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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

Awesome part 👍🏼 ................... last scene was 2 good................ ohhhh their lips met ☺️......................... thanks for pm............ eagerly waitin for nxt part....................



Thank you...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Here's the next chapter...
SHOT-4

Heer got up and walked out while Prem's furrowed wondering what happened. He then, felt his mobile buzzing.

Woh..

Jo labz the bandhe hue

Labhon pe khul gayeee

It was text from Heer.. He felt like jumping in joy but then he noticed the surroundings.

"Can you come out??"

He immediately got up and left from there while Preet and Meher exchanged knowing smiles.

"Heer kya hua??"

He asked getting worried as he saw her in a corner fidgeting with the dupatta.

"woh'woh'mujhe bhook lag rahi hai.."

She said puzzled herself.

"Ok..mein pop-corn laata hoon.."

He walked away.

"OMG how dumb you're' abhi kuch der pehle toh khaaya tha humne' tum samaj kyun nahin sakte Prem'"

Heer thought as she saw his retreating form.

Main'

Use mila to rang se

The mujh mein ghul gaye kuch is kadar

Prem took few steps and realized that they had eaten enough of pop-corn already. She wasn't meaning that.

"Heer tujhe aise hi duffer nahin kehthi hai'.tu hai bada duffer'. Ye idea tera hona chahiye tha'"

He mentally scolded himself. So, he turned back and went back to her.

Mujh mein mai rab hoon kidhar

Main hoon kidhar kya bataoon

Sirf usko hai pata

"Bahar chalein'waise bhi movie itni interesting nahin hai'"

Prem asked her with hope.

"Yeah sure'"

Heer said casually trying not to show her excitement.

They messaged Preet not to worry about them and left from there.

~~~~~~~~~~

Prem was driving the car from the past 15 minutes unknown where they were leading to. He was just enjoying her presence beside him.

"Premmm.."

She shrieked making him to halt the car all of a sudden.

"Kya hua?"

He asked her worried.

Upon seeing his face, she re-called something and her excitement died of.

"Nothing' woh aise hi' Lets' go"

She turned her face.

He was about to start the car when he turned to her side and something caught his attention other than her. Smiling he pulled the car into the parking.

She gave him a surprised look when he parked the car.

"ab mujhe aisa kya dekh rahi ho'. chalo bhi'"

He said holding his laughter.

He led the way while she followed him shockingly.

"Bhaiya do plate..panipoori.."

He ordered the vendor.

Heer stared at him puzzled.

~~~~fb~~~~

Even after he finished college, he used to come to college everyday to drop her and then in the evening from the office to pick her up. He joined the Juneja industries as a trainee. He didn't want to start off with the managing director post. Lalit also, liked the idea as that would give him more insight in the company matters.

One day he got struck with some work so he texted Heer to go by cab.

Heer came out after finishing her classes and checked Prem's message. So, she joined her friends.

Her friends lured her to the pani-poori stall at a distance from college as the weather was cool. She agreed as anyways Prem won't be waiting for her and she had to go on her own.

Soon they reached the place and then she was lost in her own world relishing them and chatting with her friends.

It started raining by the time they finished and so everyone started to disperse. She assured her friends that she'll take a cab and asked them to go.

