FF - Game of FATE ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
now i m sure that sneha and chahat are twin sisters and that sneha iz heer's daughter but why prem iz denying???
plz reveal the truth soon!
waiting 4 prem and heer 2 meet each other!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
chahat and sneha asked the same teddy and their fav is rasagulla u showed nice similarity selvi
i am waiting how u are going to show they both are premeer daughters
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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 1&2
Hey dear, awesome update!!!! please pm me....
Edited by blueocean_787 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahhaha... I am soo happy heheh
tht Snajan gone far away
aww...sneha chah are like twins ehehhe
thnks for the pm
Awesome update!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part.
sneha & chahat born on same day.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 3

In Heer house, Preet scanned the room and found Heer's handwork and few dresses hanging on the wall. He got a call from Prem. 'Megher, Prem is calling me. I'll be back.' Megher 'come before lunch.' Preet 'ha sure. I won't miss didi's food.' He ran out to meet Prem.

Preet entered Prem house. Sneha and Prem are playing with new teddy bear. When Prem saw Preet 'Sneha beta you play. Papa has work. ' Sneha shook her head and started playing with her dolls.

Prem happily shook hand with Preet 'Preet, I got the insurance money.' Preet is also happy and gave a brotherly hug. Gaya3 came with rasagulla. Preet 'no aunti, I had enough.' Gaya3 'why?'

Preet 'today Megher's niece birthday. Her favorite is also Rasagulla. Her mother made this and we all had enough. I don't have space for this. I have to keep my stomach empty because I love Megher sister's cooking.' Gaya3 with a wide open mouth listened Preet's lengthy story about Megher's sister. 'I think she must be a great person.'

Preet 'ha she is really great. She single handedly earned money to make Megher as lawyer.' Prem too got surprised. Gaya3 'I have to meet her.' Preet 'ha sure.' He sat down with Prem. 'Prem, what have you planned?'

Prem 'I have to start the business again. One of my old customer promised me to give one small order.' Preet 'where are you going to start your business?'

Prem 'in my father's childhood house. It has few rooms that I'll convert into office and factory. I have to buy few machines.'

Preet 'anyway you have to appoint staff to finish the orders right?' Prem 'yes.'

Preet 'Prem, Megher's sister Heer, expert in stitching dresses. If you want I'll bring her to you. She is a hard working person. You give orders to her.' Prem understood Preet's point 'but Preet I cannot give her any amount in the beginning.'

Preet 'you appoint her now. You give one room to Heer so that she don't have to pay rent for her house. Initially you give her small amount for her food. You pay her amount when you get your money from the clients'

Prem 'if I give her room inside the factory then others also expect the same.' Preet 'now you don't appoint anyone. She is capable of doing smaller quantity orders.'

Prem 'is she single?' Preet 'she has two year old daughter. Her husband died few days after her marriage in an accident. So she is alone with her daughter.'

Prem thought for a while 'will she agree for this terms.' Preet 'sure. I'm guarantee for that. '

Prem agreed because he needs a reliable person to finish the order which is more important now.

Preet went to talk about this Heer, while Prem thought Preet view is also correct. Now he can't appoint . staff. Gaya3 touched his shoulder 'we know Megher. She is nie person. So her sister will also be like her only.' Prem too felt the same. Preet is the one always who stood with him in the time of trouble. Megher too showed her concern for him.

Heer and Megher are waiting for Preet to come. They were talking about some random things about Chahat. Chahat busy inspecting her new teddy.

Preet came in. he picked up Chahat in his hand 'didi, are you ready to work for big orders?' Heer 'I don't have enough items for that Preet. I need a good machine. With this old one I cannot deliver it in on time.'

Preet 'that I'll take care. Just say about your opinion.' Megher 'ha di, how long you will do one or two dresses. You have talent why can't you use that?'

Heer thought for a while 'but how?' Preet 'my friend had a garment company. He lost everything when his goodown gor fire. Now he got his insurance amount. With that he want to start that business again in small level. I told about you. He is ready to appoint you as his staff. Currently you have to finish the order. No other staff recruited. He provides a place to stay. He will pay you when you finish the order.'

Heer 'but Preet.' Preet told about Prem past 'now he needs some one who can help him genuinely.' Megher 'di, accept it. I know him. He is a very nice person. He helped us many times.' Heer thought for a while but Preet and Megher's words gave her confidence. Preet always take care of her like her younger brother. Heer agreed.

Preet 'I'll take you to him t'row morning.' Heer, Megher, Preet and Chahat had lunch together.

Morning, Prem went to his father's house. He opened the house. It is always kept clean because his father spends his times here whenever he felt sad. After his death Prem use to come here. Balraj who is Lalit's friend always kept this house clean.

Balraj came running to Prem 'Beta' he tried hard to control his tears. He came to know about Prem's life. 'Chacha, I forgot everything and going to start a new life here. 'I'm planning to start the business again in this house.'

Balraj 'you will succeed beta. This house has your grandparents and father's blessings.' Prem took that as blessing. He bent down and touched the entrance and stepped in with confidence.

Balraj 'I have work. I'll meet you later.' Prem 'Chachu, one girl will stay here from tonight. She is going to take care of my business. You help her when she needed anything.'

Balraj okay. I'll also tell Teji to help her.' He went giving blessing to Prem.

Prem moved some of required items to this house before selling the previous factory. He walked to one room. There he planned to make as his office room. He pulled one table and chair and started setting the office. He stood infront of the big picture of his father Mr. Lali Juneja.

He remembered his days with his father. The day he entered the business. His advice. 'Prem, don't get disappointed when you fall in the way to success. When you goal is clear, through sincerity and hard work you can achieve it easily. Hurdles are always comes on the way to prepare you for better future.'

A tear drop fell from his eyes. 'ha dad. I'll win this race.' He saw a elegant image of a girl in the mirror. He wiped his tears and turned when he heard Preet's voice.

Heer looked up to see the person who is giving new beginning for her career. Prem turned to see the person willing to help him to succeed. His eyes wide open stared at her face. Heer too stared at him. both were surprised.

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Gr8 update........
I luv preet for making premeer work together 🤗........
So now prem will see chahat...........
Chahat is only 2 yrs old........
Cant wait to know wat hapens next........
Pls do cont asap nd thanx 4 the pm......
Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

Edited by sweta2005 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part....
ooohh........god premeer came infront of each other cant wait now....

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