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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter-13



Prem was standing in front of the mirrot in Kunal's washroom splashing water on his face continuously thinking about sanjana's proposal.

Prem (thinks): Kya maine galat kiya kya sanju ko mana karke. Lekin mae use han kaise kar deta' jabki maine uske bare mein us tarha se kabhi nahi socha.

"Knock! Knock! Prem are you there? Tum thik to hona? Kunal asked.

Prem came out of the washroom wiping his wet face.

Kunal: Kya hua Prem are you alright?

Prem: Han Kunal mae thik hun. Bas dard ke mare sar phata jar aha hai.

Kunal: lo karlo baat! Tumhare bhi sar mein dard ho raha hai kya. Aj kya 'headache day' hai kya. Ruko mae tumhare liye medicine leke ata hun.

Prem (confusingly): mere bhi sar mein dard ho raha hai matlab? Or kiske sar mein dard ho raha hai?

Kunal: Heer ke sar mein!!! isiliye to wo jaldi ghar chali gai.

Prem: Heer ke sar mein dard ho raha or wo ghar bhi chali gai?

Prem (thinks): Sanju ke chakar mein Heer ke bare mein to mae bhul hi gaya. Or wo muje bina bataye hi ghar chali gai. I hope uske sar zyada dard nahi ho raha ho.

Kunal: Prem chal niche chalet hain party mein.

Prem: Kunal tu chal mein abhi ata hun.

Kunal: acha thik hai tu jaldi aaiyo, ok?

Prem nodded. Kunal left from there and Prem starts dialing Heer's number. Heer was lying on the bed thinking about Prem and Sanjana. Then her phone starts ringing. She saw Prem's name was flashing on the screen.

Heer (thinks): Prem zaror apne or Sanju ke bare mein batane ke liye call kar raha hoga.

She took her phone in her hand and cut the call. Prem was shocked. Then again he dialed her number and again she cut the call.

Prem (frustrated): Dammit! Ab yeh Heer ko kya ho gaya. Bar-bar mera phone kyun kat rahi hai. Pehle Sanju or ab Heer. Aj ka to din hi kharab hai.

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In the party

Prem came downstairs. When Preet saw Prem is coming ti them, he winked at Kunal and they starts talking about Heer loudly.

Preet (as loudly as he can): I hope Heer di ke sar mein ab zyada dard na ho.

Prem stopped in his track for a second when he heard Preet talking about Heer's headache.

Kunal (whispering to preet): Preet gala phardne ki zarurat nahi hai. Apni normal awaz mein bol.

Preet: sorry Kunal bhai!

Kunal (in his normal voice): Han Preet tu sahi keh raha hai. I hope ki ab Heer ki tabiyat thik ho.

Prem came to them and stood beside them.

Prem (worriedly): Heer ke sar mein zyada dard ho raha tha kya?

Kina: han Prem Heer ki tabiyat bohot zyada kharab thi. Infact use to kharda bhi nahi hue ja raha tha.

Kunal winked when Prem was in his deep thought.

Prem (thinks): ghar jane se pehle mae Heer se milke jaoung. I know wo mujhse oakka naraz hogi. Or isiliye wo mera phone bhi kat rahi hai.

Kunal: waise Prem Sanju bhi nahi dekhai de rahi hai. Tuje pata hai ki wo kahan hai.

Hearing Sanjana's name Prem become uncomfortable.

Prem: umm'. Nahi Kunal, uje nahi pata.

Kunal: Acha! Shayad ghar chali gai hogi.

Prem: Kunal I think ab hume ghar chalna chahiye. Bohot der ho rahi hai.

Kunal: Arre lekin thordi der or ruko na tum log.

Prem: Nahi Kunal please! Der ho rahi. Jana hoga. Happy Birthday once again.

Kunal: Thanks Prem.

Prem hugged Kunal and left from ther with Preet and Meher.

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Prem stopped his car in front of Maan Villa. Meher got down.

Meher: Thank you Prem bhaiya, thank you Preet. Ap log thordi der ke liye andar aaiye na.

Preet (purposefully): Nahi Meher der ho rahi hai. Ab hume chalna chahiye, kyun PB?

