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Posted: 15 years ago
great


thanx 4 the pm



update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
pREM KISKO KHOJ RAHA THA londan sea aanae ke baad.........
Lalit & balraj r dead
Wht is lallus last wish??????/
prems marriage to heer
heer ka profession ..........prem suggested that
ohh missed heer
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Posted: 15 years ago
The update was very interesting !
Sad that Lalit is dead !
I must say Gay3 is a strong women !
Heer is very much hert after that incident !
Who was Prem searching ??
Plzz update soon !
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Posted: 15 years ago
pura confused kar diya mujhe
this ff has become bhoobhulaiya
and main ho gai hun gum
pls yaar
jaldi update karo
tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update selvy.
Glad prem is concerned & supporting heer. 👏
When prem & sanjana went to meet the client, did prem see heer or did he felt her presence 😕
I wonder what secret gaya3 is hiding from everybody? but i'm sure later on it will be revealed. 😉
Hmmmm gaya3 gave a wise advice to prem asking him not to get Rampal involved in business.👏
it's filled with lot of suspence. Cool ....... Loved it hun. continue soon. Looking forward for the next chapter and thanks for the PM.
Luv Gayani.
Edited by Anu*Gayani*Anu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


what is this suspense.............looks prem is in love with heer..........or it is jus concern................

and what is lalit's promise..........................

answer me by giving good and long update mam..................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Shot 5

Prem is busily working in his laptob. He is searching for some file. He clicked a folder which had many pictures of his college days. He started watching the clips one by one. He leaned back on the chair.

~~FLASHBACK~~

It was their farewell party. Everybody gathered in a big garden in their college. Juniors are greeting them with roses. Prem, Sanjana and Rajveer reached there. One junior 'arrey one alphabet is missing where is 'H'?' Rajveer smiled 'on the way.' Prem with out giving any attention to their comments walked ahead. Sanjana happily waving to her classmates walked with Prem and Rajveer.

After few minutes, Heer came in wearing a simple salwar with embroidary work. Sanjana murmured 'atleast today she would have wore something grand.' Sanjana wearing a very grand lehenga, Prem and Rajveer in suit. Heer quietly came to them 'hi'. Rajveer is the only one responded to her. Prem gave a smile looked at her then he looked around the party.

One girl announced a game. 'friends, each one will be given a chit with one name. Personalities are either President/PM or their spouse. Current or former any country. Girls will get female name and male name for boys. First you have to find their spouse name. secondly you have to find the person holding that name. Thirdly with your partner you have to come to the center. The pair who comes first will get a gift. Your picture will be published in local newspaper.'

Each one got one chit. Prem opened his chit and closed it without any interest. Sanjana opened his paper and saw 'Lyudmila'. Sanjana 'Prem show me yours.' Prem 'did you find the spouse.' Sanjaja shook her head 'don't know'. Prem 'what is the name?' Sanjana 'Lyudmila' Prem smiled 'not my spouse.' Sanjana angrily 'what?' Prem 'I don't have her spouse name.' Sanjana 'Rajveer, what name you have?' Rajveer 'mine is simple Rajiv Gandhi. I have to find my Sonia.' Sanjana angrily 'don't know this lady at all.' She ran to get answer around. She wants her picture to be published in the newspaper.

Rajveer looked at Heer who is thinking deeply. 'Heer, what name you have?' Heer 'I have to search George H W Bush. Mine is Barbara Pierce.' Rajveer are you sure?' Heer 'ha' before she realize she felt a hand tightening around her wrist. Then felt she has been dragged towards the center. Pushing the boys and girls who are searching for their partner, Prem dragged Heer to the center.

Until they reached the spot Heer didn't realize what is happening to her. Prem shouted 'I got my partner. I found my spouse.' Heer came to conscious and saw Prem jumping like a kid. For the first time she saw him act immature. She stared at him with confusion. After few seconds she realized Prem is holding chit with the name George H W Bush in his hand. She smiled.

Girl who announced the game came to them and look at the paper. She announced 'here is the lucky couple.' Others cheered. Sanjana got shocked to see Prem and Heer standing in the center with a wide smile.

Another junior came with two boxes and handed one to Prem and another to Heer. He asked them to open. Prem and Heer opened and saw a thin ring. Prem took the ring and inserted into his index finger. Heer took the ring did the same. Girl joked 'the gift went to PH.' Others cheered. Prem and Heer asked to pose for picture to be published in the newspaper.

