FF 'HUM TUM' part 3 (13/11) pg 13

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munni_sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: moon_mine
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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

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munni_sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: _Mariam_
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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

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munni_sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

sorry guys for the late update i was busy with my exams but now holidays are started but they r only for one week

PART # 3

All were shell shocked and prem was worse shocked and thinking "do din aur wait karna pade ga why god this is happening to me??? why???"
teji:par kyun???kya kaam aagaya tha use jo woh achanak shimla chali gaye?????
balraj:teji woh......
lalit:(asked worriedly)ballu koi problem to nahi hai
balraj:aree nahi lalit woh koi medical camp laga hai waha isiliye
every one breath relief but teji was still not convinced balraj sees her and say "sach mein teji use koi kaam tha isilye gayi hai"
teji:acha theek hai
g3:aab hum andar aajaye ke...
teji felt so stupid and say "aaye na..."
all entered and the elders go to the lounge while when prem was moving geet stopped him
geet:to app hai prem juneja????
gaurav:kyun koi sahq(doubt)????
geet:tum se kisi ne poocha jao ja ke muh(face) dho kar aao phir baat karo
gaurav:(fuming in anger) YOU.....
geet:what
mehar:just shut up geet
geet:mehar tu mujhe keh rahi hai
mehar:agar tune kuch bhi kaha na mein di ko phone kar do gi
geet:fine
preet:wah heer ka itna darr???
geet:sorry
gaurav:that's what u should said it to me
geet:ohh really
gaurav:yeah
prem got soo much irritated
prem:plzz guys
mehar came in front of prem
mehar:hi prem bhaiya can i call u bhaiya???
prem smiles
prem:of course
mehar:thank u so let introduce ourselves
mehar extend hand "hi im mehar"
prem also respond and say "prem..prem juneja"
mehar:nice to meet u
prem:same here
preet came forward
preet:im preet
mehar:sooo??????(raised her eye brows)
preet:soo can we become friends(extend his hand)
mehar:sorry mein itni jaldi friendship nahi karti
geet:oye koi gal nahi yaar mein hoon na
preet:atlast tum iski tarha dialogue nahi marti
mehar was irritated now
mehar:excuse me mein ne koi dialogue nahi mara
prem was soo horrified that he leave from there
and mehar preet geet gaurav again start to fight again

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now every one was in the lounge and was talking while geet and preet was talking and mehar and gaurav was talking
teji:kafi raat hogaye hai i think aap sab ko rest karna chahiye
preet yawn and say"sure aunty waise bhi mujhe bohat neend aarahi hai humare rooms??
teji:tum aur prem ek room share karlo aur gaurav aur jay room share karlengein panchi geet ke saath share karlien
preet:thanks aunty
teji:bhai sahab mein aapko aapka room dekha deti hoon aur tum dono(mehar & geet) inko inka room dekhao
geet & mehar :jee mom
geet:chalein
and they were showing their rooms while now only mehar preet and prem was left
mehar:prem bhaiya yeh hai aapka room
preet:aur mera bhi
mehar:yeah rite
prem was getting in when mehar stopped
mehar:prem bhaiya aap ko bura to nahi laga
prem:bura kyun???
mehar:i mean heer di chali gayein but i swear di ko koi kaam hoga
prem smile over mehar care for heer
prem:nahi mehar aise koi baat nahi hai and u know one thing
mehar:what???
prem:u r a sweet tie and get in the room
preet was just seeing mehar
mehar:WHAT
preet:u r soo sweet
mehar:just even try to flatter me
preet:i was not trying
mehar:yes u were
preet:i was not
mehar:u were
preet:fine im leaving and goes inside the room and mehar also leave

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while lalit g3 teji and balraj was sitting the room
lalit:ballu tu to jaanta hi hai hum yahan kyun aaye hai
balraj nodded
lalit continued "do din baad heer beti aajayein gi phir baki ki baat tab kare gein
balraj:theek hai
g3:aur teji tumhein pareshan hone ki koi zaroorat nahi
teji just simply nodded

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next morning every one was on the dinning table doing their breakfast
when prem say "bauji mujhe koi kaam hai mein thodi dair baad aajao ga"
lalit:kyun kya howa
prem:woh new hotel project ki land dekhne jaana hai
lalit:theek hai
preet said in geet ear "lo shoro hogaye work alcoholic"
and they both laugh
meanwhile prem leave from there and all other continue to do their breakfast

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prem was standing near the station and was seeing trains coming and thinking "cum fast heer"
just then he felt some hand in his back pant pocket he turned back and sees a girl picking his wallet from the ground prem was just seeing her beauty her hair was long and silky and her eyes were just ......there r no words for prem to describe her beauty

Takte rehte tujhko saanjh savere

Nainon mein bansiya jaise nain yeh tere

Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain

after some time prem come to his senses and sees the girl running and he caught her wrist and turn her back the girl fall on him and for the first time the girl was seeing prem and was lost in his dark brown hazel eyes after some time the girl cum back to her senses and stand up prem also get up but doesn't leave her hand
she was struggling hard to release the grip but it was soo tight then the girl just bite his hand and run from their and prem was just looking his hands

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the girl came to one guy
girl:chal nikal mere 500 rupees
guy:kya yaar heer (and make a sad pout)
and take out 500 rupees and give it to heer
heer was jumping like a kid
heer:itna boring face banane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai raj mein ne nahi kaha tha bet lagane ke liye
raj:chal theek hai acha yeh baata tu wapis kyun aagayein aur mujhe kyun phone kiya tujhe receive karne ke liye
heer:mein shimla phoonchi tu mujhe laga ke maa bauji kahin mujh se naraz na hoon isliye mein ne phir se train pakdi aur wapis aagayein aur tujhe isliye kaha kyn ke agar ghar phone karti to hazaar sawal poochte
raj:acha theek hai chal
heer:haan chal
by now heer sees the wallet in her hand and remember the guy
raj:kya howa
heer:yeh and shows him the wallet ek min ruk mein use yeh wapis kar ke aati hoon
and she move back and see prem standing their
heer:mein jaaon keh nahi..nahi jaati and sees a 10 year boy and called him are suno idhar aao
the boy cam
heer:yeh use de aao(pointed to prem)
boy:iske badle mein kya mile ga
heer:mein tumhein 500 rupee doon gein theek hai
boy became happy
boy:theek hai and was going when heer stop him and
take wallet from him and put a chit in it on which SORRY was written
heer:jao aab de aao and heer leaves from there
the boy came toward prem and give him the wallet
prem:yeh tumhein kahan se mila???
but the boy ran away
prem sees right and left but found no one there and open the wallet and sees that not a single rupee was taken out and a chit was inside it prem picked it out ans sees SORRY was written on it and smiles over it and went towards the car...................

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Riya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

awesome update
loved it
aww can't wait to see their reaction towards each other...when they find out tho the opposite person is..:))
conitnue asap
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