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Posted: 15 years ago


Hey guys.......Is baar update jaldi ka rahi hoon cause i promised
Mehak and ashifa.......So here is the next Chapter as i Promised...😛
This CHapter is Dedicated to them......😉



PART 43







Prem:-Maine pocha kaun hai woh........(he yelled at her)
Heer:- woh ...prem woh..uska naam.............Mai.....
Prem:- Woh kaun hai..?? Prem yelled at her, holding her from her arms.
Heer:- Mai tumhi us se milwati hoon......(saying this heer freed herself from
his grip and dargged him towards the dresser and stood in front of mirror.
Prem was standing behind her in and looking at her in angrily.


Slowly Heer held his hand and placed it on her stomach and smiled shyly
looking at him in mirror.He was SHOCKED, surprised, Disbelief, Confused.
He was still not getting what does she mean by this. It took him a few minutes
to realise that He is going to be a PAPA.


"Iska matlab......mera matlab...tumhara matlab ......Mai..tum...HUM Mommy
Daddy.... banni.... wale... hai" HE said each and every word with a pause in
between and grinning at her. His cheeks were aching a bit from grinning so
widely but it doesn't mattered to him. Heer nodded as heat raised to her cheeks
cause of his reaction.He hugged her from back soo tightly and squeezed her
in his embrace.

"sambhal ki....."Heer said as she was about to fall cause his whole weight was
on her from back.She turned to face him,"Yeh sach haina....ya mai koi sapna dek
raha hoon" asked prem, "Yeh sapna nahii sach hai, Humare sapno se bhii ziyada
khubsurat" Heer answered back smiling reassuringly at him.


"Aik baar tum khud kaho na...." Prem was still not beleaving. " Ha baba, tumhara
matlab,Mera matlab, mai aur tum yani HUM bohut jald Mamma pappa banne wale
hai" Heer said as she Blushed. Prem hugged her as tears of joy brimmed in there
eyes, Heer rested her head on his heart while his hands rapped around her
protectively placing a kiss on her head.


Prem broke there hug and looked at her seriously, "Tum jo woh kuch der pehle
keh rahi thi uska kiya matlab tha" Heer laughed, "Mai bilkul sach keh rahi the,
Yahi tu hai jis se mai pyaar mai karti hoon" heer said plaing her hand on her belly.
Prem frowned first but them laughed. "Is se tu mai bhii bohut pyaar karta hoon,
likin mai tumhara pyaar iski saath bhii share nahii karonga"Prem said as he sat on
his knee in front of her whispering near her stomach, "samaj gaye Mr" kissing her stomach.


Heer smiled.."Kehte hai ki jab Do pyaar karni walo ki beech koi teesra ataa hai tu
woh unki darmiyaan dooriya barhata hai, likin yeh (placing hhis hand on her belly)
ye hum donno ko aur bhii ziyada kareeb le ayega, Humari Pyaar bhare lamho ki
jeete jaagthi nishani" prem placed his head on her stomach ang hugged her legs.
"Mere prem ki Nishaani, Humari Mohabbat Ki Nishaani, Humari chahat"Heer
complete his sentences and stroked his hairs.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

After a few days Premeer both came back to India where The wedding
preparations were on Full swings.Two wedding together was not as easy to
manage things a they all thought.Its been 2 days that prem and heer has
come back, Everyone is happy to have them back, But premeer both were not
able to Break the Good News to everyone.


Premeer both decided that today they are gonna tell Maa, she has the first right
to know about the new arrival, after all she is going to be a proud Grand Mother.
Prem and heer both came to Gmom room.


Prem:- Maa......(Gyetri was arranging her cupboard)
Gmom:- Ha beta ..(she glanced at them)
Prem and heer ere looking at each other confused to ho tell Mom...
Gayetri:- Kuch kaam tha donno ko....(gayetri broke the silence as none of them
were saying anything except staring at each other) Kuch kehna hai tum donno ko......??

Prem:- J..J....Ji Maa..woh..baat kya haina..woh..Heer ko appse kuch kehna tha.....
Heer's eyes shot up at him once, and sendind daggers through her eyes, How can
he do this?He was supposed to tell maa.
Gmom:- Ha bolo Heer beta....(Gayetri wlked towards her and stoof in front of
her")
Heer:- Mai..mujhe nahii..nahii..Prem ko baat karni thii...
Gayetri shifted her gaze towards prem, looking questioningly at him
Prem:- Nahii Maa..mujhe nahii heer ko kuch batana tha appko......
Heer:- Nah..nahii mai nahii prem ko baat karni hai.....
Gayetri was confused and stood still without saying anything.....


