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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: AAKMH2



aww wow bewafa sanam jag rhi hsi

tere liye kuch v jaanman๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh


tere liye kuch v jaanman๐Ÿ˜ณ



aww love u baby

dekh tero 1st 2nd,meetng likhne men time lgaa

bta ab khush naa?

ab to krdun in dono ki shasdi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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koi gall nhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AAKMH2



aww love u baby

dekh tero 1st 2nd,meetng likhne men time lgaa

bta ab khush naa?

ab to krdun in dono ki shasdi

it was so cute meeting yaar. Ab kar de shadi despo king aur najuk kali ki.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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<div>it was so cute meeting yaar. Ab kar de shadi despo king aur najuk kali ki.




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AAKMH2




tune last para parha? wo mene whts app pr send nhi kya

Maine shuru se end tak pura padha๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh


Maine shuru se end tak pura padha๐Ÿ˜Š



ok thank u jii
ab btA nxt updt kiska chahey
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Posted: 12 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Love you jaan ...jitne bhi emoticons dalu utne kum hain ky alikha hain yaar โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ Apke pahle hi Chapter ne hume ghayal kar diya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ this is truly magical & your Simple but strong words made it even more Wonderful. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ beautiful is the only word come in my mind after reading first part ๐Ÿ‘

Ana dear you created Magic again ๐Ÿ‘ frankly Speaking arrange marriage & slow interaction ๐Ÿ˜Š the cute conversations , dheere dheere badhati nazdeekiyaan is my all time favrate concept ๐Ÿ˜ƒ & you have written it brilliantly ๐Ÿ‘ Arjun was attending Salil's wedding but insted of it he was busy stairing at her angle. I just loved thsi super confident & Simple Aru. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ their interaction in the parking area was awesome i just loved Arohi...poor Arjun started being sophisticted asking her name in polite hindi"Apki taarif ?" & she replied "Sab karte hain" ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† I just loved her answers.

Special wow for the way you made the turns of events, I didnt feel for a moment that Story is running fast, ๐Ÿ˜Š i was lost in the beauty of your words. โญ๏ธ Salil was awesome too you cracked me up with his lines "whi,jise to sare function men tarr(staring) rha tha.jise bar bar dekhne k chakar men tune meri shadi ki cd ghissa dii hai." โญ๏ธ Salil was awesome. So dadi saw his arjun lost & apne pote ke liye Arohi ka rishta maang hi liya Salil's corcen for Arjun & Arohi was lovely. it was beautifully written ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Aur Mahi ji apki is line ne toh hume ghayal kar diya ๐Ÿ‘ behadh khubsoorati se likha hain sach mein ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ "mujhe pari nhi chahey,parion k paron k rang kche hote hen. .mujhe to uske jesi hi ladki chahey thi jis ki muskuraht meri zindagi men rang bikhr dey." ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Arjun & Arohi's conversation is written beautifully. you know the update is Soo Sooo Sooo Beautiful that i feel like quoteing every second line in comments it just took me to the dreamland ๐Ÿ˜ƒ he really loves her his asking her she is happy or not was absolutely adorable ๐Ÿ˜ƒ & lastly her reply to assure him ...haaye i just loved those lines. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Arjun didnt let her go before saying good night โ˜บ๏ธ & it was just beautiful ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

he is lost in his angle now ..uff kya khubsoorati se discribe kiya hain tumne ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ even i am mesmerised ๐Ÿ‘

ab kya hogaa ..Shaadi

waiting for next ...cointinue soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thank you for this beautiful write up

Love you
Pranjal.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AAKMH2



ok thank u jii
ab btA nxt updt kiska chahey

kuch khwab sa or d bhootiya ss๐Ÿ˜† or seducing mr hot. 3 options hai

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