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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina2127

aww awesome awesome starts :) can't wait for more premeer :)

~Naina



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia7

awesome
thanks for the pm



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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
Great updt
thankz for pm



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meetun66

hey nice

bechara prem
so sweet
dairy milk and card
do continue soon



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NIMMY

whats next

prems so intelligent.........are he putted a microphone in heers teddy.......awe............genious



next part soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Additi...

Lovely SS Nanad ji........

But no Premeer ..Not Phair.......Update soo..is s pehle ki mai phirse Hibernation Mode mai chali jawoo.....
Luv you/...



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashlesha09

hiya kavya

Beautiful part dear
seriously throughly enjoyable
love their childhood and then microphone part was just too much
And don't you think it was very very short one
Better you update soon and that part be long enough *Narrowing eyesbrows*
Ashlesha



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Glad you enjoyed it....
next one will be longggg and will be soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Additi...

Oo rabbaaaaaaaa

you updtaed the secnd part as well.................Itna PHast agar prem ki car chalti tu ab tu ab tak premeer mil bhii gaye hoti......
be a good gal..and update soon



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hii every1
here's the next part

SHOT-3


Heer then saw the time and it was 5:00 p.m. She has to get ready quickly and today she has to take extra care of her appearance.

She went to her cupboard and picked up a light pink chudidaar as someone special once told her that she looked cute in pink. She smiled to herself and went to get ready.

She came down with a wide smile on her face. Gayatri put a kala teeka on her. They heard a car sound and so she grabbed the aarti ki thali from Daljeet's hands to welcome her jijju..

She stood rooted to the ground as she reached the door; there he stood dashing as ever in his black suit. His lips automatically curved to smile as he saw her in front of him.

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The driver got the mechanic and car got repaired in no time. Prem took the driver seat and raced the car towards the destination and in less than half an hour he got there.

(M)

Jaane kab tham gaye yeh kadam

Ek uske ke hi ghar ke paas mein

He was restless still he reached there but now he was feeling little weird to walk in, to face her. What would he say to her??? Would he be able to confess to her this time?? A lot of questions were getting raised in his brain.

Raasta, bhoola mein apna raasta

All of them washed away the moment he saw her'He recalled how once he told her she looked cute in pink and here she was ready to kill him with her beauty'.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar vee

At that moment, it seemed like only both of them existed there and rest got faded away. They were trying to sink in the fact that they finally got to see each other'.

Bahara bahara

Ki chain toh hua faraar vee

Months of separation seemed like ages to them'. Their eyes were lost in their silent communication unknown even to them'.

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

While both of them were lost in each other the family stood there super pleased with the silent communication going on between the two of them' They were eagerly waiting to see this since morning'..

Teji made the first move even though she didn't want others to make notice of that'

"Premm'.."

She called him lovingly holding out her arms for him'

"aunty'"

Prem held her in a bear hug. He was more of a son for her and she loved him a lot.

"beta'teri maa bhi hai yahaan'"

Gayatri faked anger.

"Lekin mere liye'pehle aunty'"

He said smiling'

Gayatri turned away when he hugged her from back.

"aapko toh bas ek din miss kiya lekin aunty se toh mein ek saal baad mil raha hoon'"

Prem said smiling.

"Teek hai..teek hai'waise bhi meri beti hai mere pass'tu jaa apni aunty ke pass'"

Gayatri said walking to Heer..

Lalit and Balraj joined them. He hugged them both and gave them the good news. They congratulated him and praised him a lot.

He was then sent to guest room to get ready as all the youngsters were going out.

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Prem was driving the car and eying Heer through the mirror in the front. How badly he wanted to make her sit beside him but luck didn't favor him.

Some guests turned up in the end moment and they had to invite them too. All of them decided to go to a movie. He hoped at least there she gets a seat beside him.

They walked into the theatre and since there were 10 of them, they got the whole row for themselves. Heer was in the front so she took up the first seat with Meher beside her.

Prem went inside crossing their chairs asking them to move as it'll be easy for people at the end to come in'so they moved' Prem sighed but his happiness lasted for a moment as Heer settled somewhere in the middle.

Prem cursed his fate. Everyone was settled by now. With two of Ash's cousins' on his right and Preet, Meher, Heer etc on left. He tilted his head a little and saw Heer was beside an unknown guy, one of Manmeet's friends.

He knew she was feeling uncomfortable so he just signaled her to move but she assured him that it was ok. But after a minute it struck her may be Prem wants her to sit by his side.

