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The long awaited OS mostly by Sia and Noor and Mouli.
Please ignore the grammar and spelling mistakes as i posted it in a hurry and for some reason theres one line in red and a different font. Im not able to change it so please ignore that

A Handsome man dressed in a Black sherwani walked through the entrance of a wedding hall. It was his friend's wedding and he was from the groom's side. He didn't really enjoy going to weddings but as it was his friends he didn't really mind. It was a massive hall full with lots of people along with lights and decorations everywhere. He was really astounded by his surroundings. He was looking around when his eyes fell on a girl with a slender figure, wearing a pink dress teasing some children. She was holding chocolates in the air and not giving them to the kids. She was laughing and telling them to kiss her in order to gain them. As soon as any of them kissed her she handed them a chocolate and the next child had to the same. They were all enjoying themselves until it was the last child's turn. He just stood there watching her as she was about to turn around so he get a glimpse of her face but he was interrupted as he heard someone calling him.
'Waqas, you're here at last. How are you?' It was Sia, Waqas's elder sister. She had been quite busy lately but still managed to choose his sherwani, get everything ready and to get Waqas to come on time.
'See, you look great in that sherwani, now come in quickly'she said.
'Yeah, thanks alot Sia, you work so hard, is Divyesh ready? Waqas asked.
'I think so, I'm going to check on the bride Greeshma' she said and walked off to the bride's room.
Waqas looked around to see if the girl was still there but to his dismay she had gone. He started to search around the hall just to get a little glance of her. He hurried around the hallway in desperate search. He saw her talking to a woman but still couldn't see her face. He realized that she had ended the conversation and was about to leave. He started to approach her but she had begun to run up the stairs. He noticed that her silver paayal had come off and had fallen on the floor. He started to call out to her but she didn't seem to hear. He decided to run after her when he bumped into his childhood Friend and sister, Kavya and Noor.
'Watch it bahyya, you nearly spilt my drink' complained Noor.
'Wehsai tum ithni jaldi mai kyoon hai' Kavya asked.
'Oh, vehsai hee, i saw a friend of mine so I was going to see him.
'Which friend Bhai' asked Noor.
Waqas was getting really impatient. The girl had disappeared again. 'OH god she's gone again' he muttered under his breath, which didn't go unnoticed by Kavya.

'Who? A minute ago you said it was a man and now it's a woman? What are you hiding from us?

'Tell us!' whined Noor.

'I told you it's nothing of that sort' Waqas replied. Waqas sighed and thought to himself that today was going to be a very long day.

Meanwhile, the girl entered Greeshma's room. She was looking extremely mesmerizing, gorgeous and stunning in her bridal attire.

'Wow, Greeshma you look amazing. God bless you' Heer said.

'Thanks alot' replied Greeshma.

The girl told her friends, Neha and Sukrutha to take Greeshma down.

'Ooohh, why is jiju becoming impatient?' said Neha causing the girls to laugh and Greeshma to blush.

'You change and come down' Sukrutha said to the girl.

'Yeah, I will' she replied while Neha and Sukrutha took Greeshma down.

While Heer was getting changed into her turquiose dress she noticed that her paayal was missing.

'mar gayi.. yeh payal kaha gayab hogayi??!! Agar maa ko pata chalgayi main toh gayi kaam se.

She was really worried and frantically started searching everywhere. She moved out of her room when she bumped into someone. "OMG! I'm so sorry, it's all my fault" she said without looking up at the person.

"Hey, it's me, Nabihah" she said.

"Oh" she said looking up. Her eyes lit up. "wow, you're looking good in that suit" she said.

"Thanks" said Nabihah "but why were you so worried before?"

"Oh, ive lost my payaal. My mum gave it to me and it was very special and ive lost it. She'll kill me if she finds out".

"Hmmm..dont worry you'll find it. Come i'll help you search for it." she said.

"Really? Thanks Nabihah. You're so awesome and sweet" she said and gave her a hug.

On the other hand, Waqas was busy searching for the girl.He had her payal and that was the only source due to which he could get to her, so he started asking everyone about the payal and by chance He asked Heer's Mother, Teji and she Got really surprised and angry too at the carelessness of her daughter,she told the Boy that it's her daughters and asked Annwesha,Heer's sister to bring Heer downstairs.
Annwesha went to call Heer when she bumped into her.'

'Heer...wat r u doing here..maa's calling u downstairs' said annwesha..'Seems like u r in Big trouble sis..' she said teasingly...
'aarrgghhh...not now..annwesha..I'm already in dilemma..i have lost that Payal..' Heer said sadly
'wat..no...Maa's going to kill you for sure..' Annwesha teased her more..'well come downstairs..we will search for it later..'
Heer unwillingly went downstairs.


