os-Without you... - Page 3

Originally posted by: moonkmh

Wao!
M speechless dr.
U r amazng,i felt goosebumps in my body nw.
God! What a story dr.
I love it yaar. The emotn of arjun is describd amazingly. He adopt lil aru in d memory of his luv. Superb dr.

thanx for giving that much appreciation it inspires to write better and more...

Originally posted by: ...vibha...

beautiful
it was sad one bt loved it

thanx for appreciating...

Originally posted by: vrshn

very beautiful! so emotional!!
you are completely awesome!!
wow! our forum has so many wonderful writers!!

thanx...
it is a wonderful compliment to get from a great writer itself...

Originally posted by: cybergali

wow. this os of ures is so beautiful and emotional😭 this is to goood. he named his kid after arohi. and he didnt even get married. and arohi gave her life for him u are such a great writer rockstar. i loved ure os. left me speechless. i cried so much 😭 and i reread it like 50 million times. to good. btw what ure name rockstar??

thank...
sorry for making you cry...
i will surely try to write a happy one next...

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

N AM CRYING HERE...
cant stop ma tears nw...

sorry...
hope my ff's update has made you happy...

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96

this is such a lovely OS...

ITS SO emotional nd touching...

continue writing, ur really gud at this :)

thanx..
your encouragement will surely make me write more...

Originally posted by: Anupa28

OMG...what a lovely OS...fell in love with it...you have made me so emotional...

Time goes by but however dark the night is it always brings with it the promise of daylight.. and it is up to is to give a chance to that ray of sunlight...wrote a poem long back and even posted it today.. but not knowing how apt this will be for this OS...

Sands of Time

Hope of golden morning

Turns somber yellow,

As the sands of time drop

Hour after hour.

The frenzied passion of noon

Turns smokey grey,

As the darkness of solitude invade

Hour after hour.

The copper chrome cravings of evening

Turns frozen red,

As the vortex of pain sweep

Hour after hour.

A sense of numbness

Engulfs the sleepless night

As the hope of morning gleams through

Hour after hour'..

Keep on rocking...Love..Anu di

thanx... surely agree with your thought...
loved the poem...

Originally posted by: arohi_arjun

Thank for the pm

It was awesome but sad. Lovely OS and emotional...

thanx...
pming is my pleasure...

Originally posted by: justprati

aweee sooo heart touching os...its its jst awesome...very beautifully written...i felt lyk crying when i knew arohi gone 4ever...bt u gave a very beautiful n justified ending...thnx 4 d pm...its jst tooo nice...tc :)

thanx...
will write more...

saddd!! but sweet too!! luvd the last bit!!!