Prem: Preet I think Meher thik keh rahi hai. Hume andar chalna chahiye. Heer ki tabiyat thik nahi haina to uska bhi hai-chal pooch lenge.

Both Preet and Meher smirked.

Meher: Han Prem bhaiya aaiye na andar.

Trio went inside the Maan Villa.

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Teji came out of the kitchen hearing the door bell and she opened the door.

Teji: Arre agaye tum log? Party kaisi thi?

Preet: Party bohot achi thi aunty. Maza agaya.

Prem: Aunty Heer ki tabiyat kaisi hai ab?

Teji: Uski tabiyat ab thik hai.wo apne kamre mein hai.

Prem: Aunty kya mein Heer se mil sakta hun?

Teji: arre yeh bhi koi poochne wali baat hai kya beta. Ja jaake mille use.

Prem: Thank you aunty!

Prem went upstairs

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In Heer's Room

Heer was sleeping on her bed. Prem came inside and sit beside her. And starts stroking her head.

Prem (thinks): Mae janta hun heer kit um mujhse naraz ho kyunki party mein maine tumhe zara bhi time nahi diya. Isiliye tum mujhse bina mile hi agai. I am sorry!

Then Prem covered her properly with blanket and softly placed a kiss on her forehead.

Prem (softly): Good night meri chatter-patter!!!!!!!!!!!!

And left from there by giving last last glance on her.

[Ok guys this was the 13th chapter. I know ki maine bohot der se update kiya. I am really sorry. Nowadays I am really busy with my college. So isiliye aage ke update bhi thorde late milenge. I am telling you in advance]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
haq to banta hai to say this..




Awww...prem is such a sweetheart.. the way he cares for heer it shows... lolz poor him here prem is so worried and udhar heer is angry and cutting the call.. she hadn't realized that she is suffering from loveria symptoms which is jealousy..hehehe😆 can't wait to see what next step are the tro gonna take to get prem heer closer...and would love to see ome romantic encounter between prem and heer...

Loved the update...

looking forward to the next part... continue soon..

take care







Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kunal was so sweet
I loved his dialogue Aaj headache day hai kya?
Bechara prem He is getting worried for heer
And preet was so cute he talking in higher voice about heer and telling they were getting late when in maan's house.That was good
Prem oh dear he was the cutest of all.He dont know that heer is upset bcoz of sanju and heer know abt this.
Overall a great chap dear.
OK understood.Now we will wait patiently for your next rocking update.
Take care dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww kunal n preet's acting 😉


it is nyc to hear de caring side of prem 😛


n de cutest part was Prem going to heer's house to check if she is okie , n den going 2 her room 😃



i ❤️ dis dialogue GUD NYT MERI CHATTER PATTER 😆

thanks for de update , loved it 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks kiran for the lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update kiran.. finally mere bhai prem juneja ko heer ki yaad ayi!!!
heheheh and heer think prem accepted sanjana'd proposal.. heheh never!!1
like always loved all dialogues...
it was awesome part kiran.. too good... love u
mujhe yeh dial. bohot acha laga
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Good night meri chatter-patter!!!!!!!!!!!!"
so update next part soon kiran.. jaldi update karna., i m waiting
and kunal preet and meher great combo!
keep s,miling.. tc..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

haq to banta hai to say this..




Awww...prem is such a sweetheart.. the way he cares for heer it shows... lolz poor him here prem is so worried and udhar heer is angry and cutting the call.. she hadn't realized that she is suffering from loveria symptoms which is jealousy..hehehe😆 can't wait to see what next step are the tro gonna take to get prem heer closer...and would love to see ome romantic encounter between prem and heer...

Loved the update...

looking forward to the next part... continue soon..

take care







thank you so much sadi for your lovely comments. love you 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ragvir92

kunal was so sweet

I loved his dialogue Aaj headache day hai kya?
Bechara prem He is getting worried for heer
And preet was so cute he talking in higher voice about heer and telling they were getting late when in maan's house.That was good
Prem oh dear he was the cutest of all.He dont know that heer is upset bcoz of sanju and heer know abt this.
Overall a great chap dear.
OK understood.Now we will wait patiently for your next rocking update.
Take care dear

thank you so much for your appreciation 😃

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