...kya hua?" He looked up and saw her....his face held inexplicable pain. In a fit of anger he picked up the nearest object his key chain and hurled it at her. She tried to duck but it hit her on the forehead..cause a sharp pain. "Ouch!" she screamed. Arjun looked alarmed....he had thought she was a figment of his imagination....he had been hallucinating about her for quite sum time now. He hurriedly walked up to her and stuttered "I am really sorry....I just thought u weren't real!" Aarohi looked up in pain..."Kya?!?!...not real..." Blood was smeared on her fingertips and Arjun was worried. "Tumhara toh khoon beh raha hai...." he evaded the question and put his hankerchief on the hurt. He led her to the washroom and helped her wash it up....she cringed when the water drops touched the hurt. "I am really sorry..." he apologized again feeling really upset. He didn't mean to hurt her. He got out the first aid box and slapped a band-aid on the cut.
"Ajeeb aadmi hai....dard bhi khud deta hai aur dawa bhi!" Aarohi thought seeing the tender care her was showering on her. "Where are the others?" she asked realizing that they were alone...and her heart was beating rapidly remembering those brown eyes. "Woh log aaj nahi aa rahe hain..." he said .
"Toh phir tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?" she asked eyeing him closely,the pain had returned to his face.
He turned away...he hated this girl and yet she was making him feel sensations he wasn't acustomed to feeling....he wanted to tell her it was none of her business and yet her wanted to confess that he had been pathetically thinking about her. He didn't want to love her...and yet he couldn't help loving her...."Hey wait...what was he thinking? He couldn't be in love with this girl....she was totally not-so-his-type!"
"Chalo theek hain if you dont want to tell it's okay...." she said quitely seeing the various expressions clouding his face. She picked up her bag and began walking out..."I think I must leave....I have to go and help Salil get ready...bechaara...he is totally new to this field.....and he is hell bent on impressing Poorvi" she said. He just looked at her,perplexed. She saw his expression...
"You don't know?" she asked him, disbelievingly. He just raised his eyebrows in question.
"Well...your cousin Poorvi and my friend,Salil are in love...."
His jaw sagged on its hinges.."Kya...Poorvi and Salil..."
Aarohi smiled "Haan...love at first sight .....great na?...How I wish I found someone whom I could trust my heart with..." she sighed,dreamily. Arjun smiled..."so Salil was just her best friend ......and she hadn't found her Mr. Right...that meant that she wasn't with Karan too.." He didn't know why but he felt a savage delight at the news.
"Wow that's fantastic news...." he grinned. Aarohi looked confused..."Some ppl are unpredictable!" She was walking out..when Arjun called out.."hey Aarohi....want a lift?"
She remembered the morning's fiasco...and a crease settled on her forehead..."In the morning you weren't so generous..." she complained. He smiled apologetically.."I was in a hurry...I am sorry....please let me take you to Salil....I have nothing to do this evening...."
She considered "No harm in his giving her a lift....as long as she didn't look into those deep brown eyes..."
"Fine....hurry."

