New FF Mein Hoo Na Chapter 5 pg.15 Aug.3 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
nice concept
pls contiue
and update soon
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
great concept.....would luv to read...nd if u plan on making a PM list then count me in...thnxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh so its inspired by the film MAin Hoon NAa...
but sounds quite cool...
do continue soon and let me know...

regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEY PLEZZZ Continue soon thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome loved the concept do continue soon pm me when you update


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys im really happy that u guys like this idea the truth is that i got this idea in Humaities calss and than i told my sis and she told me to go 4 it i hope u guys like the first chapter.

Chapter 1
"Plzz call in Major Prem" said the leader of the Indian army "yes sir" said the officer and than Prem Juneja came. Prem Juneja he is tall, handsome ofcourse, he is rich but he still wants to work even with so much money that he can last this life time but he thinks that he cant live on his fathers money and bissnuess so he joind the army. When he came in MR. Mann "yes sir u called me?" asked Prem "yes Prem" and he handed Prem a picture of his daughter "sir" said Prem "Prem this is my daughter im sure now that we have one of the members from the biggest terorisset gang they will try to use my daughter against me to get there gang member back and i dont want that to happen so i am sending u on a mission" he said "wht kind of mission sir" said Prem "u have to protect my daughter nd go to her school be friends with her and at the right time tell her that i have sent u cause if u dont theres no way that she will let u come near her " he said "ofcourse sir u wish is my commaned" said Prem and was about to go when Mr.Maan stoped him "Prem" he said "yes sir" Prem replied "dont take anything my daughter Heer says personaly she is very different from other girls and u r in each one of her classes in collage i know that u quite collage so u can be in the army but this way u can protect Heer and get ur studies done too. Good Luck my boy nd be careful" he said "yes sir" said Prem and left. He was packing his bags and left 4 the airport, when he was in the plane he was thinking "wow this is going to be a long mission i need to think of a way to get close to her and by the way sir discribed her it will be hard but no one can risist Prem Juneja and niether can she" he thought and went to sleep.
Precap (Hay my friend was sitting here" said Heer "so now i am" said Prem "get off" said Heer "make me" said Prem "ohh sorry i dont make trash i barrie it" said Heer "okay so thats how u want to talk well let me tell u miss i think im so cool i-" but he got interuped by the teacher "wht is all this fuss?" asked the teacher "Mr.Johal he came and sat here when everyone in this class knows that Meera sits here" said Heer "but from now on Prem will sit here okay now no more talking" he said and went. "suker" said Prem "WHT did u SAY?" asked Heer)
plzzzzzzzz tell me how it was thanks
Edited by Happy_pretty - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Me first to comment
Awesome update
Keep it up and update soon
Pm me when you update
By the way The part is quite short

Paddo
Edited by Heerbeauty - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooh!!
this is gonna b so cool!!
PJ thinks no one can resist him!!
ha ha!! u hv another thing coming buddy!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome
Thanks for da PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heerbeauty

Me first to comment<br>Awesome update<br>Keep it up and update soon<br>Pm me when you update<br>By the way The part is quite short<br><br>Paddo<br>


ya i know sry i had to make it short because kis Desh was comming on here in Canada at 9:30 so i wanted to watch it

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