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Aarohi proposed Arjun on the cliff and he rejected her fellings without giving her a chance to speak.but arohi handled herself confidently.

Now i'm changing the situation a little bit .Arohi felt nothing at that moment.though she told him that his answer will not affect her in any way.but sumwhere deep inside ,it was torturing her.

Its been two months after that night n Arohi..whose presence was full of life,who was the source of laughter in her family became silentn reserved.Her
father talked to her about a marriage proposal ,but she plainly rejected the idea.In office ,Arohi always tried not to come in Arjun's way,avoiding the possibilty
of meeting him.
Arjun rarely saw her smile any more. she remained aloof whenever he was around.And that was disturbing him badly.


Next Day

She handed over the file of new project to Arjun n about to leave without looking at him when his words gripped her feet.

"Tumne shaadi k liye naa kyun ki" he asked.

She turned back n stared at him without uttering a word.

"Mere raaste badal gaye hain....isliye" She answered absently.

"Aise raaste par mat jao,jiski koi manzil na ho.." his voice was husky n painful as if a sumthing was eating him.

"Yeh zarrori to nahi k har raasta sirf manzil paane k liye tay kiya jaaye.." she replied coldly.

"Tumne apne liye kisi mushkil safar ka intekhwab kar kiya hai...Apne liye woh raasta mat chuno,jahan par tum akeli ho jao" he tried his best to convince
her that he was not her destination.

"zindagi to unki bhi guzar hi jaati hai..jinka koi nahi hota..."she said with a determination in her voice.

"Why do'nt yu understand..zindagi jeene mein aur guzar dene mein farq hota hai arohi....." he argued.

"main is farq ko mehsoos karna chahti hoon.....isliye aap apni zindagi jee kar dekhiye aur main guzar kar dekhti hoon."

her last sentence was followed by a long deep silence.From his face... it was difficult to judge his present emotional status
. he just sat there, silently, staring blankly.. he wanted to scream as pain twisted and turned inside him.

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These r just random thoughts.i do'nt know if it does make any sense or not.n i wrote in hindi b'coz i do'nt want to lose the essence f the lines...i hope its worth reading.PLz comment.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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that is a great start A, all the sentences are really good, please update it soon i want to read what happens next, thank you
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sound grt i really wish if it could hav happened in kmh coz i mean he said no so arohi should hav take revenge at lest 4 a lil while
plz con soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its really great please write a FF
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A.... simply superb.....

This one line says it all.........

main is farq ko mehsoos karna chahti hoon.....isliye 'aap apni zindagi jee kar dekhiye aur main guzar kar dekhti hoon.'

👏


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankx.
QUOTE=_angel_]nice start hun😊
Thankx for reading.
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Originally posted by: jazmeen

sound grt i really wish if it could hav happened in kmh coz i mean he said no so arohi should hav take revenge at lest 4 a lil while

plz con soon😛

I agree wid yu.and i guess yu have'nt noticed that it was a one shot.

Originally posted by: rbb1

that is a great start A, all the sentences are really good, please update it soon i want to read what happens next, thank you

Thankx a lot for reading n appreciating.nothing happens next in this as it was a one shot ff.but i'll surely write a ff next month.
Take care.
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Originally posted by: Irika

its really great please write a FF

Thankx n i'll write a ff soon.

Originally posted by: MEOW

A.... simply superb.....

This one line says it all.........

main is farq ko mehsoos karna chahti hoon.....isliye 'aap apni zindagi jee kar dekhiye aur main guzar kar dekhti hoon.'

👏

Thankx for yur sweet words.glad to know that yu liked the convo.
god bless yu.

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Though i've already posted this one shot earlier,but now i'll post all the one shots under this thread.

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Kuch pal-
Arjun n Aarohi's parents arranged their marriage.but Arjun never got the chance to talk to her in front of their families.
Arjun's dad gave him Aarohi's number. He was not sure about himself that whether he should do this or not..he never talked to a girl before.....after thinking a lot,he finally picked up his phone and dialled her number.sumone picked up the phone.
"Yes" it was a sweet and feminine sound.
"hi..this is Arjun..may i talk to Aarohi plz " his voice was deep.
"i'm Aarohi..." she replied nervously.
After a brief silence he broke the ice.
"well..i guess yu know everything about me.." he said.
"jee.." words took great effort to come out of her mouth.
"well..the thing yu do'nt know is that i'm a very boring man...." he tried to make her a little comfortable.
"Some people dance in the rain, others just get wet" she answered in a soft voice.but her answer baffled him.he was not
expecting this kind of answer.
" Yu r unusual.." he said in a meaningful tone.
"Is it a compliment ?" she replied in a teasing manner.
Her answer was quick and he became answerless again.,a wonderfully mysterious smile played on his lips.
"determine yur own worth by urself.." he sighed and said.
"angry ?" she felt confused.
" well....speak if yu r angry....and trust me you will make the best speech you'll ever regret" she changed her accent in the parody of joke.
He tried his best..but her words brought a smile on his face. again both remained silent for few minutes.
"Kya aap is rishte se khush hain ?" his question was sudden.
"aap khush hain?" she asked back.
"Yu ask too much questions" he said huskily.
"sumtimes questions r easy than answers."she replied smilingly.
"take care " her voice was smiling.
"bye"
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Thankx for reading again.i hope i've nt wasted yur time.

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