~ Preet Meher Extended OS - Tere Naina ~ (update pg 5)

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sherma

@sherma

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

👏thank u so much fr updating.i am sure preet gt meher insecurities;such a cutiepie he is.thanks fr pm.do continue soon

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

owww poor meher, felt really sad for her, when she thought that she is between ash & preet,

loved the kiss on his forehead, and preet pay back😃

great to hear that you want to continue,

and i hope soon 😆

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Rhea_401

@Rhea_401

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Though u dint pm me...still i found out dat u hv update it..dats wat i call Meet crazy...😆

Very cute ...i love d way Preet answered ash's taunts to Meher ,widout speaking😉...sigh! sucha loving husband he was nai...

Anyways do continue asap and dnt make us wait for 4 months again!!

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Aw, great update. I'm so glad Preet was aware of the kiss Meher gave her at night.

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Imagine my surprise when I logged onto I-F and saw a PM from you .

My reaction...

Okay well...I'm not complaining...

But it had been so long since you updated that I had to go back and read part 1......It brought a smile to my face and then I ran back and read part 2...and I have only one thing to say...Ranjana...you rock...

I sooo love this extended OS and I absolutely LOVE the new title.

Let's start from the top off this update...Poor Preet is sick...with fever no less...

And Ash filled Meher's head with so many insecurities that she didn't even finish feeding him the soup...I really wanted to kick Ash's butt...

How fitting then that Preet overheard her taunting Meher in the kitchen. And how wonderful that he showed so much concern over Meher's burned fingers...

And it was sooo wonderful that he knew Meher had kissed him the night before...

And the way he snuck a kiss from her in return...right in front of Ash...Hai!!...

Burn Ash Burn...

Thanks so much for the update Ranjana...you really made my day...

Look forward to the next part.

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Hello! :)

I came to know about your OS through Fatima. (This is for you dear-- ... yeah I stole it from your post 😆 )

I read both the parts and really liked them. They were touching, emotional and yet brought a smile to your face. Preet and Meher are such sweethearts. ❤️ Nice job!👏

Waiting for the third part. 😃 Thanks for writing this.

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Siti Nabilah

@ctnabilah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

aww! I just read both parts together...what a lovely n sweet story...plzz make it longer dear ;)

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gina24

@gina24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

dil khush kar deta tussi
hats off to you guys for keeping up meet magic
would be waiting for your next update eagerly

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Thanks Fatima and Ranjana for letting me know.

I forgot the story entirely and had to re read the 1st part.

pg 4

Beautiful update,

No doubt you're very talented writer. You choose the right words always and in one word the impact is felt. Really unfortunate for fans that you could not take interest in writing frequently or visiting here.

Meher's pov is just fab. Her feelings are so well written. Her confusion is understandable.

Ash peeked in and tried her best to create havoc. Hmm. I should mention - this part seemed out of the blue however that's how it was in the show. She kind of jumps in when we least expect. Good observation.

We could easily visualize Meher's state in the way you created the scene.

The scenes flow so naturally I love how you make the story move.

The best for me is how Meher kissed her husband when she thought he was asleep.

A subtle way or only way she knows to show her deep affection.

Preet's entry in the scene at the end and making Meher smile is wonderful.

Thanks for this story, your time and for coming to update.

Parts 1 & 2 are very well written.