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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely update👏👏👏
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hey great update... I am starting to see where the story line is going but great twist...poor heer every1 being rude to her.... she doesnt realize does she that she loves Prem...
Pls update soon
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Part - 4

Next morning, Heer is sitting with others in the dinning table. Prem sat next to her. 'Good morning.'

Heer responded with a smile. Prem 'Heer, pass me that dish.'

Heer 'you have hands right. Take it.'

This was their usual fight so except Gaya3 no one gave attention to that. Prem kicked her leg below the table. Heer stamped her feet on his. He hit his shoulder and signed to take the dish. She protested with an angry face.

Gaya3 in little hard voice 'Premm, Heeer, What are you both doing? Prem get up and sit here.'

Everyone shocked to hear this. Because this scene they are seeing for many years. Prem got up and went to other side showing his tongue out to her. Heer showed her tongue to him but put down her face to avoid her sadness from others.

Gaya3 'Prem, your marriage got fixed up. Playing like a kid is not a good thing. You should learn to behave as man.' Prem nodded like an obedient child.

Lalit 'Gaya3, they are doing it from their childhood.'

Gaya3 'they have to change. Soon Heer will also have to marry someone. This should not spoil their future t'row.'

Teji 'what Gaya3 saying is correct. Still they are behaving like kids. They have to change their attitutes towards each other.'

Elders accepted their point. Heer ate silently and went to her room. Prem went to office.

Heer is in her room, flipping through the pages in a book but her mind going back to dining table incident. Teji interrupted her thought 'Heer'

Heer quickly managed herself 'ha Ma.' Teji noticed her sadness 'Heer beta. Don't take aunty's words wrongly. You both grew up in a same house but now you both are ready to get marry. His marriage got fixed up with Sanjana and soon you will also get a partner. They may take it wrongly. That will spoil both of your marriage life.'

Heer nodded 'I understood. I will behave decently with Prem.' Teji touched her head and went out.

Heer spent the entire day concentrating about her further studies. She decided to apply for more colleges in abroad instead of staying here. She decided to move away from Prem. She was busy browsing when Prem came in. he sat next to her. 'Heer, did you applied to this.' He handed over the form. She picked up the form from his hand and saw it is college which is nearer to their house.

Heer quickly 'No Prem, I'm going to UK for my MBA.'

Prem shocked 'why? Here you have many colleges.'

Heer 'my friend Veera is going there so I'm.'

Prem pulled her closer 'Heer, you cannot manage alone there.'

Heer released herself from his hand 'I have to learn to do on my own.'

Prem 'but I cannot manage without you.'

Heer pat his cheek 'here you have Aunti, Ma and SANJANA.' She got up and left the room without listening further from Prem.

Prem is confused about her move. 'Earlier she is not interested in going to London. Now suddenly she has decided to go there. Why she is avoiding me?'

Lalit and Balraj decided to send Prem to San Francisco for their new venture. Prem is not happy about the decision. 'Dad, why should I go there?'

Lalit 'you have to learn business. Its just for two week. '

Prem protested 'Dad, I cannot manage alone.'

Gaya3 came in 'you have to learn to manage yourself and business. So you are going there. No more discussion about this. Pack your things.'

Lalit gave him the ticket 'today night flight.'

Prem had no other option. He is sad and left the room and went to his room. He fell flat on the bed.

Heer is sitting on the window with a book in her hand. Gaya3 came in 'Heer'

Heer turned and looked at Gaya3 who is standing near the door. 'Heer, Prem is going to San Francisco tonight. Help him to pack his things.' Heer nodded. Gaya3 left the room.
Heer stood there for a while. then she went to Prem's room.

Lalit and Balraj are playing chess. Preet went to them with anger 'Dad, what have you done? How can you fix PB's marriage with Sanjana. do you think PB can live happily without Heer di?'

Lalit 'What can I do? it is your mother choice. I thought Prem will disagree if he loves Heer. But to our disappointment he agreed.'

Preet 'Don't you know that he won't refuse your words. Then how can you ask like that in front of everyone?'

Balraj 'Preet beta. Prem and Heer are just friends. If they love each other they should have told us. They always fight for every little thing then how they can live happily together?'

Preet 'no. you misunderstood their fight.'

Lalit 'Preet, we have planned to send Prem to San Francisco. Separation may bring change in them.' he moved closer to Preet 'if they really love each other. Let see how they decide their future.'

He lowered his voice 'Only two weeks. if they didn't change in that then they are surely not in love.'

Balraj in a clear voice 'then our decision is final. They have to marry the person of our choice.'

Lalit 'Prem already agreed. Heer will also do the same.'

Balraj 'no one can change our decision after that.'

Preet is confident that they will realise their love for each other in this two weeks. He ran to inform about this to Megher.

Prem is lying on the bed, when Heer came in. 'Prem' she sat on the bed. Prem didn't response. Heer got up and picked up his suitcase and started packing his things. Heer packed without saying anything. He just stared at her as she is busily doing her work. He missed her teasing and fighting which she always does with him. Prem got up from the bed and went to her.

Heer finished packing his things 'Prem, its over. Your shirts are.' Prem pulled her closer 'I'll miss you.' Heer hugged him 'me too.'

Prem and Heer sat on the couch. 'Heer, you have to call me daily.'

Heer 'no. I' won't. you have to concentrate on your work. I don't want to disturb you.' Prem sad and like a crying baby 'Heer this is not fair.'

Heer pulled his cheeks 'Prem, I too have to prepare for MBA. Most properly I will have to go to London for my further studies.'

Prem 'Please Heer. Why you want to go to London? You study here in Canada. I'll be back after two weeks.'

