FF: Ek Paal...Epilogue pg45 Oct 8 09 - Page 11

*Speechless*
I just went thru all the Seven parts back to back...
Omg Jaz... You just took me to another world....
Every single little detail.. Every single little description.. Every single little emotion... Every single little feeling and Every single little thought... It was sooo beautifully and effectively done... I mean literally I cant find a suitable superlative or any amount of superlatives that wud do justice to your immense talent...
You are such a gifted writer👏...
It was just flawless!!
You deserve a hugeeeeeeee round of applause really!!
You just floored me and I have turned into a huge fan of yours...
You can easily give 'any' professional writer a run for their money...
The songs u used in every update.. Every single song👏 Perfect.. And all of them so beautifully interwoven with the story and the plot..
And the plot..How u made it sooo real... And how sensibily u handled it.. Yet the amount of sensitivity with which u portrayed such a real and a serious issue... Commendable👏
The way u portrayed the characters, the way u brought out their inner thoughts and emotions.. How u built the whole picture and scenario..
And your descriptions.. Absolutely Amazing! 👏Its like u painted the whole picture infront of us.. Actually more like u made us walk right into that painting...
I could feel and imagine the whole thing happening infront of me..
It got me so involved and engrossed..
It made me go through a huge variety of emotions..
I was gasping, I was holding my breathe, I was shocked, I was heart broken, I was smiling, I was chuckling, I was grinning, I got teary eyed, I was horrified, I was sad , I was dreamy ... and so much more
It was such a treat..😃
Cant thank you enough for that...
May Allah bless ju!!
Keep up the great work👏..
May you grow from strength to strength😃

Originally posted by: salma_786786

DAMN IT!!! never did those words sound sooo heavenly peaceful to me ever since i heard Prem say Damn it to Heer in this show and your FF.... DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT I LOVE HIM!!!! 🤣 🤣 ...tauba...why are you cursing girl...😕...lol...j/k...glad you have learned to love the phrase 'damn it' 😆😆

Jazuuuuuu i loved it 😳😳 thank you 😳😳.... Nancy just rocks... for you to portray a friend like this.... shows that you must be a hell of a friend to people well i dont know how i am as a firend you would have to ask my friends that 😕😕😕...but for my girls...anything...anything at all...love them to bits 😳.... im lucky to have you as a mate aww...me too 😛... I actually thought that this update will be depressing & great but you added humour into it... Prem and Nancy encounters are just hilarious just like life, everything cant be all drama all the time...you need some good times also...😉😉 that is where nancy comes in 😛.... NO MANMEET YAAAAYYYYYYY PARTY IN THE HOUSE 🥳 ...party for now...aage ka kya hoga...kya paata 😆😆...😈

i cant believe Prem did not finish saying I LOVE YOU to Heera.... ahhh i was hanging onto his very words.... he should just grab her by the shoulder and shake n shake n say I am here for you.... i love you... leave that swine of a husband.... ha ha...tum saab bol gayi phir prem kya bolega 😆😆...maybe ill send prem to you for some tips on what to say...😉😉 im sue you can do better then me at portraying emotional words about love.... 😳😳😳 thank u

Great update UWD....dont know where you find the time to do an amazing piece like this with a busy schedule like your.... 👏...saach boloon...i dont know where i find time either 😉😉...but doing my stories is a way for me to relax...i get lost in premeer and dont have to worry about tuition and deadlines for an hour or so...😉...next part up soon 😳😳

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome
plz continue soon
thanks for pm me 👏 👏

Originally posted by: shabo24

Jaz di!!! shabbu 🤗

😭

You had me crying during that part! It was written so beautiffly and wonderfully! 👏 👏 And I had sad songs playing to and it just added to the whole scene! 😳 FLWLESS!! aww...crying...haila...good or bad crying 😕😕...glad that you liked it...and omg...sad songs are a fave of mine...they are depressing but they are so so so meaningful 😳
Heer!! 🤗 I was crying along with her pain, I know people who been through similar situations and that was all that was running through my mind! Others might sypthesize with the charachter, i empthtize!! oh...hope the people you had in mind are now ok...i dont personally know people in this situation...but i thank god that the ones i love are happy...i pray for happiness for all women 😃😃
Nancy!!🤗 Kaash, zindigi mein ek esa dost mila! Dosti hai toh asi! 😉...for sure...dost ho toh aaisi...ive got mine and i thank God everyday for them..She's watching out for Heer, protecting her, mothering her!! 😳 And the tatoo part!!!!!! 😉 Heer should get one saying Mr.Pier! 😆 tauba...im sure you want one saying mr. pier too...dont u...no need to deny it 😆😆...but like i said b4...u gotta have some masit 😳
Prem!🤗 OMG, I feel so bad for him now! He is trying so hard to help her yet...Heer keeps pushing him out of her life!!
👏 👏 👏 Amazing part!!
Don't apolagize for being late, your parts are always worth it!! 😳
thanks for understanding yaar...and dont worry...prem will get his shot...thoda sabar karo 😉😉😉

Shabz

Originally posted by: Sweetxsuga

fantastic az always.... thanx a da update.... n plz continue soon....

