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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

oohh..the elevator scene..was awesome....😳

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Jyothi N

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

um prem ne heer ko pura office gumaya, very sweet of him. elevater seen was really cute, hamesha prem ki bhahomai aa jathi hai, abi ye hal hai toh aage kya hoha😍😍😍 lalit ko heer pasand nahi aye kya,ab is love story mai use villan mat bana dena. 😡 prem apne cabin mai athe hai strict business man bangaya 😭 ek tharaf se accha he hai,ab aag dono tharaf se se barabar hai toh koyi kya kare😉

with luv

jyothi

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sonia7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

awesome
thanks for the pm
update soon

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Lisa

@Aymee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Naina don't say that this chapter was crappy or boring because it wasn't.

I have some favorite lines that I want to comment.

Prem stepped in only to see that the doors were about to close, but Heer was still about a few steps away.

He hurriedly held out his hand, grasping her wrist and pulled her into the elevator in one swift move.

I love this move from Prem. It was a quick reaction and action he took. I had to reread that line again because for a second there I got lost to what happened. But either way, I love that move.

She came and fell on his chest, and attempted to balance herself. The elevator had closed by then, and it was only the two of them inside. Heer slowly placed her hands on his chest, and looked up to find him staring down at her, an intense look in his eyes.

Holding a girl in his arms never felt more perfect for him, as he held Heer by her waist and pulled her more towards himself. The strands of hair brushing on her face were teasing. Oh how he wanted to just push that hair away, away from her eyes. But he didn't. The two just stood there, Heer in Prem's eyes, as they gazed at each other.

Prem and Heer's reaction to Prem's move was very cute and 😳. I really wish Prem moved those strands of hair from Heer's face. I have always find that move from a guy so romantic. And they way these two were gazing at each other was so 😍

"Woh…Woh…Bauji!" Prem smiled nervously, not able to meet his father's questioning gaze.

"Han Prem Beta, Bolo" smirked Lalit, his tone being one of Lets-see-how-you-try-and-get-out-of-this-one.

LOL. Prem's stammering when he saw Babuji was funny but I was really laughing with Babuji's comment. This scene between Prem and Babuji reminds me episode when Heer was Prem's boss for some time and Prem was flirting with his boss and Babuji walks in on them. I loved that scene and that is why I really enjoyed this part.

Thank you for the PM Naina. I look forward to your next update.

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Khadija

@khajju

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

superbb update....elevatoe scene was sooo good...luvd it......thanks for pm...update soon.

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

awesome update!

you really need to stop calling your updates horrible!

continue soon.....thnx for the pm!

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

thanks for the update
waiting for the next part 😃

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Shelly Singh

@punjabi0926

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Hello, really nice story. Please add me to your PM list.

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

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+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Hi Everyone!

I'm so sorry for getting this delayed in updating this story. I have the outline all written out, I just need to actually write the update 😆 But I promise, the next update will come on the 15th, which is Thursday. Sorry once again for being so late!

Lots of Love,
~Naina

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

rr u updatinggggg now waitingggggg

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