Salil was surprised to see Aarohi and Arjun alight from Arjun's car....."Daal mein zaroor kuch kala hain.....Meow toh isse pasand nahi karti hain....phir shayad gadi ko pasand karti hain!"
"Hey Meow!!!...Was waiting for you only...help yaar..." he smiled at Aarohi.
"Rats...Arjun ko tum jaante hi ho..."she said...
Salil warmly shook hands with Arjun..."Ofcourse..Prince Punj!!!"
"Poorvi is my cousin..."Arjun smiled. Salil froze..."Kya???...Poorvi is your cousin !!!!....that just cant be possible Mr. Khadoos-ud-din!" he blurted...and bit his tongue.
"Oops sorry...that is what Aarohi calls you so it just slipped out!" he explained. Arjun turned to look at Aarohi who was throwing murderous looks at Salil. She gave Arjun an innocent smile and lied through her teeth..."Rats is lying....main bhala tumko Khadoos-ud-din kyun bolungi?"
Salil grew white...he couldn't afford to displease Poorvi's cousin..."Meow...jhooti...tumhi ne toh kahan tha....ki yeh Khadoos aur batameez hai....isko baat karna nahi aata.....apne aap ko jitna shaana samajhta hain utna hai nahi.....aur toh aur...tune to yeh bhi kahan tha ki...isko ladkiyon se sakt allergy hai.....phirbhi yeh smooching karne mein 'King' hain! Iska maan na hain ki joh ladki tumse shaadi karegi uski kismat phuti hain!" Arjun heard it all....feeling his temper rise with every comment and he saw Aarohi's face colour shoot past red to magenta with suffocation. "So this is what she thinks of me....huh!" he gritted his teeth. Aarohi glared at Salil..."Rats I am gonna kill you!" She threw her hands out and grabbed Salil by the neck trying to strangle him.Arjun came forward and parted them..."Chill guys...Aarohi...you seem to have a very colourful picture about me....Just you watch as I make it black and white..."
"Arjun...mera woh intention nahi tha..."
"Arjun nahi...Miss Aarohi....its Mr. Khadoos-ud-din...." he dangerously muttered. Salil looked at them....they made a cute pair...but at the moment..one was a trembling fawn while the other was a growling tiger on the prowl.
"Chodo na Arjun....Aarohi nadaan hain...usse ladko ke baare mein kya pata....ek baar manali mein ek ladke ne isse dekh kar seeti bajaiyi.....hume laga woh jaakar us ladke ki dhulayi karegi....magar pata hain usne kya kiya?" Salil animatedly told Arjun to make him calm. Arjun's interest had been razored by the mention of Aarohi's experience..."Kya ?" he asked.
"Usne jaakar use launde se kaha...'Bhaiyya...mujhe bhi seeti marna sikhao na!'...can you believe it!" Salil was howling with laughter remembering the incident. Arjun was laughing too. Aarohi just stood there admiring Arjun's laughter. His smiles were so devastating and so rare.....
They both stopped laughing and Salil spoke up.."Arre mera date...Meow..hurry....main late hojaunga..." They proceeded inside...Arjun still in splits about the tale.
"Salil...Poorvi prefers guys who wear decent casuals and not stiff two-pieces..." Arjun offered.
"Thanks buddy....lagta hain Meow ko tumhe pehchane mein galati ho gayi.....tum khadoos ho hi nahi sakte..." Aarohi bit her lower lip uncomfortably. After 30minutes Salil drove off to meet Poorvi while Arjun-Aarohi sat in the car and proceeded homewards.
"Toh tumhe lagata hai...ki mujhe ladkiyon se allergy hai...." Arjun began trying to strike a conversation and cut the tension in the air.
"Woh bas aise hi...." she stuttered.
"Lame reason...Miss Aarohi..." he responded...."aur phir main apne aap ko shaana samajhta hoon.."
Aarohi turned away...she wanted to punch the shit out of Salil for putting her in such a situation.
"Dekho Arjun....yeh sab maine ghusse mein aakar bola tha...aur phir poora academy toh jaanti hain ki tum ek woman-hater ho....magar maine tumhe kiss karte hue dekha tha...isiliye main confuse ho gayi thi..."
He stopped the car near a alley and rounded on her..."toh confusion door kar dete hain..." His brown eyes prodded into her heart..."Kya matlab?" she fumbled aware of the burning sensation in the nape of her neck. He put his hand on hers...on the dashboard and entwined his fingers..fitting the spaces between her fingers perfectly. Her breath became uneven....she was feeling scared and yet excited...he came closer...till she could breath in his rich masculine smell...his eyes held her eyes and her cheeks grew hot. His free hand raised up and grazed the sliky landscape of her cheeks and he whispered in a husky tone..."I am not a woman-hater....." She was mesmerized by his touch,his look,his tone....all that was HIM!!! "Arjun...I ...." she struggled to get words out. He placed his index finger on her pink lips to prevent her from uttering a word...."It is Khadoos-ud-din...." he drawled and suddenly drew back leaving Aarohi stunned and cold.
She turned away unable to meet his gaze...."tum usse kya expect kar rahi thi Aarohi....Tumhe ho kya gaya hai?" she chided herself. But the memory of Arjun being so close to her was fresh in her mind...and the fragrance of his cologne was tantalizing her nostrils still. They reached the Punj Mansion and Aarohi ran away to the outhouse...not a word of goodbye was said between them. Arjun looked at her retresting back trying to analyze what exactly he was feeling......he had a long night to endure....

sorry ppl for the relatively short update....promise will update soon and cuming up LOVE IS IN THE AIR!!!!
Love
pallo😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
wow yaar. you write simply superb.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
wow loved it do continue soooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
loved the part
try to continue soon

Irika

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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
wow great update Pallo, i love reading it it was really good, i love how you described the scenes, it was bad when Arjun chucked the keys at Arohi n it hit her forehead, but it was nice update i love Salil and Arohi's friendship they are so sweet, cant wait to read your next upae please update it soon thank you so much

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