~Nafrat Ki Aag~ PH: FF Page 3, Part 1 (12/01) NEW!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys! I was thinking of staring a new fanfic on Premeer. This is going to be the title. I will update the concept pretty soon. Right now, I am trying to finish my pre-calc hw. Then I will start on the concept. I really liked this idea. But it's going to be a FF mostly on Prem and Heer. This one might not be that lovey-dovy throughout but love is the central theme. Along with love in revenge. So please do reply and tell me about your views. I promise you that I will continue my other fanfics as I have let Obsession on a loose. But will update it also. Anyways thanks for reading my pathetic backwaas. But do tell me your views. Will update soon. Do read!! Thanks!





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Shilpa Agnihotri hspace5 Aarti Juneja (played by Shilpa Agnihotri)- 28 yrs old.
Aarti is the eldest bahu of the Juneja Family. She is a widow. She is Prem's bhabhi and best friend. She loves Prem as if he's her own kid. She is very kind hearted and she never wants her family to be sad. Even though she knows that her husband was killed in vein, she has taken life in a sporting way and she is concentrating to improve the life of her daughter, Komal.
Pratham Juneja (played by Amit Sareen)- 29 years old (only 24 when he died)
He is the eldest son of the late Lalit and Gayatri Juneja. He is dead in the story (maybe for now😉). But when he was alive, his wife, brother, and dauther were everyhing for him. He was very attached to Prem and after his father, he considered himself as his father. He loves his wife a lot. Not because she is very understanding, but because she is like a mother to his baby brother. Through some tragic incidents, he is killed by the Mann Family.
Komal Juneja (5 1/2 yrs old.)
She is the only daughter of Aarti and Pratham. She is extremely close to her chachu Prem. She is his stress reliever. Prem loves her the most in the whole wide world.
Prem Juneja (played by Harshad Chopra)- 23 yrs old.
He was once the kindest guy on earth. He still is, but when he comes in terms with the death of his father-like brother, his anger is uncontroable. Since the day he saw his brother's dead body, his bhabhi ma's uncontroable tears, and his niece's innocent cries, he had made up his mind. He was going to get his revenge from the Mann's. No matter what! He would go to any extent to get his revenge from Balraj Mann, the killer of his brother. His true self didn't matter to him at all when it came to them. But he was sure for one thing, his brother, his bhabhi ma, and his Komal didn't deserve this. This was wrong and it would always be that way. Always!
Heer Mann (played by Aditi Gupta)- 22 yrs old.
Heer is a sweet, traditional girl who is very down to earth. She hasn't spent much time with her family because of the way girls are treated in her own house. Her mom had sent her away to America to do her further education. She wanted her daughter to be away from the truth of her family. Heer doesn't know anything about how conservative her father really is. Her father, for his child's well-being, has to keep her away from him. Balraj Mann didn't want her daughter to know the truth. Her mom has kept her away from this truth since forever.
But she didn't know that one day, she would become the victim of her father's crime! She didn't know that one person would turn her world upside down! She didn't know how deep the scare would leave her with! All she knew was how to love. For her, love seemed to be her life. And for him, his revenge was all he could concentrate on. He wanted shir revenge. His brother's life was going to cost the Mann's a life, a life that would be very dear to them.
But beneath all this, was another truth. Balraj Mann's secret. A secret that he told to no one except his wife. The had a purpose of doing what they had to do. He wouldn't have done it if it wasn't for his child. Whatever he did, he did for Heer's sake.
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Updates
Pg 1- Character Sketch
Pg 3- Part 1
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ROBlicious. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awsomeee Yaar Do continue and Always PM me =)
Will comment later kinda bussy =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey it sounds great please update soon
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can't wait 4 da first part...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey
Awesome Nice
Do COntinue soon
Do Pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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do continue soon and do pm me and plz update lahoo Banke Aansoo. I am wating for that update and good luck with pre cal hw. OMG you are doing pre cal. I don't even want to remember my pre cal days. 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The Character Sketch is updated!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great character dketch


cant wait 4 the 1st part


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Palchin,

Seems like a great story coming up and as you term your work as "pathetic bakwas" let me tell you there are many people just like me who just love reading your 'bakwas' as your a great writer who has the potential of keeping her readers glued to her work anxious for new updates.
Cant wait for it !!!
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i loved the concept
do continue it
and pm me
great idea👏

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