She stood under the shelter for a while but when she saw some school kids jumping in joy in rain she couldn't hold herself and joined them.

~~~~~~~~~~~

His work finished soon so he thought of picking her up. He wanted to surprise her so didn't inform her. The breeze was cool so he thought of taking his bike out.

He enjoyed every single moment he spent with her while in home. He helped her in her work, took her out often and it was during this period he felt that she was definitely the special one for him'No one else could effect him so much'

Neende Neende rehti hai aaj kal

Bas uske hi khaabon ke libaas mein

Her innocence, her honesty, love towards his family and her pure beauty made him fall head over heels for her but he never admitted it to her. He had a dream to achieve. First he wanted to fulfil all the responsibilities that he was expected to do and then finally admit to her'.

Surrender himself to her completely''..

Jaane kab tham gaye yeh kadam

Ek uske ke hi ghar ke paas mein

Raasta, bhoola mein apna raasta

By the time he reached, he saw the gates closed. It was then in a distance he spotted her by the panipoori stall. He saw her happily relishing them and chatting with her friends. So, he let her have fun and enjoyed it from a distance.

It started to rain, so he turned to start the bike and get to her but in the meanwhile he lost her track. He looked for her here and there and then saw her in the shelter enjoying the rain'

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar vee

She held her hand out in the rain and after sometime, she joined the kids. He knew how much she loved rains, so didn't disturb and let her enjoy while he stood in shade.

Bahara bahara

Ki chain toh hua faraar vee

After few minutes, it struck him that she would get cold instantly every time she gets drenched.He went to her and dragged her into shelter.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

"Prem tum kab aagaye'dekho it's raining' chalo na.."

Before he could react she pulled him out and made him hold out his hands. He enjoyed the way her eyes twinkled when she was playing with the water droplets. He was lost admiring her. He couldn't hold himself any longer.

He caught hold of her wrist and then inched closer to her. His face was only inches away from her when she sneezed continuously for 4 times getting pale.

Prem was freaked out. He immediately dialed Preet to send the car. As soon as the car arrived, he locked his bike and helped her to get in.

There was a doctor waiting already by the time they reached home. Gayatri went to her friends' place and they were on their own.

Prem was racing up and down in fear while Preet was trying to calm him down. Prem was scolding himself for being so reckless even after knowing that it's not so good for her to be in rain for long time.

The doctor came out and told them not to worry and prescribed some medicines. Preet went to get them while Prem went to Heer.

He saw her sleeping on the bed peacefully. He went and sat by her side for sometime and then went to freshen out.

Prem walked into the kitchen after taking a bath as he was feeling hungry. The sight in front of him angered him.

"Heer'kya kar rahi ho??? Thanda paniii!!!!.. pagaal ho gaayi ho'. yahaan mein aur Preet tumhare liye itne tensed ho rahe hain aur tum aise pretend kar rahi ho ki kuch hua hi nahin'. Rakho usse wahaan'"

He walked in pulling the cold water bottle out of her hands and giving her some normal water.

She drank the water and then immediately she ran to the wash basin and vomited.

Prem went numb. He shouted for Preeet. He came running with a tablet as the doctor already told him that she might need it.

Heer sat in the sofa with rugs all around her and her face was quite pale. That made Prem's anger worsen'.

"aur khao pani poori aur bheego barish mein' jab pata hai ki tabiyaat kharab ho jayegi'toh pata nahin log aisa kyun karte hain'"

He didn't talk to her the whole evening although he sat by her bedside the whole night afraid that she may need anything.

~~~~~~fb end~~~~~~~~~~

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar vee

Heer looked at Prem lovingly as she recalled how Prem cared for her that night. Although he pretended to be tough from outside, that day she witnessed the caring side of him and also his unspoken love for her.

She knew him inside out. So there's no denial to the fact that he loves her but also knew what was holding him back. She decided to wait and now that he has made everyone proud it's high time, he thinks about himself, her and them'..

Both of them were so lost in the thoughts about each other that they failed to hear the cry of vendor who was trying to bring them out of trance since past half an hour.

Bahara bahara

Ki chain to hua faraar vee

Finally they were out of the dreamland due to loud honking of the cars near-by due to traffic. The vendor thanked God and gave them the plates.

"woh..I don't eat them anymore'."

Heer said hesitating a bit.

"Heer'. are you serious???"

He asked her shockingly.

"woh'"

He didn't let her continue.

"Heer I'm really sorry for that day' mom aur dad bhi ghar par nahi the' isiliye mein thoda darr gaya ki agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh' you know I can't see you in pain.."

He told her his eyes conveying the feelings in his heart to hers silently.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

She blushed and got back to devour her favorite pani-poori which she gave up for Prem all these days. Prem too ate with her enjoying her expressions and the way she ate'

After they finished it Prem paid and they started to walk beside each other unknown to where they were going. There were just enjoying the presence of each other.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Then they saw an amusement park there and both of them looked at each other with hope. Smiling they shook their heads and walked in.

"So Heer which one do you want to get into first??"

He asked her raising his eyebrow.

"Anything would do'."

She replied casually.

"Sure' na'"

He asked her with a hint of mischief in his voice.

"Yeah.."

Heer nodded her head but then she understood the mischief in his voice.

"Nooo'premm'.no I'm telling you'no'.."

Heer shouted when he pulled her towards the Ferris-wheel.

"Heerrr' tumne khud kahana meri marzi'now you can't back off"

He said teasing her.

"This is not fair Premm'."

She said crossing her arms as they got seated in one of the boxes beside each other.

"Everything is fair in'."



how was it?? 😕
Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

HEY!!!!

Ms.Kavya...lovely update yar..loved the FB..it was awesome..PHantastic!!!
Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

Edited by sweta2005 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
love and war..😉
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
its really lovely update
Loved every bit of it😊
Pani puri is my fav too
How caring prem is...........😳
Thanks for pm
Edited by premheer19 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww that was such a sweet update
so sweet of Prem and dumb also
hope to see next part soon
Ashlesha
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome awesome awesome part! looking forward to reading more :)

~Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
everythings fair in love n war!!!
but its not fair tht u u wrote such a small update
but still it was cute
hope they confess atleast in the nxt update

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