Prem and Heer stood side by side but little away. Girl comment 'Prem, angry on Heer?' Prem shook his head 'nope.' Boy 'then stand close with her, man.' Prem moved to Heer. Girl 'hai, she is your friend put your hand around her shoulder.' Prem looked at Heer for permission. Heer moved closer to him as her shoulder touching his chest. Considering this as granted sign, he wrapped her shoulder with his hand pulling her closer.

Before taking a snap boy comment 'they looks like Mrs & Mr. Bush.' Girl laughed 'they are not that much old.' Boy 'they are perfect.' Prem smiled 'don't talk too much. I'll put bomb on your head.' Others clapped.

~~END~~

Prem looked at the ring in his index finger. He smiled touching the ring. He lifted his head when he heard his cabin door opening. Gaya3 entered the cabin. Prem got surprised. She never came to the office before. She looked at Lalit picture and smiled. She turned to Prem 'Prem, I want to talk to you.'

Prem took her to couch and sat with her. Gay3 straight away came to point 'Prem, I want to start a business.' Prem surprised 'business? What business ma?' Gaya3 'a showroom. It should be selling unique gift articles like paintings, wax and wood carvings.' Prem surprised. He know his mother is interested in collecting those kind of items but she never came up with doing business with that. 'Ma, why suddenly?' Gay3 smiled 'I felt so.'

Prem got up 'one second ma.' he picked up the phone and called Nihal who is his financial advisor. Nihal came in. Prem explained. Nihal asked few more question to Gaya3. Then illegal advisor came. Soon they started processing about starting a new company in Gaya's name. Nihal advised 'Prem, there is a commercial building coming for sale, adjacent to our building. We can buy that for this business. Gay3 just admired the way Prem carefully proceeding in each and every matter like his father.

Before evening, papers are ready to open an office in Gay3's name. Nihal 'Prem, do you have any name in mind for the new business.' Prem looked at Gaya3. Gaya3 smiled 'Prem's.' Prem got surprised. Others saw mother's love in that. But only Prem and Gaya3 know where is that name came from?'

Next one week, Prem kept all his work aside and helped his mother. New business registered in Gaya3's name. As per Gaya3's request Prem is also the partner in that business. They purchased the adjacent building, which had 2 floors. Works started in ground floor to convert into showroom and 1st floor into office. Tenders called to get various kinds of gift articles.

Prem kept all his other works aside and concentrated on Gaya3's new business. He postponed many meetings. Sanjana felt little confused about his move. She tried to contact Prem many times but he never attended his call. Sometimes he disconnected the line saying he is busy. When he is in office also he refuse to meet him saying his busy with his mother. She thought 'Gaya3 aunti is trying to keep Prem away from me.'

Heer got ready to go to her office. She put his chain around her neck. Inserted some bangles in her hand. She took her purse. Her eyes fell on her finger. She remembered the farewell day. She smiled 'this is the only thing I have in gold.' They sold everything when they needed money but she didn't give this. She whispered 'I have only this as memory.' Pushing the thought away he went to have breakfast.

Teji served breakfast for Heer. Balraj is reading newspaper. His eyes fell on a tender called for called for wood and wax carving articles. He read the terms and conditions. 'Heer, see this.' Heer who got up after finishing the breakfast looked at the paper. 'Bapuji, we cannot manage this much big orders. I don't have any new technique for that. We need to invest more money.' Balraj 'beti, their conditions seems to be reasonable. Once you get this order you can appoint more people.' Heer feared but Balraj encouraged. 'okay bapuji I'll prepare quote for that.'

As soon as she reached her office, she prepared a tender and posted it as it has been given post box number.

After a week, Heer received a call from Mr. Sinha. 'Ms. Mann, we have selected your tender. If you come in person you can sign the contract.' Heer got excited. Her heart felt a jump in when heard the name 'Prem's' she thought 'they must believe in love. But I don't.' After informing this happiness to Balraj, she rushed to the address given by Sinha.

As she walked passed Juneja Empire building, she remembered Prem. 'He must be busy inside.' She unconsciously smiled.
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
me..... i m gettin confused is both of dem in luv????
do update asap...plz selvy..thx for da pm...
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap

Edited by sweta2005 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awe toh ab both r remembering each other..........
wow

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