Originally posted by: coolkitty_23

That part, the preparation before every scene, you know to play with words girl!! way to go!!! absolutely blew my mind off...lovely lovely update!! 👏 wow!! I am still spell bound.... 😆

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Di that was sooooooooooooo sweet! And sad of course.... but I love how much of a smartass Nancy is. 😆 I'm honestly loving her comebacks and remarks!!! Thanx so much for the PM. I was waiting for it. Love you!!!



Komzie

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

tears rolled dowm from my eyes too
how prem can forget his heera 😭 😭
but it was so beautifully written
very nice and good
just update soon i will be waiting 😃

Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

the song, mausam is a personal favorite and i think it fits the situation ver well. 👏 okay, this one was the most teary part, i could say. all the other parts i was ready to go kill tht ______ manmeet, but now i could only hope tht heer lets go of all this nonsense and go to prem, can't u see the guy loves u? and u love him as well?

outstanding, mindblowing, fantastic, awesome, brilliant, superb! 😆

Originally posted by: kbatool

Very well written once again. Really loved the bits of humor added in conversation b/w nency and Prem. I would also like to appreciate your choice of songs.
Great going. Keep it up 👏

Originally posted by: fijiana

superb update jaz 👏 👏 .and once again great song selection 😊 .
great update esp the convo part btw nancy and prem.seriously this heer needs a dong on the head after going thru a lot from that manmeet she still can't trust prem but rather defends that manmeet.
hope the next update brings a little closeness btw prem and heer

Originally posted by: -Faith-

*Speechless* 😆😆apparently most of my readers are turning mute 😆😆
I just went thru all the Seven parts back to back... 😲...wow...thanks for taking the time to do that 😳
Omg Jaz... You just took me to another world....
Every single little detail.. Every single little description.. Every single little emotion... Every single little feeling and Every single little thought... It was sooo beautifully and effectively done... I mean literally I cant find a suitable superlative or any amount of superlatives that wud do justice to your immense talent...
You are such a gifted writer👏...
It was just flawless!!
You deserve a hugeeeeeeee round of applause really!! i am glad that you appreciated my detail...sometimes i think its too much and that my readers will get bored but im glad that you didnt...😳😳😳...wow...superlative...havent heard that work in a while. 😆😆...one of my $10 words 😉😉...thanks again 😊
You just floored me and I have turned into a huge fan of yours...
You can easily give 'any' professional writer a run for their money... aww...thanks...that means a lot...😳
The songs u used in every update.. Every single song👏 Perfect.. And all of them so beautifully interwoven with the story and the plot.. the songs add a little something more to the update and story...kind of sets everything up 😉😉
And the plot..How u made it sooo real... And how sensibily u handled it.. Yet the amount of sensitivity with which u portrayed such a real and a serious issue... Commendable👏 thank you...i went with the plot because as much as we may not want to believe it...things like this happen to many women 😡😡😡...those men need to be locked up 😡😡
The way u portrayed the characters, the way u brought out their inner thoughts and emotions.. How u built the whole picture and scenario..
And your descriptions.. Absolutely Amazing! 👏Its like u painted the whole picture infront of us.. Actually more like u made us walk right into that painting... wow...that is such a great compliment 😳😳...i truly appreciate your kind words...walking into a painting huh...i think i will use that phrase somewhere...its so powerful...thanks for the idea 😆😆
I could feel and imagine the whole thing happening infront of me..
It got me so involved and engrossed..
It made me go through a huge variety of emotions..
I was gasping, I was holding my breathe, I was shocked, I was heart broken, I was smiling, I was chuckling, I was grinning, I got teary eyed, I was horrified, I was sad , I was dreamy ... and so much more
It was such a treat..😃 glad that you went through so many emotions...if i can get a reader to feel even one emotion...then i feel my job is done...thanks for feeling so much 😆😆...now i feel so good about my stuff...not to sound egotistical or anything 😕😕
Cant thank you enough for that...
May Allah bless ju!!
Keep up the great work👏..
May you grow from strength to strength😃
thanks yaar...may Allah bless you too...Allah tumhari haar dua kabul karein 😳😳😳...thnak for liking my work...next part up soon

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

👏 👏 👏

beautifully written....

Originally posted by: azmatrana

hey i read all last three parts together all of them were awesome n beautifully written grt writing.i m really concerned abt heer wat is she tryin to do aaaaa.well grt work well done bye

Originally posted by: kellz

its so different but so good