So she just asked Preet to swap but due to their ill fate. Meher moved in Preet's place offering her place to Heer. Prem felt like banging his head to the wall while Heer cursed Meher.

The movie started and Preet n Meher were passing comments and laughing ignoring Heer who was between them. Fed up of them, Heer asked Meher to swap so that it'll be easy for them to talk.

Preet signaled her to move. Both of them decided to tease their siblings a bit as it's very rare that they get such wonderful occasions.

Finally Heer was beside him. Prem couldn't help but pass a sigh of relief while Heer looked on wondering what's wrong.

Both of them couldn't really concentrate on the movie, they kept stealing secret glances of each other. They were passed a pop-corn packet to share and both of them had enjoyed silently brushing hands against each other, eyeing each other occasionally. They sat for an hour but couldn't really watch the movie.

Heer took out her mobile and started to text while Prem kept wondering whom she was texting to'

He was little bit possessive when it comes to her and he did prove that a lot of times when they were in college.

~~~~~~fb~~~~~

Hoo tora saajan

Aayo tore desh

Prem's parents moved to Delhi after his school while Heer's family remained in Ambala. Heer missed Prem most during those days. Although they visited them twice in a month, still Heer missed those meetings during the lunch break, cycle-riding with him till her place etc


Fortunately, Heer got seat in Delhi University and years later she came to know that it was the plot of both their parents but didn't mind as she liked it as Prem went to same college.

Badli badra badla saavan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Prem's joy knew no bounds when he heard that Heer would join them as she got admitted in the same university as his. That meant he could re-live all those old moments like they spent in school with her.

Tora saajan

Aayo tore desh

Heer used to go to college with him on his bike and both of them secretly enjoyed the rides a lot.. Since, she used to come with Prem no one ever ragged her except for a small session by Prem and his gang that too just a sort of interaction.

Prem never happened to be friends with girls except for Heer, she was the one and only one'.

Girls be it juniors or seniors envy her as she used to come with Prem and also happened to be his best friend. Although they didn't do anything like a couple it was taken for granted that they were one.

Once Prem saw her with a guy who happened to be her classmate. They were chatting while walking and he seemed to crack some jokes which made Heer laugh. Prem boiled in anger to see Heer laughing like that'.

Heer walked into the library bidding the boy good-bye while the guy was coming back smiling.

As he was passing by them his best friend Karan, stopped him.

"Oyi'seniors ko dekhe bhi kahaan jaa raha hai'idhar aa'"

He called him showing his seniority.

"abbey aise kade hoke kya dekh raha hai'wish kar.."

He shouted.

"Good evening Sir'Good evening Sir'"

He wished both of them.

"Good'ab ye bata tu college kisliye aata hai'"

Karan asked him angrily.

"Sir..college toh padne ke liye.."

He said meekily.

"Jab ye baat pata hai'toh tu kar kya raha hai'."

Prem asked angrily as if ready to beat him up any second.

"Meine kya kiya sir???"

He put up an innocent face.

"Abhi tak kuch nahi kiya'isiliye toh zinda bach gaya'.ab aage bhi kuch mat kar'samjha'"

Karan warned him knowing Prem's jealousy being his childhood friend.

"ab yahaan kadha kadha hume kya dekh raha hai'jaa..'

Prem shooed him off.

He walked away confused not knowing why he was scolded. Later in the evening, he saw Heer walking along with Prem and getting on his bike.

Now he understood what the matter was' He ran over to them. Prem was about to start his bike when he appeared in front of them.

"Good evening sir, woh mujhe Heer se baat karni thi'"

He said.

Prem looked at him horror. How dare he come to him and ask directly that he wanted to talk to Heer. He looked at him as if he'll rip him off any moment.

"Hii Sid' kya hua?? Kya baat karni hai??"

Heer asked getting off the bike.

"I just wanted to ask you something Heer.."

He said mustering courage as he could feel daggers being shot by Prem's eyes.

"Can I call you sister?? Woh..kya haina you resemble my sister a lot jo yahaan nahin rehti hai'so I was just missing her.."

He asked and felt relieved as he noticed Prem cooling down a bit.

Heer was surprised at the sudden request. She glanced at Prem who pretended to do something in his mobile.

"Yeah'sure'"

Heer told not so convinced. She felt something was wrong terribly as she looked at Prem'