Prem:- heer tumhi ma se baat karni thee..(he said looking at heer)
Heer:- Kamre mai tumni kaha tha ki tum maa se baat karogi.........
Mai nahii.....
Prem:- Heer mai maa se akise baat kar sakta hon is baare mai......
Heer:- Premmmm......tumne kaha tha na...ab tum peeche kaise hat sakti hoo.....
Prem- Mai Maa se kaise kehsakta hoon ki Mai Baap banne wala hoon....
Heer:- Ha tu phir mai keh sakti hoon ki woh Dadi banne wali hai.........

Prem and Heer noth start fighting completely forgetting that where they were
standing, and who was with them. While they were fighting over who is gonna
tell Maa about Heer's pregnancy, Gmom was confused at first that what are they
talking about but at last the spell the beans,There was no bound to Gmom's
happiness after what she heard, Junior prem is coming..Her chota prem is coming,
She is going to be a Dadi.

Gmom:- Heer...kiya kaha tune.....
Heer and prem stopped suddenly and looked at each other while realization dawn
upon them, Her and prem both rurned to Gayetr staring towards the floor,Heer
nodded a yes to gayetri, Gayetri hugged Her in happiness and kissed her forehead, After bestowing her love and blessing on Heer, she turned towards prem who was smiling looking at them


Gayetri pulled prem's ear, "kyon .....Mere betee ko kyon satta raha tha ..huh" prem
winced "Ouch.......Maa mai bhii tu appka beta hoona..." heer tried not to laugh at
prem."likin Heer ka palra bhare hai..woh akele nahii, uski saath koi aur bhii hai"
Gayetri said referring to baby,Heer blushed, "jo hai uski parwaah nahii, aur jo
ayaa bhii nahii uska saath de rahi hoo app Maa" Prem said pouting, gayetri was
still pulling his ear but left it and laughed at him.

After Gmom went out to announce the good news to everyone, Heer laughed at
prem.prem watched her quietly, Her laughter was like music to his ear, He was
the happiest man in the world, He didn't mind that his Wife was laughing at him,
he didnt mind that his mother pulled his ear when he himself was goig to be father. What mattered the most to him was just Her Happiness and the New Life living
inside his beloved wife.

~~

After knowing that Heer is expecting, The whole family came and congratulate
them Now there was not only two weddings to celebrate but also the new Baby
is on its way to come and bring lots of happiness in there Lives, especailly Premeer.


Premeer shifted from upstairs to the guest room downstairs, cause Gmom has
restricted heer to walk the stairs, she was on complete Bed rest other than her
Lamas classes and an evening walk with her hubby aside. Armaan and Ashlisha
Aditya and Naina happily got married without any problims, Aditya's parents
accepted Naina and Aslisha as there own daughters.Veera was happy with Nihaal
their married life was going smoothly without any tensions.

Morning sickness, Mood swings and craving for silly things was smething
that prem got used to it thanks to Heer. Whether she demanded Rasgulla
in Mid Night or wanted to eat Ice cream early in the morning her life time
servant, Prem was always beside her to fulfill her wishes.

Sometimes Heer felt bad that because of her he has to get up and go
insearch of her favourite chocolate ice cream in 2:00 am, But she cant help
it after all its not her fault, the baby does not belong to her only, it was there
baby, Let him do some "Khatirdaari, kaun sa hamisha ki liye karne wala hai"
she always smiled when this thought came in her mind.

~~

Prem came from office and found his beautiful wife laying on bed and watching
TV.Just looking at her was enough to forget all his tiredness and exhaustion of
the day.She smiled as she saw him, He move towards her throwing his coat on the couch.

Prem:- How is my my beautiful wife ?(he asked kissing her forehead)
heer:- Beautiful??? Mai tumhi beautiful nazar atii hoon.........(heer said
saracastically)Itni Moti hogaye hoon......
Prem laughed:- Moti nahii, Tandurust hogaye hoo tum aur mera baby...(placing a kiss
on her swelled stomach, and got up to change)
Prem came back after changing his cloths and sat beside her on bed.
Prem:- ajj poora din kya kiya? (prem asked heer)
Heer:- kuch khaas nahii bas, SRK ki saath lunch kiya, Dhoni ki saath evening tea
aur uski baad soch rahi hoon Dinner ki liye .........Tom cruise ki saath chali jawo....
Prem:- Woww.. kafi exciting din tha tumhara, likin Dinner wala kuch theek
nahii laga agar tum Tom cruise ki saath uski Cruise par jawogi tu is ghareeb ki
Nayaa doop jayegi...