Meanwhile Waqas was lost in his thoughts thinking about that Girl he met just 30mins ago...His eyes were searching for Her..He heard a voice from his back.. when he turned around his eyes fell on the girl coming towards him arguing with the girl next to her..she was wearing same Pink Dress and had a worried look on her face, looking Really Gorgeous...'how can someone be this beautiful' Waqas thought to himself.
His Thoughts were interrupted by the angry voice of a lady when she asked her daugther about the Payal.
He could read the expressions on the girls face, she was about to cry while her mother handed that payal to the girl and walked away leaving Heer there with Waqas..who was staring at her..
"Yeh tum mujhe bhi de sakte the..aese hi Daant par gai mujhe.." heer said..
"par muj.." Waqas tried to speak but failed..
"ab dekha maa naraz ho gai.. tum larke bhi na..hun!" she said angrily and left..
Waqas was smiling at cuteness of that girl.. "HHhMmm Cute stranger" he said to himself
Annwesha, who was really embarrassed at her sister behavior apologized to waqas.."i m realy sorry..you helped her..and she..idiot kahin ki..Instead of saying Thank you itna bol ke chali gai.."
"its Okay" Waqas replied

That payal was special and Dear to heers mother bcz that payal was given to her by Heer's nani..and it was the only memory of her...

Waqas went to his sister,Sia, who was countinously looking at the entrance door..and said "Kya Di phir jiju ka intezaar..aa jaein ge"
"nahi waqas buhat ho gaya..ane do Prem ko ussay mei batati hoon"said Sia angrily
Meanwhile Prem entered the Hall and found his wife standing 10 steps far..'she might be waiting for me..aj tou gae' Prem said to himself..
Prem walked towards them.. "Hey waqas how r u?? wow Looking handsome in black"
"Thnx jiju"..said waqas..
"array is mei tumahara kamaal nahi hai..Sia ke bhai ho kuch tou asar ho ga na.."Prem said winking
"Waqas keh do apne Jiiju se tareef se kaam nahi chale ga, I'm realy angry" Sia Said
"Naah baba..mei nahi parne wala larai mei..jiju manein Di ko ap" Waqas said and leave..
Prem hugged Sia from the Back.."array ab maan bhi jao..u know na i was busy"
"itne busy the keh call bhi attend nahi ki.."Sia said
"acha baba sorry..lo kaan pakarta hoon..plz naraz mat ho.."Prem replied making a puppy face
"abhi i m busy...Bye" Sia walks out,leaving shocked prem.."lagta hai kuch aur karna pare ga"
On the other hand, Waqas joined Kavya, Noor and mouli, who were discussing about their dance that they had planned
"But where is Nabihah...Ohh God us ke bina kese ho ga" Said mouli
Meanwhile Nabihah joined them
"wah think of the devil and the devil is here" said Noor
Nabihah Glared at her..
"kahan thi madam ap?" asked kavya
"woh di kya hua na.."and she tells all that happened..and how she met Heer.."so i was searching her payal..but she found it somewhere else..dont know why she was really angry" said Nabihah
"Kya nabiah..Payal...emm.. was she wearing pink dress??" Waqas asked impatiently
"yeah bhai ap ko kesa pata?" asked nabihah
"Ahem ahem" exclaimed noor and kavya...
"Dekha mouli i told u kuch garbar hai.."said kavya..
"Wat..tum loog bhi na" Waqas said "its just that i found her Payal..thats why i'm asking"
"acha jee" said four Girls teasingly
"yes" Waqas replied
The four Girls were teasing Waqas when they heard someone singing


gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

it was prem..they smiled at him..
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na
dil mein hai jo, khul ke kaho
dil mein chhupaao na
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na

Prem Look at sia..who was still angry..

jaane kis baat pe tum aise khafa ho gaye
shaayad anjaane mein koyi mujhse khata ho gayi
jaane kis baat pe tum aise khafa ho gaye
shaayad anjaane mein koyi mujhse khata ho gayi
bas itna toh bata do ke meri kya bhool hai
phir chaahe jo saja do mujhko woh kubool hai
kuchh toh kaho chup na raho aise sataayo na
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
ruthe ho yuun maan jaao na


He grabs her hand..and take her to Dance Floor in the centre of hall...Sia feeling the beat start dancing..Hands in hands...Staring into each other eyes..it seems like time has stopped...
she smiles at her Husbands cuteness..Prem sings
tum Jo Hasati Ho Toh Yeh Mausam Muskuraata Hai
Kaliyaan Khilati Hai Saara Aalam Gungunaata Hai
tum Jo Hasati Ho Toh Yeh Mausam Muskuraata Hai
Kaliyaan Khilati Hai Saara Aalam Gungunaata Hai
Tum Jo Hasati Ho Har Sitaara Jhilmilaata Hai
Mere Dil Ka Sheher Khusi Se Jagmagaata Hai
Dekho Kabhi Rona Nahin, Mujhko Rulaao Na
Gumsum Ho Kyun Paas Aao Na
Ruthe Ho Yuun Maan Jaao Na
Dil Mein Hai Jo, Khul Ke Kaho
Dil Mein Chhupaao Na

Both were lost in each others eyes...Heer saw that couple dancing and was really impressed by their bond...she was staring at them..when her eyes fell on same Boy who gave her the Payal...