"Ok sid' that's really great that you found a sister' now if you would excuse us' it's getting late'."

Prem said as fast as possible.

The ride to the home was silent. Prem felt that Heer was trying to read his thoughts so he tried to remain as normal as possible.

They reached home and Prem retired to his room asap. He got freshened up and came downstairs. He saw Preet and Heer watching T.V. and joined them.

He took the place beside Heer on couch. Heer passed a glaring look at him and then resumed back watching T.V.

"Wow'PB seems like you messed something again'"

Preet questioned noticing the exchange.

"Shut up Preet'"

Prem gave an irritating look to Preet.

"Preet' leave him alone' chalo hum jaake shopping karke aate hain'"

Heer said getting up.

"Shopping great Heer di'.lets' go.."

Preet said getting excited.

Preet and Heer left to get ready while Prem gave a disappointing look. Just then the landline started to ring.

"Premmm"

He heard a familiar voice.

"I'll kill you'. Mein ne tumse kahaa na documents mail karo 10 min mein'I was waiting'"

He heard her shouting.

"Lekin sanju' tumne mujhse kab kahaa'"

He asked her frowning.

"Stop playing pranks'.ek kaam bataya tha woh bhi nahin kar sakte'"

She yelled.

"Lekin aaj toh mein ne tumse baat hi nahin ki'phir tumne mujhse kab kaha.."

He pleaded with her,

"You stupid' idiot' kuch der pehle toh meine call kiya ghar pe as you're cell was switched off' heer ne lift kiya tha'then you talked.. ab agar 5 min mein mail nahi kiya na you're dead'kal humare submission ka last date hai' I was a big idiot to choose you and Karan'"

She yelled at him as if he were in front of her she'd have killed him.

Prem now understood the scene.

"Sanju you'll get the doc in 5 min don't worry."

He went to his room and first mailed the documents and then he came downstairs.

"Heeeer' Preeeeeeet"

He shouted at the top of his voice. Gayatri came out panicking.

"Kya hua premmm'.aise chilla kyun rahe ho'"

She asked worried.

"Mom'ye dono shaitaan kahaan hai.."

He asked her angrily.

"Shaitaan.??? Kon preet aur heer??"

She asked confused.

"Haan'"

He said impatiently.

"Preet ka toh mujhe pata hai par Heer'usne kya kardiya???"

She questioned him.

"Heer'preet kuch nahi karta' heer usse karwati hai'"

He said annoyingly.

"Aaj toh mein Heer ko nahin chodoonga'"

He left from there.

After an hour, he saw Preet and Heer walking in with bags laughing. Their laugh came to an end as soon as they saw an angry Prem ready to pounce on them.

"Bhaiya' I just did jo Heer di ne mujhse kahaa'"

Preet looked feared seeing Prem's anger.

"Preet'don worry mujhe pata hai'. heer ne hi kaha hoga tumse meri imitation karne ka'"

He said looking at Heer with anger.

"Haan kahaa'. Toh'."

She said daringly although she was scared to face his wrath.

"Tumhe pata hai sanju kitni badi bookworm hai aur project ka itna important documentation' how could you play a prank like that'"

He questioned her.

"Acha'then how dare you scare my friend???"

She cross questioned him.

"Meine'meine kya kiya??"

He said feigning innocence.

"Don't act too smart ok' mujhe sab pata hai.."

She said angrily.

"Kal tak jo mujhse friend ki tarah baat karta tha'aaj achanak aake mujhe behen kehta hai'' Do you think I'm such a fool that I couldn't make out??"

Heer asked him crossing her arms.

He looked in either directions and then ran away upstairs soon joined by Heer.

"Prem..prem'.rukho'. I'm not going to leave you'"

Gayatri came there and noticed them.

"Ye kya hogaya?? Gussa toh prem heer se tha..ye reverse kaise ho gaaya??"

He asked Preet confused.

"Mom' its PB n Heer di'.kuch bhi ho sakta hai'."

Both went their ways laughing.

Heer chased Prem in his room and then finally she caught him but he lost his balance and both of them dropped on his bed.

Prem on the bed and Heer on the top of him, heer tried to get up but couldn't due to interlocking of their chains and she fell on him again, this time her lips touching his.

Prem went numb for a second and then noticing her expressions pretended as if nothing happened.

"Heer'rukho..i'll remove this"

He separated their chains and Heer ran away from there blushing while Prem closed his eyes smiling.

~~~~~~~~~~~fb end~~~~~~~~~

hoping it was ok 😕
waiting for your comments

Precap:

More n more of premeer 😆
Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

HEY KAVYA🤗

awesome update yar..ohh PREMEER scene😍ohhhhh☺️...lovely!!!!!
haha he got jealoused...just imagining the whole update...and that PREMEER scene..☺️
PHabolous...PHantastic!!!
Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 15 years ago

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