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Love you jaan ...jitne bhi emoticons dalu utne kum hain ky alikha hain yaar โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ Apke pahle hi Chapter ne hume ghayal kar diya ๐ this is truly magical & your Simple but strong words made it even more Wonderful. ๐ ๐ ๐ beautiful is the only word come in my mind after reading first part ๐
Ana dear you created Magic again ๐ frankly Speaking arrange marriage & slow interaction ๐ the cute conversations , dheere dheere badhati nazdeekiyaan is my all time favrate concept ๐ & you have written it brilliantly ๐ Arjun was attending Salil's wedding but insted of it he was busy stairing at her angle. I just loved thsi super confident & Simple Aru. ๐ their interaction in the parking area was awesome i just loved Arohi...poor Arjun started being sophisticted asking her name in polite hindi"Apki taarif ?" & she replied "Sab karte hain" ๐ ๐ ๐ I just loved her answers.
Special wow for the way you made the turns of events, I didnt feel for a moment that Story is running fast, ๐ i was lost in the beauty of your words. โญ๏ธ Salil was awesome too you cracked me up with his lines "whi,jise to sare function men tarr(staring) rha tha.jise bar bar dekhne k chakar men tune meri shadi ki cd ghissa dii hai." โญ๏ธ Salil was awesome. So dadi saw his arjun lost & apne pote ke liye Arohi ka rishta maang hi liya Salil's corcen for Arjun & Arohi was lovely. it was beautifully written ๐ ๐
Aur Mahi ji apki is line ne toh hume ghayal kar diya ๐ behadh khubsoorati se likha hain sach mein ๐ ๐ ๐ "mujhe pari nhi chahey,parion k paron k rang kche hote hen. .mujhe to uske jesi hi ladki chahey thi jis ki muskuraht meri zindagi men rang bikhr dey." ๐ ๐ Arjun & Arohi's conversation is written beautifully. you know the update is Soo Sooo Sooo Beautiful that i feel like quoteing every second line in comments it just took me to the dreamland ๐ he really loves her his asking her she is happy or not was absolutely adorable ๐ & lastly her reply to assure him ...haaye i just loved those lines. ๐ ๐ Arjun didnt let her go before saying good night โบ๏ธ & it was just beautiful ๐
he is lost in his angle now ..uff kya khubsoorati se discribe kiya hain tumne ๐ ๐ even i am mesmerised ๐
ab kya hogaa ..Shaadi
waiting for next ...cointinue soon ๐
Thank you for this beautiful write up
Love you
Pranjal.