He came on dance floor and started dancing on the Song laung da laskra..the four girls also joined him..later on Prem and Sia were also dancing with them..
Waqas,Prem.Sia,Nabihah,Noor,Kavya and Mouli danced and enjoyed alot..
Now it was turn of Dulhans friends..When Heer starts singing..
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee

Waqas was again lost in thougths..she was wearing a Maroon lehnga..and was looking extremely awesome in that Dress...he kept on Praising Heer
Annwesha also join heer
maiyaa bole jaanaa naheen
bhaiyaa ko bhee maanaa naheen
baabul bole bas ek din kal ka chhalkaa
guddaa bole jaanaa naheen
guddee bole jaanaa naheen
sakhee bole bas ek din kal ka chhalkaa

Suku and Neha take Greeshma to dance Floor and starts singing
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee

Four girls singing and dancing...Making Greeshu emotional..

bhole bhole pairon se chalee ... chalee re
baabuu tere chhotee thee galee
beete mere peechhe rah gayee ... rah gayee
paakheeyon ke neeche rah gayee
gaeyaa meree pyaasee rah gayee ... rah gayee ... rah gayee ... rah gayee ... rah gayee
tulasee vaalee vaadee rah gayee ... rah gayee
chuulhaa main jalaatee rah gayee

chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re kalasee ka paanee
chhalkaa chhalkaa re O aankh na maanee
maiyaa bole jaanaa naheen
bhaiyaa ko bhee maanaa naheen
baabul bole bas ek din kal ka chhalkaa
kaagaa bole jaanaa naheen
jogee bole jaanaa naheen
kar aa bole ek din aur kal ka chhalkaa ... aaa

Waqas was continously staring at Heer..he couldnt help it..and Sia could smell something fishy..as she seeing her brother smiling at the girl dancing..and an idea hit came to her head..she wishpered in Noor ears..and Noor smiled back sheepishly...

"Ahem..ahem" Noor cleared her throat. "We're going to play a game now. Im going to hand numbers out to everyone and whoever has the same number as you, they will be your dance partner."

She deliberately handed Waqas and Heer the same number as per Sia's command.

"who has number 4?" asked Prem.

"I do" said Anousay."Hey Anu" said Prem and they started to dance.

"Hi" said Waqas to Heer when she came to him. "Hey" said Heer.

"Do you want to be friends?" he asked her but she didnt reply.

Heer left the Dance Floor without answering...this left Waqas heartbroken..it was the first time he asked any girl and really wanted her to accept but she refused...But his friends were not going to give up. Kavya whispered something in his ears..he was refusing but as his Friends forced him...he started singing

Girl you are my chamak challo
where you go girl
im gonna follow
what you want girl
just let me know
oooh oooh ohh
you can be my chamak challo
ooh ohh



shorty im gonna get ya
you know im gonna get ya
you know i even let you
let you be my chammak challo

kesa sharmana aja nach k dikha de
aa meri hoja aa parda gira de
aa meri akhiyon se akhiyan mila le
aa tu na nakhre dikhaa
wanna be my chamak chalo
ooh ooh ooh ooh
wanna be my chamak chalo
ooh ooh ooh ooh
wanna be my chamak chalo
ooh ooh ooh ooh

tu meri chamak chalo
teri picture ka mein hero
give it to me girl mujko de do
ho hoo hooo
you can be my chamak chalo

Heer turned around and looked at him and smiled then ran off again.

A week later it was Waqas' birthday and there was a party at his house. Just as he was about to cut his cake he saw a shadow entering the door. It was Heer. His wish of seeing her was accepted.

"emmm...i bought you a gift" she said to him. Waqas was over the moon. He opened the small box and was surpised and overjoyed. It was a ring. "im sorry i ran away that day, its just that i normally talk so much but when you asked me i was speechles sand...

"shhh" said Waqas and your answer is yes.

"Its ok...its fine, I suppose i was going over the top..." she said without listening to him.

" I said yes" he repeated.

"What?" she said and hugged him. This day was the best day in their life.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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mine😳

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*reserved*!!

but r u writing any OS OR SS??

plz tell me!!!
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Do update soon...😊
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Yipeee... Update soon...waitinggg 😃 🥳
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waiting... when r u gonna update???
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thanks guys for ur patience!! It feels so good
i'll update today hopefully
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Originally posted by: ...Pwincess...

thanks guys for ur patience!! It feels so good

i'll update today hopefully


today means nw right?????
plz update soon
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Nabz u writing an OS 😲
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ok im updating now
i'll PM u when im done

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