New ff love at first sight chapter 52 on page 152 - Page 7

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Lovely! Wow u r updating everyday. Thanks. Hope they kiss..

awesomee part..:-)
u left the story in an interesting state...
cant wait to read the next prt..
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omg.......they r going to kiss right......but prem shouldn't allow her if he is going t omarry sanjana..............do continue soon..........thanks for the pm

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Lovely! Wow u r updating everyday. Thanks. Hope they kiss..
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Chapter 6

Heer looked at prem and then closed her eyes and then they kissed each other hungrily and passionately after a long time they broke out because they were feeling breathless and heer was smiling at prem and she started kissing prem on his throat and this was making prem go weak on his knees and he made his way to the side of the road to one of the tree and he put heer down and made her stand against the tree and they started kissing first gently and then passionately and then prem made his way with his trembling lips to her throat and kissed her even more passionately and then after an hour or so they started to walk again with their hands entwined with each others, because the weather was getting worse and it was thunder and lightning and then they saw some light and went towards that direction to find shelter.

When they reached the place they saw a beautiful old big house and they knocked on the door after a few minutes a old lady in her early 60's came to open the door and asked "ghar se bhag ne ke baad mera hi darwaza mila tha kya choopna kay liye" she said it in angry tone and heer looked at the lady with amusement because she didnt understand Hindi because her parents never taught her Hindi. Prem gave heer a quick mean look and then faced the old lady and said "actually vo hamari car kharab ho gayi hai or mera phone bhi dead hai tau humme ek kamra chahiye tha raat bitane ke liye kyunki mausam khrabh hai isliye" he said this in a very soft tone which touched the old lady's heart and she asked "yeh teri biwi hai"and prem looked at heer and then he put his arm around her waist and said "yes I mean jee haan yeh meri biwi hai or yeh London ki rahni wali hain tau isliye" he said indicating about her clothes. In this whole time heer was looking at prem and then to the old lady she didn't have a clue about their conversation.

Then the old lady let them in and she showed them their room and gave them some clothes and asked them to join her for dinner when the old lady left prem gave heer her clothes and asked her to change. Heer went to the bathroom and changed into salwar kameez and then shouted "premmmmmmm" and prem came towards the bathroom door and said "don't tell me that you have met your best friend again" he said this in a naughty smile. And heer opened the door and said "can you ever talk politely" prem said "yeah with those who are polite" he said in a sarcasm. Heer said "well anyways I don't have time to waste on you so lets get to the point" prem said "finally you are coming to the point well I'm sensing that you need a help?"heer gave him a fake smile and said "well I cant do my kameez's back laces....." without letting heer continue he made her turn around and did her back laces (dori).and then heer asked him about his and old lady's conversation and he told her and she was shocked to hear that he told her that she is his wife and heer turned towards prem and she put her arms around his neck and brought her face closer to his and said "So my dear hubby could you.... before she continued prem interrupted her and said "look missy you perfectly know that neither I am your hubby and nor you are my wife so" heer went even more closer to him and she kissed him and then she said "well So" prem moved his hands towards heer's waist and he quickly picked her up in his arms and they both went down stairs to join the old lady for dinner.

awesome part...
so premeer started to feel for each other
cool waitin for the next part
update soooooooon no sooneeeeer