Jaane Do Naa
Hi guys I am back with another piece of work. This time with Premeer OS. This OS is on the song of "Jaane Do Naa", a song from an old film "Sagar". I was listening to this song when I got this idea and decided to write on it and share with everyone. This OS is dedicated to my brother Waqas. Hope he and you all like this work of mine.
Enjoy!
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Everywhere it was dark, Prem couldn't see anything. Then at far-off he could see a flame burning. Thinking that by going towards it, he can find his way of this dark place, he made his way towards it. The more that little flame became bigger, more was Prem's anxiety increased. He felt that something was wrong, that something wasn't in its place. Soon he came near that flame and it turned out that it was somebody's pyre was burning. There were many people standing around it, standing in white clothes and crying.
May be somebody died. Is it right time to ask them how I can reach home?, thought Prem as he moved closer. But now when he can see people's faces, he was shocked to see that he can recognize them. There was Preet who was holding Meher tight in his arms while they both were crying. There were his parents too along with Heer's. Nihal held a newspaper in his hand tightly with shocked expression on his face. Whats wrong? What are they doing here? And why are they crying? Whats happening? Who died? And if everybody is here then where's Heer?, thought Prem
Gayatri saw him and came towards him. She hugged him and started crying again. "We are sorry Prem. Kuch nahi ho paya. How can she leave us? How can she leave you? Please son do control yourself", said Gayatri
"Ma. What is happening here? Who died?", said Prem being confused.
When nobody answered him, then he asked again "Would somebody tell me why you all are crying? And if we all are here then where is Heer?"
This time Nihal came towards him and handed him the newspaper. There was the news of a woman dying in a car accident on the way to airport. He looked confusedly at Nihaal thinking what this news has to do with him. He just wanted to know where Heer was. Why cant they tell me?, thought Prem
As though reading his mind Nihal pointed towards the pyre and said "Heer."
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Prem jerked up from his nightmare the moment he realized who pyre it was? Prem felt that the small pricks of pain were slowly spreading throughout his body, starting from his heart and finding its way all over the body. When he woke up, fear was clearly written on his face'.fear of losing someone one loves the most. He rubbed his forehead and found that he was sweating heavily even though the room was fully air-conditioned.
What a terrible dream! Thank God it was just a dream not a reality, thought Prem and took deep breadth to relax himself. Then he felt that he was missing something, he looked around and surely his wife was missing. Panic struck him. What if'.no Prem don't think about that, thought Prem, while getting up from the bed and rushing out of his bedroom, shouting "Heer! Heer". He started looking furiously everywhere for her. With each passing moment the burden on his heart was increasing. I have to find her, where is she? Where has she gone?, thought Prem.
"Heer!", said Prem while moving towards the garden and after entering in it he saw his wife turning around and giving him a nod while pointing towards her phone indicating that she was talking to somebody. Relief engulfed his whole body by seeing her sweet face, seeing her alive in front of her. But this feeling wasnt meant to last longer, because anxiousness took over him the moment he heard her saying "ya Mr. Chopra the flight is on the time. Everything is confirmed and I will be in London tomorrow by 8."
He felt his heart had been squeezed tightly and then stabbed with knife several times with no mercy. He didn't wait any longer and ran towards her. Every movement he made hurt him as his heart was aching for her. As every second tickled by, he felt new and more strong pain in his heart and body. He had to stop her, he had to confirm himself that she is there with him, that she will not ever leave him. Confusion passed her face and she immediately her cancelled her call and was about to speak to him but Prem engulfed her in his arms.
"Prem what is wrong?", asked Heer. He didn't say anything in reply, just hugged her tightly. He first wanted to assure himself of her warmth, her being close to him. She rubbed his back to placate him and asked him again "Prem is everything alright?"
"You are not going anywhere. You will not board that flight tonight", said Prem clearly. There was no doubt in his mind that he will not let her go away from him. He just have to make her agree.
"What!", said Heer confusedly. Prem had never stopped her from taking any decision in her career then went wrong now. He knew how much important it was for her to go and attend the meeting of the delegates in London and still he is stopping her. why?, thought Heer.
"Prem what is happening here. You know how important this meeting is for my company. Then why are you stopping me from going?", said Heer with shock clear on her face.
Prem sighed and moved a bit apart from her to see her face and still held in her arms, fearing that if he left her, something terribly would go wrong. How did he forget convincing her will be the hardest part? "isn't it enough that I am asking you to stay?", said Prem dejectedly.
"No it is not. Prem please be reasonable. You know how much have waited for this opportunity. I can't let it go until I know a valid reason", said Heer
"I saw a nightmare. I saw you met an accident while over to airport and your pyre burning", said Prem while unconsciously tightening his grip on her more.
For a minute Heer couldn't say anything. But then she regained her composure and said "Prem it was a just dream and you know how much hard work I have put in this project. I have to go. Please understand. I will be careful. I promise. Please let me go". She then hugged him tight to make him relax and give in to her wishes.
When they parted, she smiled towards him and said "I have already packed my suitcase. I am going to take shower now. My flight is in two hours", said Heer but when she saw he still wasn't convinced, then said again while caressing his cheek "Prem I will be fine. Don't worry. Forget about the dream. I just have to go for two days. After I come back I promise I would take a week off and we both will just spend time with each other. Please cheer up for me."
Prem nodded and saw his love, his life moving away from him towards their bedroom. No matter what he thought, he could not ease the tension in his heart. Should he take the risk and let her go? But this risk is so big. What if he lost her? No I can't. I won't let her go. Why can't she listen to me for once? There is no way I am letting her go. I have to stop her. But how is the question?, thought Prem while running hand in his hair.
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So how was it???? ok this was just the first part. Next part will be posted in 2 or 3 days as I still haven't finished it yet. Just today I had this idea while I was listening to this song, so I thought about penning it down and share it with everyone here. Don't be disheartened because I have not posted full part yet, anyone who wanted to know what is in store in it, then here is the precap of it:
Precap:
Heer came out of the bathroom drying her hair. She was wearing the red saree. In saree she always felt comfortable so she decided to wear this. Water was not only dripping down her hair, but hugging her body every place her saree wasn't drapped around her. When prem saw her like this, he was hit by uncontrollable surge of need....need to touch her, need to kiss her, need to hold her, need to take her in his arms, need to make her his all over again. -----------------
Prem held Heer wrist stopping her to move further back. The moment they touched each other, she felt as though time freeze between them. That touch was burning her skin and making her feel unknown desires. His eyes were full of fire, love, lust and need.....a deadly mixture.
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Hoping I have not lost my touch yet and hence you all liked it. Waiting eagerly for the reviews. Please press like button
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Sia
Edited by luv_kdmhmd - 15 years ago
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