Heer 'no. I already got green signal from Dad and Uncle.' Prem with a sad face 'i can't fight with you?'

Heer pulled his nose 'you can fight with Sanjana.'

Prem in a teasing smile 'I won't get sleep without fighting with you.' Heer hit his chest playfully 'don't sleep. That's fine. You will get more time to work.' She got up to leave.

Prem stopped her 'where are you going now?'

Heer 'I'm going to Veera's house. I need to prepare and .'

Prem interrupted 'you never went to her house before for studies.'

Heer with a sad face 'you always helped me. Now I have to learn to do on my own.'

Prem with questioning face 'are you not coming to the airport?' She pulled his cheeks and signed 'no'.

Prem sad but let her go so that she can go ahead in her studies. He wanted to see her as a successful woman. Both hugged and waved good bye with tears. This is the first time they are going to stay away from each other.

Prem looked at his bedside. He took the photo frame in his hand. It was taken at their last year birthday party. His thoughts ran back.

~~~~Flash back

Preet and Megher changed all the clock time in the mansion 30 minutes late. They wanted to wish Prem and Heer before they wish each other. all these years Preet and Megher are trying to wish them first. But it never happened. They tried all the tricks but never worked out. Prem and Heer wish each before others.

As soon as the clock struck 12 in the midnight, they hug and wish 'happy birthday' with a kiss.

This year also Preet and Megher are staring at their mobile. They are waiting for the screen to show '00'. Finally it showed up they ran to Prem and Heer. They stood with a lost face.

Prem and Heer are already hugging each other and wishing and kissing. They laughed when they saw Preet and Megher's sad face.

Preet and Megher wished them. Preet 'PB, how it is possible? We changed your mobile time also.'

Prem wrapping his hand around Heer shoulder 'I changed your mobile time.'

Heer leaned on to Prem's shoulder 'I changed Megher's.'

Prem showed a small watch 'we had this inside our closet.' Both laughed holding each others hands. Soon elders joined them and wished them.

In the evening, small family was arranged. Prem and Heer doesn't like party so only family members were presented in the party. Heer looked gorgeous in her blue salwar, which was presented by her parents. Prem and Heer cut the cake together. They fed others.
Finally, Prem is holding one piece in his hand and Heer holding another piece in her hand. they stared at each other. Then they dumped cake piece into each other mouth.

Preet took picture. 'PB di one picture.' Prem and Heer stood next to each other. Preet with a unsatisfied face about to click.

Gaya3 'Preet stop.' She looked at Prem and Heer 'you are not enemies right?'

Prem and Heer looked at each other with confusion. Gaya3 'then stand holding hands'. Prem and Heer smiled and moved closer. Prem wrapped his hand around her shoulder. she leaned on to his chest and kept her palm on his chest wrapping her other to his back. He kept his palm on her hand which is on his chest.

Gay3 'Preet click. This is nice.' Teji and Gaya3 hugged 'see how cute our kids.'

~~~End

Prem smiled. 'staying away from you for twwoooo weeks .' he took a long breath 'its really difficult'. He place it inside his luggage. He closed the suitcase and went to take a shower.

Lalit and Balraj are waiting for Prem to come down. After taking blessing from Gaya3 and Teji, Prem took blessing from Lalit and Balraj. Prem hugged Megher. Preet took him to the airport. Prem searched for Heer. Teji 'she is gone to her friend house.' Prem smiled.

In the car, Prem continuously trying to reach Heer, but her mobile is switched off. Preet broke Prem's struggle 'PB, are you happy about your marriage with Sanjana?'

Prem 'yes. why?'

Preet 'you cannot live without seeing Heer di. Just for few minutes you are getting nervous. you are in love with Heer di.'

Prem shocked 'no.'

Preet 'you didn't try to call Sanjana, you remember only Heer di.'

Prem 'I never stayed away from Heer for too long. So I'm feeling little bit uncomfortable.'

Preet 'Do you think Sanjana will allow you to continue your friendship after the marriage?'

Prem 'Sanjana and Heer studied together. Sanjana knows about my friendship with Heer and she won't say any objection.'

Preet tried to explain but Prem stopped him 'Preet, it going to happen after two year. I can make Sanjana to understand about that. don't worry. She will understand.'

Prem hugged Preet and went to board the flight. Prem slipped into sleep as soon as the flight took off.

On the other side, Heer is sitting in Veera's house. She is staring at her mobile. 'Heer, why can't you switch on the mobile and talk to Prem instead of staring it?'

Heer 'I don't want to.'

Veera 'do you think you can manage without him.' she smiled 'you cannot live without fighting with him.'

Heer smiled 'now I have to concentrate on my studies. Soon I'll forget him. anyway he is going to marry Sanjana. I cannot fight with him after his marriage.'

Veera 'Sanjana is not a perfect partner for Prem.'

Heer 'soon she will adjust. Prem can change her by his love. I know about Prem.'

Veera 'Heer you are in love with Prem.'

Heer shocked 'no. we grew up together and this is the first time we are staying away. so I'm feeling little bit disturbed.' Heer cut in further discussion about Prem and started concentrating on the preparation.

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maneeshaF thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Nice one again.
Loved it .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
great

thnx 4 the pm




update soon



Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Very nice update !
Loved it !
I hope they realise their love soon !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
sinak thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Lovely update. Hope this is not Gaya3 plan to make them realize they love each other. Just a feeling. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
awsome.
I hope both would realise their love for each other soon...
Update soon....
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Nice one again.
Loved it .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
hiii selvy
nice update
waiting for the next updatde
pls update soon

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