Wasnt it enough for Heer to stay in her room all day and watch TV, that now he
is irratating her.He winced as she pinched him in his arm with a frown on her face

prem:-sorry....(holding his ears)
heer smiled and hugged him arm from side...
heer:- ajj mai kitna bore horahi thii. maa tu kuch kaam karne nahii detee, tum
office mai hoti hoo, ghar mai baaqi sab ko bhii kaam hota hai...(she complained)
prem:- I Promise heer tumhare Delivery se aik mahine pehle aur aur aik mahine
baad tak mai office se chutti lelonga...
Heer:- Promise........
Prem:- pakka promise...........(kissing her head and notices a note book on the bed, hepicks it up
and reads it loudly)

Roshan...
Vaid....
Dev.....
Suraj.....
Aarav........


prem:- yeh sab kya hai heer?
heer:- yeh woh naam hai jo mujhe bohut pasand hai......
Prem:- Mujhe laga tumhi sirf Prem pasand hai......
He laughed as heer hit him on his arm.....
heer:- yeh naam humare Baby ki liye hai..in mai se aik naam hume seleck
karna hai.....
Prem:- likin yeh tu saare ladko ki naam hai........
Heer:- Haa tu??
Prem:- hume tu ladkiyo ki naam dhondne chahiye na...Akhir humareii tu Beteee honi
wali hai....
Heer:- Tumse se kisne kaha ki betee hogii....(raising her head from his shoulder)
Prem:- Mere betee hai, Mujhe patta hai....(he said proudly)
Heer:- I am sorry Mr.Juneja..likin Betee nahii beta hoga.....(she said crossing her
arms)
Prem:- My sweet wife, mere home wali betee ki hone wali Mommy, Pehle betee
phir beta...

Heer:- Pehle betee phir beta.........(she said loudly) Khabardaar jo dosre bachchi ka naam bhii liya tu..Kitni takleeft hoti hai...kuch ehsaas bhii hai tumhi..........aur dosra bachcha chahiye tu khud he paida karlo...
Prem laughed and hugged her from side:- Yeh tu mai agle saath janmo mai bhii
nahii kar sakta akele...its a Joint venture ....(She blushed) Mujhe tumhare madad
ki zarrorat parigee
Heer:- tumhe sharam bilkul nahii atte na??(she said facing him)
Prem:- Atte hai...bohut atte hai.....likin tumhi Dekh kar chali jaate hai........


Saying this He pressed his lips against her and kissed her showering his love on Her
and Thanking her for giving the most beautiful gift of his life.

~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~
Well How was that....At first i had other idea but after so many
Guesses i changed my idea and made Heer preganant, warna
jo mai karni wali the uski baad mera jeena thodha mushkil he hojata.😆

PS. Next chapter will the last one...after that The END....
it means its the second last chapter...😔


WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS..
LOVE NEHA..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update neha...waiting for the next one!
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Posted: 15 years ago

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii neha

me second to coment
yupieeeeee.............
awesome update
loved it ........................
this update is really cute , sweet and funny
totaly fab ...................
well waiting for the last chapter
i think they will havwe twins so that both prem and heer will be completed 😆
pls update soon
Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
u r lucky u did not use Heer's disease angle, warna hum Deshians tumhari band baja dalte!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amu142

u r lucky u did not use Heer's disease angle, warna hum Deshians tumhari band baja dalte!



I knew that..thats why i took the safer Road......😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -vandy-

very nice update neha...waiting for the next one!



Glad you liked it............will try to update sooon....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh gosh prem is so cute meraa matlab tumhara matlab hamara matlab hiihihihih

loved it the way they were fgtinh infront of gmom hihihihihi so silllyyyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the way they fought in front of gmom....
i felt bad after last update as prem might misunderstand Heer as always...
thank you ...and by the way why heer was looking for boys name only!!!
i want a baby girl for them....😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
FF is ending😭

Awesome updateeeeeeeee
loved premeer cute fight and premeer scene
aweosmeee updateeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
heer pregnent
prem usko ithni achi tarah kayal raktha hai
i love u premmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
ummaaaaaaaaaaaaa
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz end this ff yaar
plz continue
update the next part asap

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