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Posted: 13 years ago
as much as i itch to commend on what kind of twist. i am a stickler for writer prerogative. it wouldnt be the same if we knew or told you what to do. on one hand i want to see/know the twist for you have always come up with something interesting. but on the other hand i am scared to as where these two are right now and if this part is anythign to go by i have a feeling that twist i am going to not like and perhaps find it a bit out of character? i dont know. anyways. in other news the update was lovely as always! i dont know if i should be worried abt vicky being absent. like how you've shown their adjusting to married life. its a long process and though arohi is clearly cut and settled for/in the mold. for someone like the character that you've made arjun it is a hard and long change. as so evident by him. the sharing of space and decisions and thoughs and etc...continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ofcourse I want you to continue this FF.. how will the love bind stronger without facing all the dilemma nd hardships.. When you brought the twist in SWTE nd the leap after it.. i loved it. I love it when u leave the endings as cliffhangers.. All through the update i was like now something will happen..i was really scared but I still want you to go ahead..what's the fun without a roller coaster ride?
In the end it's your decisions and I HOPE all the readers of this FF want to it to continue..I don't want the ending to be very early..
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Posted: 13 years ago
So there it is. I don't know how I feel about this chapter...struggled with this one so please so let me know your thoughts. Also, we are at a point in this story where something has to change. Some people have asked me not to separate Arjun and Arohi so this brings me to a crossroads of sorts. So I ask you guys...should I bring in a small twist and then clear up things and end this story in the next 4 chapters or should i bring in a big twist. Now my big twist is going to bring in turmoil and plenty of anguish. Even I'm hesitant about it BUT I do know that this story needs something to move forward. I would really appreciate your input.
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THANKS FOR A FABULOUS UPDATE
THEIR RELATION IS GOING STRONG
BUT SOMEHOW I GOT THE FEELING THAT FOR ARJUN IT IS MORE OF A PHYSICAL RELATION THAN AN EMOTIONAL ONE
I HAVE NEVER SEEN HIM DO ANYTHING EXTRA FOR HER, HE JUST WANTS TO HAVE SEX AND THEN SLEEP
HE DOES NOT HER LIKES AND DISLIKES, HER AIM IN LIFE, WHAT LIFE MEANS TO HER
HE HAS NEVER SAT DOWN OR GONE ON A DATE WHERE HER FEELINGS TOOK PRECEDENCE
IT IS ALWAYS HER WHO ADJUSTS HER LIFE FOR HIM, MAKES ALL THE COMPROMISES
SHE IS NOT ABLE TO EVEN TELL ARJUN THAT SHE WAS UNCOMFORTABLE WITH VICKY STAYING
FOR ARJUN VICKY'S HAPPINESS WAS MORE IMPORTANT THAN HER BEING AWKWARD WITH HIM IN THE HOUSE
HE FORGOT HER BIRTHDAY - WHICH IS SO NOT DONE
THIS SHOWS HER PRIORITY IN HIS LIFE
HE DOES NOT DESERVE HER PURE LOVE FOR HIM

AND SNAKES IN THE FORM OF VICKY, SAMIR, NIKI AND TANYA ARE READY FOR A CHANCE TO BITE THE APPLE

AS FOR THE TWIST, I WOULD GO FOR A MAJOR ONE, MORE TO SHAKE ARJUN
BUT THEN I CANT EVEN SEE AROHI IN PAIN FOR NO FAULT OF HERS

SO YOU HAVE THE CREATIVE LIBERTY TO DO FIT AS YOU PLEASE
MY ONLY REQUEST THAT DO NOT END IN THE NEXT FEW UPDATES, AS THAT WILL GIVE A VERY INCOMPLETE FEELING
I WAIT TO READ YOUR UPDATES AND TAKE TIME TO COMMENT

WAITING FOR KI AND CHAHAT



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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so happy with your response so far! As a writer all I can hope is that the true reality of my characters are coming across to you in my words. Neither character is perfect...and their relationship can't just be about love and love making. I have no doubt that these two love each other immensely but they were thrown into this marriage together and I feel sometimes that in the end they just adjusted to it instead of embracing it. They have a long way to go and in 4 updates I could give a superficial ending to this FF but I really don't want to do that. I am going to take a little bit of time and see what exactly I'm going to do with this FF to do true justice to it. All of your have pointed out some amazing things to me so thanks so much for your input. I will keep you posted on when I plan to update next. Take care and enjoy your day/night.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: salmankh1

I am so happy with your response so far! As a writer all I can hope is that the true reality of my characters are coming across to you in my words. Neither character is perfect...and their relationship can't just be about love and love making. I have no doubt that these two love each other immensely but they were thrown into this marriage together and I feel sometimes that in the end they just adjusted to it instead of embracing it. They have a long way to go and in 4 updates I could give a superficial ending to this FF but I really don't want to do that. I am going to take a little bit of time and see what exactly I'm going to do with this FF to do true justice to it. All of your have pointed out some amazing things to me so thanks so much for your input. I will keep you posted on when I plan to update next. Take care and enjoy your day/night.




thanks di! Glad that what you want is same as what we want :) we will wait for your next update di :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: salmankh1

I am so happy with your response so far! As a writer all I can hope is that the true reality of my characters are coming across to you in my words. Neither character is perfect...and their relationship can't just be about love and love making. I have no doubt that these two love each other immensely but they were thrown into this marriage together and I feel sometimes that in the end they just adjusted to it instead of embracing it. They have a long way to go and in 4 updates I could give a superficial ending to this FF but I really don't want to do that. I am going to take a little bit of time and see what exactly I'm going to do with this FF to do true justice to it. All of your have pointed out some amazing things to me so thanks so much for your input. I will keep you posted on when I plan to update next. Take care and enjoy your day/night.


YOU ROCK RAMAN
YOU ACTUALLY KNOW WHAT WE WANT
THANKS
I AGREE WITH YOU
IF YOU END IT SO SOON, THEN YOU ARE DOING JUSTICE TO THE STORY AND THE CHARACTERS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey.. Thats completely true... They have still to learn what they mean to each other... Especially our dear Arjun...
May be you could really show how arohi deals with how she feels abt him with this natasha... Like she could not get upset abt him working and instead put up a show of just tge same scenario with jay's help... That could introduce a nice new character or cud be romit (who will technically be dating shefali) and with the help of that we could see how arjun feels abd how he changes from work-oriented to wife-oriented 😉



Just a suggestion... 😆 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update was the hot one n loved drunk arohi I feel not a turmoil but a small misundestanding
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Posted: 13 years ago
So your continuing this.. ??I want at least 4-5threads to this FF..it deserves this..nd your right.. I don't want a superficial ending either.. Waiting for the update :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was such a good update! loved it! simply amazing! loved all of the little moments between arjun and arohi. loved how they are getting together but am hating Nicki now!! lol please continue on! your doing an amazing job!

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